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Stop making everything so sad god damn it
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Sad?
lot of
Now I hate the store owner even fucking more.
"Oh, I lost one of my Employees to the trouble this trash Mud Pony Caused"
"My Daughter was murdered by her 'brother' and his friends for trying to protect her earth pony friend. I am proud of her for what she did even though it cost her her life."
The Toy Store Owner can go get one of those 8 foot candy canes shoved ALLLLLLLLLL the way up his plothole.
5607409 Yes , Sad, You monster
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Monster?
5607429 Quite so.
5606818 actually yeah. cause a dead rotten woodchuck would smell like food to a predator. anything else however.......
These recent two have been sad. I must remedy this with Christmas music.
My work here is done.
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Dogs love stinky stuff!
Well, things were bad during the collapse, now we know a bit more.
No! Cashmere!
But at least she did die doing the right thing. I knew she was a determined and brave little filly.
But this brother of hers better be on the watch...
Yes, we terrible, terrible only childs.
I have to wonder if the brother ever felt regret for what he did. Being swept up in a group demonstration can make you do thing you later wish you never did.
......... for some reason i couldn't help but rub my eyes when i red the part where the unicorns hung an earth pony...... for some reason i still cannot comprehend this strange disconnect to how earth ponies are handled in this story, yet their abilities that are presented in the story.
a pegasus would have probably killed half of its attackers in this situation. if faced with physical harm why would a earth pony not do the same?
even if we say that she was afraid, too afraid to fight, the earth ponies have always seemed to just do nothing despite being much stronger than even pegasi, having bone shattering power all the time.
i keep on getting this image of a rhinoceros running away from a lion despite the fact it has a giant ass spike on its face and the ability to squash a lion's head like a melon.
5607411 Vlad Tepes style! Deck the streets with bigots and wade in the blood of the damned singing carols of unity and peace. The thought gives me shivers of joy. 'shudder'
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Pegasi are the protectors of the other ponies, right? I don't think it would be easy for them to turn and lash out like that especially with all of the emphasis for the stronger tribes to rein in their power at all times to prevent them from hurting anyone. The same would probably go for the earth pony. Besides, nobody ever said she DIDN'T try to fight, but if she lived in Canterlot all her life then I don't imagine she knew how to fight back enough to make a difference. Besides, her attackers were unicorns, they could just levitate her out of reach.
I am glad I kept a tab open on my phone so I could read this sooner rather than later.
Seriously though, Cashmere why? She was a oneshot character who you feel for after you read how she dies. Damnit Kudz, you know how to keep us hooked.
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A young, scared, tenderhoofed and unarmed earth pony against a MOB of bloodlusting, empowered unicorns? What exactly do you not understand? That effectively a single child could not defend herself against an angry group of murderous adults with telekinesis? This is very simple. Not even a pegasus or unicorn with those same traits could have done anything. One regular and warm-hearted kid who has known no violence is suddenly confronted with a bunch of adults trying to kill them = The kid dies, period. It's only in movies that that doesn't happen, due to some timely arrival of someone who CAN handle the bad guys, or some deus ex machina escape.
5607589 ........ be honest i would imagine that would be immensely difficult to do. we have seen unicorns lift pretty heavy things before, but holding something is can actualy move and writhe would probably be difficult, especially if they were exceptionally strong. adjusting the field, sustaining it so it is not disrupted, so on and so on.
heck in the comics we have such a situation. twilight, a alicorn, struggling to keep a hold of pinkie pie, an earth pony.
other than that...... i just don't know. the earth ponies have the same, if not better, credentials as pegasi in the brute force department. seems as if the weaker ones became the aggressors while the stronger became abnormally passive.
5607554 I highly doubt any of the unicorns even physically touched the earth pony or her friend. And if any of them was beyond a type one, which Kudz has said is the majority of unicorns, the unicorn filly would have been outmatched. She died trying to save another; the noblest thing in the world.
That "or" looks out of place
And damn Kudz, “He hung his sister and her best friend from a lamp post along with his friends.”
Doesn't get much heavier than that.
5607653 those scenarios often do not have the victim actually capable of hurting the attackers either. she does not have to fly into a bunch of martial arts moves here, a panicked and amaturish attack would do. a pegasus of her age could kill an adult unicorn. and she is an earth pony.
and i already consceded that she was probably too scared, but throughout the story the earth ponies are for some reason bottom fo the food chain even in situations where that would not make sense for creatures with their strength.
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Makes perfect sense. Maybe in a 1v1 fight between adults an earth pony could take out the other two. But as tribes? Pegasi can fly, earth ponies are no danger to them. Unicorns can just levitate them and toss them off a building or something. No danger.
Point being, it's not about what you -can- do to someone that matters when it's several against one. I'm going to go out on a limb and say you've never been in a real fight, and if you have, you were never the one grossly outnumbered. I have been through many fights, several of which my life was on the line. I have been jumped and ganged up on pretty much every time. I am well-trained, certainly better than anyone who's tried to take me on physically. But the more you are outnumbered, the less that matters. The chances of you taking out one person in a group before you're bogged down by sheer numbers are astronomically low unless you can drop someone with a single hit, and make that hit before your arms or legs are restricted by the press of bodies or someone latching onto a limb, or even by being tackled while others prevent you from sidestepping.
The only way you get out of such a situation while unarmed is sheer ferocity. MAKE them back up, FORCE them to give you room while they evaluate how to take you without being hurt too badly again.
Ask me how ferocious and bloodthirsty a child looks to adults who want them dead.
It's not about her being scared, it's about the fact she's an untrained little girl. Depending on how young she was, the unicorns probably were stronger than her physically to begin with. Then there's the fact they're unicorns, they don't HAVE to grab her physically in the first place. There was literally no hope for her. She was dead the moment they closed in.
What is this, a month to mourn. First we lost a great man ,Monty Oum, and now every fic I read has some sorrow worked in just the right way to pluck at the ol hearstrings,( no not you Lyra). Sigh. In the words of Monty we just have to keep moving forward.
Kudz is the my little pony "George R. R. Martin"
Hipster minotours....
5608125 more like half blind minotaur trying to navigate a typewriter...
5608239
I am slightly more okay with that
Hanging your own sister. Hmm...that's a new one.
5607766 That was beautifully written.
I'm sure he WAS going to make a lewd remark but since he's a clever pony he played it off like a champ.
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Twilight's mom is worth coming back for seconds.
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And thirds and fourths and fifths and... what was I saying again? I got distracted.
An unfinished Pic from one of my favorite Anthro artists when a suggestion was made that Twilight Velvet and Button's Mom be the last two Contestants in a Hottest Mom Contest.
Hey kudz,
I was wondering if you have ever considered helping someone else write. With all the revamping you're doing, it would be good to try and explain the lessons you yourself are receiving in writing. If not its cool, but if so I have short/one-shot I've been working on and would appreciate some feedback. I'm having trouble getting past that "self-loathing" stage when it comes to writing.
Thanks!
P.S. The story is on a G-doc right now, if that's a problem (giving out personal info) then we can try to work something out.
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I am a terrible editor!
I mean, there is plenty of proof of that.
I dunno, I mean, I might be able to try, but finding the time is difficult. I'm behind on a number of projects and everything fell apart recently.
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Well, good luck on your endeavors. Just keep in mind that seeing what other people do wrong may help you look for those things in your own work, 'cause sometimes we're too proud of our own work to really see the error in it. You may be a better editor than you think.
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I keep missing stuff though. Really obvious stuff though.
Lately, I've been adverb hunting.
My mind loves self inserting a pony version of myself into stories. For instance that brother and everyone working with him would have gotten eviscerated, and we would have two safe foals.
I FINALLY CAUGHT UP ON 100+ CHAPTERS OF CHASE!!
Also, screw you kudzu... you had to kill one of the few sane unicorns in Canterlot with her insane brother.
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You have a snoot too.
It means snout or nose.
And Spike certainly has a snout.
5609054
There's nothing wrong with adverbs, assuming they are used correctly!
So, mods still forcing this to be Mature Rated? If it is permanent, might I suggest somehow putting the Lost chapters into this for convenience?
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I have.
5613088 Ah, my bad. So, why DID they upgrade it to Mature? It seemed you worked hard to keep it Teen. I remember the foal bathing thing, but... wtf?
Damnit kudz, I wanna be mad about the delay, but I can't be mad at the fluttercry emoticon.
FUCK! I had a feels moment! i didnt expect to have one of those today! Poor Cashmere Conestoga... *grins dementedly* We must bring her back! *starts drawing alchemical symbols* maybe use her brother so noone important loses an arm or a leg. or body.
5608052 berry true..
What would the characters, deities in this story think about this?
The waitress is a mirror pony, and going to poison them all! Obviously new to chewing gum, from her war torn world, an agent of darkness is near, be careful bucky.
I sense...I sense something...something big is coming...
A 3k world chapter !!! And sooooooon !!!!