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4 chapters in one day?
That's an academy record!
Aaaaand now we prepare for shit to happen
Love this story. Keep up the good work.
I am very disturbed. No one should have to eat black licorice
"her “Berry-Serious” face"
you sir win the internet. all of it. even mine. also before i turn in for the night i have to ask if you planned to do more zapple-dapple stuff. i seem to remember saying you might but idk
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Mang, people ignored that story... I dunno why.
I'm not entirely sure I can keep a straight face now whenever someone mentions making brownies and the fact that they are currently in the oven. I will start laughing and the poor person will be baffled as to why "I got brownies in the oven" is so hilarious.
Well that was unexpected.
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The cause of the wars between wives in the houses.
And many other problems in Equestria...
**Walks away whistling the X-Files theme**
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While that is funny, Berry's reaction actually caused me great physical difficulty to write.
I could not read my own screen.
The whole exchange was absurd and over the top.
Hah Derpy and Berry going out if their way to gross out Bucky was cute and funny. Twilight giving Celestia a swatdown was pretty cute in it's own right as well, even if it though I'm sure she don't didn't mean for it to be! And it sounds like we're approaching Berry starting an incident between houses... she better becareful! Were things to ever get as ugly as they did in their history it's certainly not just her hide on the line.
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The bad part is, they are just being themselves.
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I friggin love Derpy and Berry. If I were in that bed I would be in stitches; I'd be giggling all day, come to think of it.
Also, BERRY NO. I read the spoiler you gave in your blog and I am rather scared of what is to come.
Even more reason to extract the foals and then nuke Fillydelphia. Who's with me?
Two words for ya, Berry! Molotov. Cocktail.
Aw yeaaah, firebombing the parents, dun dun dun!
Holy tacos...Yet another update...
*SQUEE lvl XXL*
I love you unconditionally.
Prepare for a boop on the nose followed by a bonecrushing hug sir!
Also I expect 5 updates tomorrow.
No pressure seeing how you write fast
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I actually like black licorice.
One of my fave candies are Good N Plenty
On nom nom nom
thanks for the update
I agree with 4361395 about the shadow government. That came out of left field. I can't help but wonder why Celestia didn't address it at some point. Maybe she's been trying to. Maybe she feels she needs the opposition as a regulator, to keep her from becoming a tyrant. Maybe it was one of the few things she had to remember her sister, foul though it was.
(Also, I have to wonder about how they kept the shadow government staffed. The societal pressure of keeping one's true loyalties hidden would be immense. I'm amazed it lasted more than a few generations. I'm not saying it's impossible, just staggering.)
In any case, that also came with a rather accurate summary of the story as a whole:
Mind you, that's not necessarily a bad thing. The bigger picture of this Equestria is a fascinating one.
I'm kind of hoping Berry shares that book with Bon Bon, just so they can see what shape the damage took. Heck, show Twilight while they're at it. It may be the first time she's ever wanted to destroy a book.
Lastly, I find black licorice disgusting.
Looking forward to more.
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It existed, elusive and out of reach, in the background. Can't deal with it if you can't reach it. Took almost a thousand years to root it out. More is coming. Little reveals, small peeks at a time.,
the shadow government, lunar rebellion, children of nightmare, whatever is a classic in any in-depth equestria centered story and was somewhat expected on my part what with the heavy foreshadowing by kutzuhaiku and through the somewhat frequent princess scenes
4361286 well maybe a revival is in order?
this chapter was fairly disturbing....... good, but disturbing in obvious places
I found the perfect song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v4wuV14QlNM
There is NOTHNG wrong with black licorice!
4438384 besides everything
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Incorrect, you're attempting to bend it.
Fixing it would be saying "If you take one more foal I will strike down upon your head." And then actually go through with it.
But if it's so important with the most orphanages in the fucking country, build new ones! I'm sure ANY group of earth ponies, pegasi or even unicorns would be thrilled at the thought of their foals not being kidnapped in the middle of the night! So thrilled in fact, that they would most likely build all of the orphanages by their own strength or funding.
explaining how Princess Luna’s banishment lead up to the problems
The pulled the book free from the shelf, looking at the cover, scowling a horrible scowl
Well damnit, this book did him no good
1. Led.
2. She.
3. Dammit/Damn it.
I'm going to cry at this rate, and it won't be from sadness XD
Derpy and Berry, jeebus... I think I'm in love
kkekeke
Nice job dude, nice job!
6535261 i'd ask you to not steal my new waifus, but you were hear first. And anyways, Bucky already stole them. Good for him.
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then is it bad i actually enjoy black licorice? Im a masochist, i know...
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YUK!
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That suff is nasty!
*sniff*
Damn Onion Ninjas....
To all those who hate black liquorice, I have this to say.
Less is More.
Liquorice is like savory toast spreads (those REALLY salty spreads like Vegemite). It's an acquired taste that one should only consume a small amount of at a time. A bag of Black Liquorice, like a jar of Vegemite, should last MONTHS, if not an entire year.
Black licorice is delicious. Hate me all you want but I will never stray from that opinion.
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I agree, if I was stranded on a deserted island, I think black licorice is what I would take with me for comfort, cuz a medium sized bag can last you a year and a half tops if you ration that shit right.