How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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One too many periods.
So, we were wrong? It's not Twilight? Or is that just something to throw us off the path?
Also, That bonding of Sentinel, Bucky, and the foal was brilliant.
I find myself intrigued by the primal displays of the meat-eating ponies.
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There are lots of scholars.
You read the word too literally.
Twilight is THE Scholar.
See the difference? Lyra just wants to learn stuff.
Edit: now I am worried that a footnote is needed for clarity.
4839331 Eh, I just read into stuff too much sometimes. But yeah, I see the difference.
Man I really feel like I should have realized that with his eyesight. He is now partially nocturnal.
Also, that fucking moment man. The alpha male takes care of his new offspring and another of his offspring approach. Does it intend to harm it's new sibling out of jealousy? It shows that it is submissive to its alpha and its father by exposing itself. The alpha is pleased that its child knows it's place and rewards it with affection. The older one approaches the new babe and bonds with it, learning it's scent so to know and remember it is part of the pack (or herd in this case) and is to be protected. Then the alpha shows his love for the mother to reassure her that he will protect and provide for the babe and her.
Gave me the fucking shivers man, good job.
Another great chapter
I totally missed the eyesight stuff. Could you explain it, please? Now I'm lost...actually a lot lost....
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Many predators have terrible day vision.
Bucky underwent some changes when his teeth changed.
We will see more of them manifest over time. He's a bit like Sentinel now.
4839427 I thought that it was due the lost eye...deep perception and such. At least once, in the lake, Derpy helped him when could not see right how deep the water was, due to missed eye. When the battle came, i just thought that it was the first time that he nedeed all his sight working at full, and it failed him, pretty much in the same way his legs are falling him when they´re nedeed to work at full power.
Kudzu, you stated, VERY clearly, that Bon Bon and Lyra will not be shagged, but as the story keeps going i´m feelling that this will become a harder and harder. Let´s see how you´ll solve that.
Again, thanks for the update !
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What was displayed here had more to do with familial and herd bonding... not sex.
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Thanks!! I feel like so many of those nuances go over my head!
4839522 It is already resolved.
Remember that spell Bucky has that let's the other mares feel everything that is happening to them?
That way he can still have the bonding experience that mating brings without crossing that line.
Bottom line - if it happens it happens, if it doesn't it doesn't.
That went less pony and more lion. I imagine as intended. That was a very cool chapter.
I just realized how terrible Derpy is being to Bucky in regards to Thistle- outwardly and openly keeping secrets from him and breaking the fundamental rules of marriage. Never mind her babying Thistle; her real crime is insulting Bucky's trust by keeping her "Mare business" away from him. Any pretense of being protective is obliterated by the number of times she's insulted him like that. And worst of all, she gets away with it!
Beautiful. Fantastic. Good chapter, Best story.
No typos were found in the reading of this story.
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Yes, but she is getting better and growing as a character. Look how she has already changed.
4839780 Don't forget that she confessed to Berry that she was afraid that Bucky would not take no for an answer when she did not want him to be with Thistle. That is extremely insulting to his character, and again when he says that Lyra and Bonbon had to have one of his children to join she immediately assumes he would rape them to get his way. She must think very think very little of his self control and and his thought of others feelings...
4839331 Dude please answer me on this one: how can you be so productive? You are posting two chapters a day, what kind of beverage are you drinking to boost yourself up? I'm just at the beginning of this story and it keeps getting longer and longer... This is a real chase for me...
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Not rape. Just concern for the other mares being forced into a decision.
Derpy has some subtle trust issues that are getting better as she grows. She's flawed, and she is starting to admit that.
I'd love to make more in-depth comments if you gave me time to analyze the story. When you produce ten chapters in three or four days, it's all I can do to keep up!
In any case, fascinating stuff. Eagerly looking forward to more.
Slow clap.
Very primal sir, I like it. Few authors can replicate, with words, the unseen tenderness of predators.
thanks for the update!!
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Well this is problematic!
hugs:17
Soo Bucky got grated with feline bits?
Someone give him a ball of yawn
I know Shadow Sombra's secret weapon now.
"HAHA! You may have slain my wolves, but you will never have anticipated my plan Buckminster! This weapon, that I created myself, will render all of your defences useless! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA!!!!!"
*throws a ball of yarn at Bucky*
*Gasp!!* "NOOOO!!!!!!"
"MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAA!!!!!!!"
Right now from all the tongue licking action I'm seeing I just hope that tufts of fur doesn't accumulate in his mouth and he cougs up a magically charged hairball. Assuming not only his taste buds but the structure of his tongue changed.
Awww, that little bonding moment made me smile, hehehe...
Pony Pride
Nice job brosef!
I noticed the change, I just didn't say anything at the time :P
hehe
I noticed the change, i was just to caught up in the story to say anything.
What's up with the "haha Bucky is a cat" commentary? This seems like pretty canine business to me.
I always liked that scene, and any similar to it. I've always been a fan of stories about hyperintelligent animals (Ratha's Creature comes to mind) and when the switch is flipped and you can get away with using the word "primal" then that just makes it all the better.
I actually picked up on the poor day vision. Tits been 2 years but i hope knowing someone got your drift makes you happy.
Here in chapter 123.
Infants should be infant's.
Normally, I wouldn't have commented until I saw a comment that said they had not located any typos.