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Another amazing chapter as usual, still giggling over the Sexplosion, as this was posted tight in the middle of reading that last "lost chapter".....
Alas, I am honestly scared though, and the ending threw the giggles right out... Glad to see that Sentinel has another purpose.
You almost had me going there for a minute, I imagined in my head, that in a scenario like this, he would erupt into rage and remake the isles into something along the lines of "Frozen". It dissapointed me to see him give up so easily...
omg omg omg omg omg ... I've sat here with my hand over my mouth in abject horror, revulsion ... and lost in the total awesomeness...
I am so glad Sentinel can dream walk, That's perfect... the Boogypony being Sombra is amazing and I love it ... now, does Luna/Celestia/Cadence/twilight know they were in his dream, was that part of it.. because Luna has visit before in Bucky's mind.
The wolves bowing to Bucky is amazeballs...That's fantastic... I frigging love it.
Ok, now I have to read this again... I feel like I could throw up, this is amazing.
the big pegasus stated
You...
You...
SON OF A BITCH!
You are soooo getting a slap for doing that!
Happy 100th chapter... It was good. Keg's filly is adorable
thanks for the update!!
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For what? What did I do?
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He is quite literally nothing without his family. There was nothing left to keep going for.
so sentinel is meant to be there to "kill shadows"?
!..............damn
Go Sentinel
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Protect Bucky's mind. Each herd member serves a function. Think of them as chess pieces.
Hey... ever notice that I keep making references to chess in the story...
4785736 yep
It's Sombra... Sombra's darker nature, his thirst for power, and his madness are alive in well inside of Bucky... yep, someone's screwed. Damn... This is a problem that Derpy can't physically attack, and as a Pegasus that's going to bother her. This is a dark magic that is attacking her husband, and she can't do anything about it... I feel really bad for her.
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Trying to get inside of him anyway. Inside of his dreams.
As an aside, this was part of the reason I created Sentinel as a character. He went through several revisions. The first incarnation of Sentinel was actually killed by Bucky by accident, it was Bucky's "flogging moment" but worse and the tipping point for Bucky's preservation for life.
That changed though, and after rewriting his character quite a bit, I decided that it would be Sentinel that would protect Bucky from Sombra's shadow and guard his dreams. I needed a believable counter to Shadow Sombra's power.
Originally, Luna was far more involved.
Later, in future chapters, as was revealed in a blog post, Sentinel will be charged with hunting down Sombra's shadow to earn his knighthood.
My thoughts with the frozen room. "Not like this, not like this"
Holy wow... that was epic. Gotta say I thought sombra was the boogeypony. Just seemed to fit. Thistle gets aroused and Bucky thinks it's perfume... love it.
And the last piece falls into place for something I've been thinking about for a while. Sentinels talent is for handling problems larger than himself. Either that, or I'm over-analyzing things.
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It was implied. Sentinel is a fighter.
Fishing is all about patience and dealing with boredom, followed by sudden combat and a contest of wills.
That was awesome. The scene with Wheatberry was adorable. But please, no facial hair, I've never liked it on ponies. 100 chapters, this story has changed a lot since it started, it'll be interesting to see where the story is after another 100
You know, I think the best Punishment for Sombra's Shadow is to be trapped in a crystal like he did with so many others and then toss in into the depths of Tartarus
Of all the great things in this chapter, I have to say that Sentinel finally acknowledging his *true* relationship with Bucky was my favorite part. Sure, he said it in the dreamscape rather than in the 'real world'... but at least he was willing to say it. :)
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And what's wrong with facial hair on ponies?
I KNEW IT...... CLOUDS!!!!!!!!
Yeah Bucky needs a slap, he knew that was how Sombra fell. He knew that was his one weakness.... Dont give in to the fear, dont give in to depression. If your family is gone by your hooves or not KNOW THAT THEY WANT YOU TO LIVE!!!! At least fight, stop the wolves, dong give in to the darkness!!!
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I never really felt that it fit in the universe, even though it is in the show. It just looks weird to me, it isn't part of an equine body build.
From the start it was very easy to see that all was a dream..
..and yet...
...GOSH, kudzu, i really though that this could be the last chapter !!! Damn you !!! Stop manipulating my feelings !!!! The oldest trick in the book and you made it bettter !
I can only start to imagine what a wreck of a pony Bucky will be when he awakes !
4785681 damn you beat me to it.
There is now shit in my pants.......
Can't Bucky use magic to change his appearance?
4786605 don't they all have facial hair?
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I guess technically they do, but I was referring to things like mustaches and beards.
4787975 so like star swirl or the flimflam brothers?
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Yep, there are a couple of others, but I can't remember them
If I didn't read your blog post about this is only a quarter of the story, I would have had a heart attack.
But then I almost did when I thought everypony really was dead and that's what you ment with 'dark and unplesant
Also who could tell me which eye Bucky lost?
And does he still have a rag around his head?
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To fucking intense man, sweet baby Jesus
4787636 the at hour is going for a more realistic view of magic and that leaves body altering rather strictly off the table me thinks. Just think about it, manipulating bone down to the marrow, forcibly creating more blood, forcing the skin to stretch and even more shit.
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Right eye, no rag. He implanted the gemstone into his eye socket, embedded in fulgurite.
4785784 please stop spoiling things just to elaborate in the comments, there's spoiling of the chapter, and then there's spoiling whole story plot points
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That was already elaborated on in a blog post.
Nothing important has been spoiled. Just a plot outline.
I am awed by your literary genius, a dream wrapped in another dream, a mystery wrapped in an enigma, a riddle within a riddle. The answer is family.
AWESOME!!!
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Last question, does he usually open that eye?
4789339 he doesn't have an eyelid anymore to open in the first place. His eye socket is now just a emerald sunstone he can control. So he keeps his "eye open" technically
I knew it was a dream, but that had me on edge the entire time. Cadence being impaled and her unborn child killed too, that disturbed me a great deal. How Shadow Sombra had so much control.
In other words, FUCK ME RUNNING, THAT WAS INSANE. FUCK. FUCK FUCK FUCK!!!
I am on an adrenaline rush now, thanks you magnificent bastard! What a way to do the century chaper! Bravo!
Re-reading from Chapter 1 a week ago, just reached 100.
Seeing so much foreshadowing and stuff I didn't pick up on. And already 20 unread chapters.
Holy snap! :D
> Is renowned for his willpower.
> Breaks within ten seconds.
That's Bucky for ya!
Just finished 100 chapters! Yay! Now to read the next 240 :3
I started reading two days ago and i am at chapter 100