Next chapter... trapped on an airship with Pinkie Pie.

That is horrifying.

Oh dear, the last bit got me....

You have given me some fancy to google, good sir.... Oui...

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This needs chewing. Quaker oatmeal is GROSS. it is just oat hulls and is practically nutritionally worthless. The whole oat is actually quite chewy.

Got to say I hope discord can live through naughty fluttershy

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It is a condition that could lead to La petite mort.

Hmm...I spy a chance for an experiment. Just how long within an enclosed space with Pinkie Pie will it take to drive a pony mad?

Should I? Maybe I shouldn't...

*sigh* No farewell from my favorite assistant? Especially when the other foals are saying goodbye?
Or... both of the favorite assistants, actually.

"He had never quite anything like this before, "

Other than that - a most excellent chapter!

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I'm sorry...

5155003 Oh

....

OH...

And so it begins. I have a bad feeling about this...

Oh, Celestia. You tried sheltering Twilight before, and look where that got you. At least this time, she'll be in another country.
Also, as far as diplomacy experience goes, maybe you should've started them off with something a bit less potentially catastrophic.

And no goodbyes for Rainbow Dash? (Oh no. Now I'm picturing Scootaloo stowing away. There's no way that could end well...)

Looking forward to more. And I stand corrected on the matter of oatmeal.

He had never quite anything like this before, seeing her so relaxed.

Might be worded better as

He had never seen anything quite like this before, seeing her so relaxed.

Ya gotta English better man!

5154972 I wonder who will brake down first

5154745 throughout history the insane people turned out to be right. Think about that.

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The people who change the world are those insane enough to believe they can.

I have a feeling that Silver Shill and Big Macintosh are gonna be drunk off their asses the whole time.

5155062 touche.

The Scored Mare

He had never quite anything like this before, seeing her so relaxed.

Missing a word, here. Might I suggest 'beheld' in place of reusing 'seen'?

I am so looking forward to this arc. And to seeing more of your depiction of Celestia being a real pony and not a living goddess. This is, by far, the most believable relaxed Celestia I've ever read. Well done!

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And her brother airship: The Scoring Stallion.

It´s always the quiet ones...always...

5155150 ...are you implying airship incest with that joke?
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...
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:laugh:

*Reads the last bit between Discord and Fluttershy, falls over laughing before dying of loss of breath*

Youo did again, you devilish writer. With ONE bucking line you implied more depth on Big Macintosh then the whole show managed !!! He is so hurt that he closed himself, avoiding contact as much as possible. If you don´t have contact you don´t miss it.

Brilliant.

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That would be implying that airships could fornicate.

Not unless they were bioships and weren't hermaphroditic.

trying to gage the level of innuendo and sass she had just encountered,

Celestia: Luna, what does the detection spell say about his sass level?!

Luna: It's over NINE THOUSAND!!

...sorry.

5155304 yuuzhan vong warships.

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Leviathans from Farscape came to mind, actually.

5155388 haven't played farscape, so :derp:

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Farscape was a TV show.

5155396 double derp. :derpy:

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Have a read.

5155399 ...interesting.

Oh dear... Naughty Fluttershy is awesome. I would love to see a lost chapter with her.
I wonder who will come back married to a gryphon? I could also totally see it being an arranged marriage as part of a peace treaty too. Marry some gryphon royalty to either an element of harmony or equestrian royalty to secure relations.

The door the library clicked softly

door to? door of?

Celestia blinked, trying to gage the level of innuendo and sass she had just encountered

gauge

5155420 let's be honest here, we all know that its going to be Bucky returned married to a gryphon... Wait. I might be able to believe a plot twist where it's Sentinel promised to one.

5155430 My first thought is that would be repetitive plot-wise. . . but then I'm pretty sure Moonbow would absolutely adore that wouldn't she? But poor Diamond Tiara. . .what am I even saying now!

Next chapter... trapped on an airship with Pinkie Pie.

I think you mean

Next Chapter... trapped on an airship with Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, and Buckminster Bitters, while all three are getting progressively bored by the long trip.

5155617 You're speaking Chase. I'm pretty sure Moonbow interacting with a griffon to be fellow wife would be interesting to say the least. Then DT would be surrounded by predators though.

5154972 JUMP, MAN!!

“That’s better… who’s a good draconequus?” “I am.”

Emphasis on draconequus.

A good draconequus = a naughty, but overall harmless pony
A bad draconequus = Erm... Well, let's say I think what we witnessed on the show was nothing.

Chuckling, Bucky shook his head. He was seeing a side of Celestia he never thought existed. “Well, I have a pegasus, a few earth ponies, a kelpie, and unicorn. All I really need now is an alicorn and I’m set with a well rounded collection.”
“Buckminster… if you work your charm on Twilight I will personally take you to Gelding Grotto,” Celestia warned.
“Who said anything about Twilight?” Bucky deadpanned.
For a moment, the only sound the room was the seemingly thunderous clicking of the wind up clock. Celestia blinked, trying to gauge the level of innuendo and sass she had just encountered, which she estimated had never been this high for at least one thousand years or so. Her mouth fell open and much to her dismay, no words came out.

SunButt.EXE has stopped responding.

5155332cool Star Wars EU reference.

“That’s right. And my good little cute cuddly draconequus gets to play with naughty Fluttershy… when I get home… YOU ARE GOING TO LOVE ME!”

My balls just shivered.

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Well now I want that to happen. Sounds interesting.

gets to play with naughty Fluttersh

NOw I want to see what naughty Fluttershy is like.

No goodbye between Sentine and DT?

Also, who said he was talking about you as well Celestia? Or even Luna for that matter! Just because you don't know of them doesn't mean there's not other alicorns out there.

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We totally figured out how to get airships to reproduce on their own a few chapters back. ... It could happen.

X'D can't breath...goodbyes...funny endings...dying

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