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I give in. There hasn't been a single chapter so far that hasn't satisfied. Somehow, you've managed to get romance, crude humor, world building and the odd bit of cute all into the same story, without having any of it stick out or seem unecessary. Have the favorite; you've earned it.
I would have thought that they would need to refill the bath multiple timesto get clean. Also I'm starting to read the title in the voice of the Rockapella group.
Barley is a great character.
stuck, or maybe sticking
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I think this chapter was the only good news for me today...
4431287 I second this. Non stop quality with no negative qualities i can identify.
*Sighs* I suppose I should look into getting the materials for a statue of you, because we need to worship you like the FIMfic god you are.
you certainly made me laugh, but now i dont think i can have chocolate ever again...
oh who am i kidding? i'm going to go make a chocolate milk
That bed though...
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I had to find a dignified way for Barley to stay in the story. His fate, as I mentioned previously, was undetermined. Well, he and Luna.
So he is here to stay, still not sure about Luna. No matter which way I go, people will complain.
bucky knows what candance did
kudzuhaiku, I applaud you. You've written a wonderful story, a fantastic chapter, and while the wedding chapter felt a little rushed this felt good. A good clean fantastic read. It was a nice pace. That said, the way you've woven the story reminds me of Buddy Hackett.
A clever story, rich with crude humor, and still wonderful to read, and in Buddy's case listen to.
Thank you.
- LF
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Bucky knows that Cadance used odd magic.
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I know, right?
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Aw, that's not good. What's wrong?
4431451 bucky is smart, Princess of love + odd magic + the smell of mares on heat = one very suspicious unicorn
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Oh, Barley knows... But he is old and worldly.
And if you have seen the blog post, you know the results of this particular bit of magic.
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Clickity.
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Which is why when it comes down to it you have to listen to your characters. Reader input is important, but in the end it's the characters that decide how the story is going to play out. If Luna wants to stay in the story let her stay in the story. I don't know if she would want to make Barley a consort or not, but it's obvious that the two like each other. I can see her developing a deep friendship with him. Maybe more, but at the very least a deep and meaningful friendship.
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They share old world values.
Luna's views are about a thousand years out of date, and Barley spent much of his youth on the Isles, where the views are also about one thousand years out of date.
So... Much in common.
Friends. Maybe.
Sorry, there is only a few things I took from this.
1) Barely is still screwing Luna, possibly having a foal between then. (which explains the 'x')
2) Derpy and Berry may need gagging next time.
3) Berry's ear got stuck to her face.
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No. The X means something different. That foal is... special.
I really hope the happy trio rehydrates throughly. Water, not juice. They lost a lot of fluids, after all.
In any case, this act seems to be winding down, and it's left me with a warm fuzzy feeling in my heart. (For the most part. I still feel that Berry should get some degree of punishment beyond getting married.) Bucky's early morning nonchalance was a joy to see.
Looking forward to more.
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Shetland Isles. Punishment awaits.
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And a bit of role reversal for all the times they carried him.
*clap clap clap*
XD JUST AWESOME AND FUNNY XD
I loved the last few paragraphs in this chapter!
Have I told you how much I love this story yet? Because I do.
4431515 basically failed on two tests (won't ruin my grades really, just ruined a good chance to get better grades) worked 10 times more than I'm used to on homework. And saw my friends (who I for 3 years tried to keep together) grew more distant again. That was my day, I was actually about to snapp, but the reading helped me to calm down (i could include my disease in this buuuut, I type very slow on my phone, but I guess some of my symptoms makes it worse :P)
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Message me privately if you never need to talk to somebody. I can't do much, but I can listen.
4432525 if I would, I could just write a story, probably a slice of life comedy tragedy :p (it looks like a small chunk of my right legg is missing, which is true) but what is really sad about all this is: after at least 6 surgeries, sitting in some metal thing for the first six months of my life, really wired right legg (don't have a picture avaleble ATM) and years of ppl being bullied and teased I'm still pretty much the bad-ass of my class. xD
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I have a fucked up mostly paralysed left leg that I have to wear a prosthetic for.
I have a skull and bones Jolly Roger on the back of my prosthetic leg. I advertise my badassery.
4432593 my right legg is my good legg xD believe it or not :P
4432593 I read the reply a second time... Wow, I feel truly sorry for you :(
Holy literal buck... Again. .-.
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Dude...you should totally paint it up like an Iron Man suit!
I think 'Stuck In The Middle With You' by Stealers Wheel is highly applicable to this chapter, if not the whole story. Though, how about this alteration to the chorus?
Unicorns to the left of me,
pegasi to the right,
here I am,
stuck in a threesome with you.
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If there was a diamond dog it could be "me and you and a dog named blue"
4433330 And then they go at doggystyle? :P
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Doggy style is very knotty
4433436 At least they won't bitch and moan afterwards.
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Go read Pegasus Pride you pervert!
4431352 gg Kudzu no care for my sleep cycle
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i hope things get better for you
Have i ever mentioned how impressed i am at your writing speed? I read another fic for a bit, and you upload 4 chapters. There is no way i could write that much in that amount of time, let alone at your level of quality.
4434378 Just one more surgery and half a year of shots (syringes, idk what word to use here) Then I just have two a little bit weird legs, then it's mostly over. So things will get better pretty soon
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That's good to hear, I hope the surgery good well.
4434759 Thank you.
Barley can say he's now had the greatest shag in his life by having his fun with Luna.
To Mush Stickiness
The afterbath was...silly