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Bullshit! Sentinel learned this FROM BUCKY. arrrrgh!
You magnificent bastard.
Well... shit. The fallout was far more serious than I thought. I had not considered Bucky breaking entirely nor RD developing complications with her pregnancy. That is quite... bad...
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A fair point. This is exactly the kind of thing Bucky would do. So I suppose that makes Bucky feel horrid about passing on such "bad habits" to his father. But I'm not particularly surprised. Sentinel has always been Bucky's heir. This kind of thing was bound to happen.
...Wait. Someone is to die. What if it isn't one of the foals going on the journey, but instead one that has yet to be born... I am now worried for Dashie
Okay this entire chapter is striking me as a bit contrived.
Sentinel learned all this from bucky, and bucky would know that. He would be extremely worried, but he would know it was his influence that caused sentinel to do this.
Rainbow dash too. In fact her worrying to the point that she is having pregnancy complications strikes me as against her character. OH she would be scared and worried, but she would think that it was Scoots time to be a hero.
Also there is no way that scoots would continue this adventure at this point. She would freak out and head back home to help rainbow dash. So again an out of character action.
Onlt characters in character and the other kids, luna, and twilight.
Also that whole someone will die thing better not be rainbow dash or her foal. Mainly cause, as i mentioned, the complication is born from her uncharacteristically having a meltdown.
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Sigh.
Even with the obvious, you fail to see what is really going on.
Edit: OMG FLUTTERSHY JUST DUMPED A BUCKET OF WATER OVER TWILIGHT'S HEAD! OUT OF CHARACTER! OUT OF CHARACTER! SHOW IS RUINED FOREVER! DASH STOPPED BEING LOYAL! APPLEJACK TOLD LIES! PINKIE PIE BECAME MEAN! OUT OF CHARACTER! OUT OF CHARACTER! WAAAAAH!
Yup. It's begun. There will be more pain for the foals before this is done.
This ain't gonna be pretty.
6584404 Its not really the obvious dude. Even foreshadowing has its limits. A lot of the time you only piece it together in hindsight or it is paced through so much time the little details that took your notice before are half forgotten. That is why it is called foreshadowing, hints of what may, or may not, come, rather than spoilers, which is directly telling it.
And still the reactions of bucky seemed rather off at this point. And rainbow dash was very off. think i have mentioned before that out of all the mane six, Rainbow Dash has always been rather off in your story. Like she kept all her drive and force of will in a box, and it was somehow lost, and tried to compensate by being arrogant and bullheaded. which gives way to her whimpering or becoming emotionally unstable where she would otherwise be defiant or motivated to rise against the threat.
One flaw in a big ass story that odes a lot right, but when it pops up, its rather distracting.
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Stop and consider.
Bucky has a known reality warper living in his home right now.
The other two reality warpers were on the ship. And the entire story has shown how manipulative they are to make events happen so they can get their way.
Did none of this occur to you?
Right now, Apple Bloom and Sentinel are being tested.
6584495 there is a major difference between warping reality and causing characters to just behave differently. What they clearl do is direct events to create the needed stimuli. Cause and effect. They need the right action to create the equal reaction.
Since they would figure out extremely quickly where the foals were going, considering no one is stupid amongst the mane six and bucky's little herd, they would lose the majority of the needed negative stimuli to make bucky and rainbow dash lose their collective fucking minds with worry. The best cure for fear is knowledge after all.
Not to mention rainbow dash at risk of a miscarriage would create negative stimuli on all of them. They would not want ot continue with the knowledge rainbow dash is hurt. And forcing them to continue would only ensure failure.
Sentinel is being what he thinks Bucky wants him to be. And Bucky goes nuts with grief.
It is fitting, considering the love between father and son only differs in one embracing his destiny while the other runs from it.
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Had you been paying attention, you would have already known that Bucky was at his breaking point. He's not well... there are details, as small and as insignificant as they might be, that are of vital importance for events that happen. It isn't my fault if you miss them.
In Bucky's case, this was the straw that broke the camel's back. It isn't even about Sentinel... it is about everything. Sentinel was just the convenient excuse for him to let go of everything and crawl to Luna for comfort.
As for Rainbow Dash, the only thing wrong with her is heartburn, horrible indigestion, and really bad gas from eating to much festival food.
6584558 Why must you always start a fight with the author? Like seriously man?
6584628 Its called critique dude >_<
6584593 ......... twilight needs to be poked in the nose for saying that then >_<
6584632 There is a fine line between critique and starting an argument. Quite frankly, you've been starting arguments.
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Twilight is overreacting, and IN CHARACTER for doing so.
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Well... those happening and causing a reaction bad enough for Dash to go to the hospital at the same time as this happening likely caused Twilight to head out before getting an actual diagnoses. A Preliminary one done before the actual problem was found out might have labeled it happening due to the stress of the situation was causing on Dash.
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And you would be correct!
Thank you, for applying common sense, a bit of reasoning, and using your head!
6584643 still nose poking is required at some point >_<
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And however fated Bucky would be to do it, if he went about it in this way he would be wrong. MOST of what Bucky does is wrong for the right reasons (whether he knows it or not). It's practically his character core. Doing bad gets you punished, as it should be. The kids fucked up, they ran off because they thought they knew better. They just happened to be fated to go on this quest anyway. If they HADN'T been, people would have an easier time of seeing this as I do, no doubt - people seem to think they should be left alone or unpunished just because there's prophecy involved, yet that's not how it looks to the actual characters in the story! Prophecy or no, a bunch of kids are being sent off into what's designed to be certain death. Learning bad habits from Bucky or not, this is worth even more berating.
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I think the problem here is that you're supposed to learn what to do from listening to your parents, and learn what not to do from watching them. Sentinel is naive but intelligent, no matter what he witnessed Bucky doing he has the brainpower necessary to understand what is right and what is wrong. In other words, Sentinel failed the "Do as I say, not as I do" part of growing and learning. You listen to the wisdom of those who made mistakes before you, and then watch the new mistakes they make in order to not repeat them. Sentinel himself has been hurt by Bucky's disappearances and whimsy in the past, he should have had it between his ears to know what that would do to his family.
Which is what is being betrayed here. Sentinel got emotional instead of putting his logic to work, and this is the result. One can only hope there's more wing-slaps and yelling and assbeating when he gets home. The kind of lesson that sets you straight for a lifetime or two.
I can understand Bucky being out of his mind with worry.
The Far North is the one place on the PLANET he can't go.
Amaranth also doesn't mince words, she's probably told them they'll be coming back with one less foal.
6584729 I posted that? What chapter? If that is not a trouble
congrats the story is the longest on the site so every time someone clicks on the longest story browser your is on the front page
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you monster
Shit is about to go down!
Im really enjoying this arc
They have fecked up so hard. I feel so bad for everypony at home.i gots to to bed but i want to keep reading . It is 3:00 Am here
You know what would be really useful going into a frozen wasteland to fight undead? A fire-aspected paladin of the sun.
Why didn't he just insist on tagging along? Or stow away like last time?
7847990 I've been wondering about that myself!