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I'm sure Luna could have told them that!
Loch Skimmer
Piña. There
Was Bucky about to tell Twilight to piss off? I think he was. Ah, grandpa Barley. Well, that's several foals and one kelpie that's going to be spoiled rotten!
Just how long can a kelpie stay underwater?
And since its a kelpie foal, will the birth be in the water?
The scene at the end with Lyra and Barley was nice. He is such a relatable character, it makes him easy to read.
Your stories are all so great. I'm thinking of re-reading Chase from the beginning. Then When I catch up again, there will be another 20 chapters for me to read :)
Ah... good old happy family scenes, these are what make it worth it. Even if I get uncomfortable twinges about inevitable conflicts of interest between Bucky and Twilight.
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A very long time. Kelpies don't need air when they are in their merpony form.
Mmm this chapter is perfect for melting hearts. I can totally relate to finding a place of your own after years and years of searching. Good stuff.
I just realized: Tomorrow they probably get to meet Pinkie Pie. I'm not sure if I should be terrified or not. Somehow I expect Pinkie to pop up suddenly, only to have Ripple deck her out of reflex!
I also do wonder how Rarity has taken everything, given that one of her lifelong ambitions was to become or marry into nobility. Now that she knows what the nobles were up to, I wonder if she considers herself lucky. I also do wonder if Fancy Pants and Fleur exist in this universe and what happened to them.
BTW, if you've seen the leaked Rainbow Rocks images, Kelpies! ;)
Frack...i´ll need more kleenex...
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We will be seeing Fancy Pants and Fleur. They're fine. Well, they are broke, but they are fine. And happy. Don't worry too much about it.
This chapter was so sweet, I think a tooth just fell out.
My one major criticism of this chapter is that I think "wind up' should be hyphenated. :)
AHAHAH!!! COMPUTER AND INTERNET!!! for 20 minutes...
Barley seems like a great pony. :3
For added happiness, Type like fluffle puff.
Take that depression!!!
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Prone also means to be helpless or exposed.
5049506 Fancy Pants- considering Jet Set and Uppercrust had their horns sawed off while still conscious, Fleur and i would be content even if we were living amongst the Sweet Apple Acres bovines. To be honest i am more than slightly crossed. The moment this whole fiasco started i begun to move quite a bit of resource to protect the common folk, as is the duty to someone who has resource and a position. Despite my efforts i was stripped of said resources. Cannot help but feel something is off with Celesltia as of late. She has not been showing her typical levels of leniency or empathy. Why even dear Twilight Velvent and Night Light have lost everything they owned. They were the ponies least involved in the scandle and, even more so, Twilight Velvet managed to pulverize one of the members of Avarice before they hid inside of their little bunker. I at least presumed their loss of resources was only temporary, considering Twilight Sparkle is practically Celestia's daughter and the efforts of those two during this whole fiasco. Yet it has been weeks since they lsot everything and everything is still gone. I admit i had part to play in the fiasco, and blinded myself to the harm it was causing, yet they were not involved.
Last time i had this feeling it turned out Cadance had been replaced by a changeling queen, as shining was acting very odd at the time. Yet who could possibly befuddle Celestia's mind?
apologies if none of these events or things are true, it is just a strange thought that came to my mind.
5049506 ......your story triggers strange thoughts.
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it should just say exposed or vulnerable, then; laying prone is a different term, and it leads to confusion. From an editor's standpoint, you need to keep it as succinct as possible. No ambiguity. (At least as far as things that are explicitly defined go. Ambiguity in the STORY is fine.)
"how do you know?" asked bucky, Barley grinned at the question "me and Luna tested it several times, i might be old but not to old to pleasure a mare... don't you worry, we cleaned it well"
I can't help but feel that Sentinel was left out. I was looking forward to seeing how Barely took to him. I guess that is another thing for another chapter.
I think I'm going to enjoy this arc. I get the feeling that you will as well.
I'd be more insightful, but reading this story is like trying to drink from a fire hose.
Looking forward to more.
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YOU FOUND THE MARBLE IN THE OATMEAL!
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OPEN WIDE!
*gets blasted off chair*
Dear Faust, this story still isn't finished?
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Not even halfway.
I love it that you didn't make Lyra obsessive with hands or with any knowledge on humans. Few stories do and you wrote her into a pretty cool pony to be around. She still retains some of her craziness but it's more due to her being a unicorn, and for that I salute you sir.
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I notice a striking similarity between Bucky's school and Hogwarts. Was this intentional?
This chapter had some really good moments. Barley telling Bucky he looks like shit and Bucky laughs in return is powerful because of the subtleties. Bucky is passed the hardships of the Ilses and recovered. That was pretty neat when I noticed it.
You writing always continues to impress me.
Rising, stop fucking in Barley's bed.
I am happy to go back to those first 52 chapters, I still remember them. I feel the time will be short, but oh well.
Hahaha xD I am so happy to be able to read about Barley again, he's one of my favorite characters ever heeheehee, nice job man, nice job!
Lotta feelz in this chapter.
This chapter is super comfy.
*hasnt read the next few chapters*
When Barley dies Im gonna cry like a wuss.
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did yiu get to it yet?
uh no offense to bucky but i hope he DOESNT stay as a teacher. mostly cause thats boring as heck.