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One drama bomb, as requested.
**heads for the fallout shelter**
Dark-Bucky is best Bucky, dammit.
Missing word, not sure what.
Looks like I know what I'll be doing after razing Fillydelhpia.
with you can so we can talk just a little more
Where
Your fear of negative comments is starting to get even me depressed, and that does not happen easily.
Good chapter, learned more about thistle, and the darkness is good. If everything was too fluffy there would never be anything interesting to dicuss
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I wasn't overly concerned about that here in this particular box of author's notes.
More concerned about my ability to write this. Thistle's character is... tough to balance.
How does one write an innocent sex pot?
One thing I definitly appreciate about this story's author:
He/she at least tags each chapter that might contain emotional triggers.
There are quite a few stories where I was really caught off guard by some pretty dark stuff (sudden murder and once even mind control) in an otherwise light hearted story.
4496749 fallout shelter not needed. drama bomb approved.
I'm liking how your handling Thistle so far. looking forward to how she and the group react to each other later on.
Oh look, two more people have had their morality challenged and or their jimmies rustled. 27 downvotes.
This feels clunky in its paragraph. Not sure exactly what the emphasis was supposed to be with it, so I'm not sure what would be the right way to fix it, but I can make a couple of suggestions. If you want to keep it as part of the sentence it's in, I'd recommend changing it to "and the more well to do houses" and leave out the rest, since it's clear they're headed to the lake already. If the emphasis was the idea that the closer they got to the lake, the better off the families seemed, I'd recommend making it its own sentence.
I have no idea where that came from. Is this earthworm important somehow? Are we going to wait 100 chapters and suddenly find out about a sapient earthworm that has taken over the Shetland Isles or something?
Other than those, and an issue someone else in the comments spotted, good chapter.
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Well, imho, you´re doing a great job defining her.
As for how to do, again, imho, she is not a sex bomb...she is not sexy at all. She have a need to procreate wich is not, necessarily, the same as a need to have sex. Actually, in the more romantic way, she hadn´t sex yet. So you have a innocent filly that wants to be impregnated but have no emotional knowledge ´bout the repercussions of the act, or the bounding the act brings upon those that perform it.
And again, thanks for the great history and, someone have to say it: haters gonna hate. But lovers will love it far more.
Edit: PS.....BERRY IS BERRY PREGNANT !!!!! HOOORAY !!!!!!!!! Oh gosh, this means that Derpy is pregnant too...i can´t even start to think what an emotional tornado pegasus will do when the hormones starts to make their magic on her behavior....she will rape Bucky to death one day, and will cry her in the other.....
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I promised the earthworm he could have a bit part.
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April 1st, 2015 arrives. It was a calm day in the world of The Chase. When suddenly a giant earthworm appears in the Shetland Isles, destroying everything, Godzilla-style.
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Hormones have already began.
Why do you think she is so nippy and nesty?
Now, we really get to see a broody pegasus.
4497151 it's just a worm they said, it'll be fine they said
Well, that was cryptic...
Oh. Ohhhh. I think I see what you did there.
In any case, this gives a great deal of insight into Thistle's character. She has a cause. Moreover, she is utterly devoted to that cause, willing to do anything to advance it. That said, she's still barely more than a child. She's been hurt, so she curls up, trying not to think about the Hedgehog Dilemma even when she wants to get pricked.
Now these crazy mainlanders aren't behaving at all how she predicted, they're trying to reassure her by threatening to pour molten lead down a very intimate part of her baby-daddy's anatomy, and what is this she doesn't even.
Great stuff. Looking forward to more.
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As far as I can tell? Goal-oriented, single-minded, and either unconcerned with or unaware of the logistics. In other words, you're doing it right.
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you clever bastard
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I swear for Celestia that i thought that the only reason why she was so...intense, lately, was due to the enviroment. Sometimes i can be VERY slow.
BTW, if it works as a parameter, my wife´s firstpregnancy was so easy, that it was almost as vacation. But the second was an emotional roller-coster from the fifth month ´till the end. So, all i can say to Bucky is: hold tight, mate. It ends. Eventually.
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Also, Cadance's spell didn't cause a regular estrus cycle.
Look at the list of foal names in the blog.
Count them.
That's just the first batch.
Some day... I'm gonna find me a microphone- a quality microphone, get an audio editing program, sharpen my voice acting, and make an audiobook out of this.
4497255 Oh, and I almost forgot. MOAR
Thanks for the update!!
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And now I want to read more about the above-average intelligent earthworm and its cultural perspectives grounded in a life lived underground with no limbs or external sensory organs . . .
Damn you and your intoxicatingly subtle sociobioculturally-based world-building, kudzuhaiku, DAMN YOU!! ,
Let's see how long it takes for Berry & Derpy to realize.
I wonder if Derpy's pregnancy, weather she realizes it or not, will cause any changes in her accepting Thistle into the herd.Never mind, I think that's been answered already.
Although, I don't remember seeing any spoiler blogs saying that Bucky's herd would ever leave the island, so maybe it never happens. I may have forgotten, though.
I'm also curious, looking back at one of the letters to Celestia, Bucky signed it with a house name that was not House Avarice. Has there just been a change in inter-House alignments?
Bucky is doing a good job of drawing all sorts to him. Air and Water and Earth and Shadow.
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House Bitters, scion of the platinum lineage.
House Avarice. Sub family.
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Actual title. Quite fancy wording for such things as: pony at arms, noble, has a right to kill commoners because of birth, cannot be tried for killing in a standard court, and direct descendant of Platinum through one of many bloodlines that branched out.
Armiger = arms bearer. Born with the right to bear arms. Somebody has to have the unpleasant task of keeping those dirty peasants honest and on task. And occasionally putting a few down when their numbers became too many. Historically, this is what armigers did. Some people are made knights through their actions, armigers are born knights.
Roland, in the Gunslinger series by Stephen King, is a classical example of an armiger. He is a knight errant, born with the divine right to kill people who #%$& with him or his interests, and his right to kill cannot be questioned. He can trace his bloodline back to Arthur of the Eld. He has the divine right to bear arms, and has those big revolvers for a reason.
Good, good let the darkness flow through you.
there is no light for those who know no darkness.
4496749 I see that the drama bomb has been successfully delivered, good work soldier! Anyways, looking at Bucky's character now, he has... Matured. A lot. To the point where you have no idea how he was a nerd in the first place, and I love and and hate it at the same time. 0-0
Is it bad that I think of the tenth doctor's voice when I read Bucky's parts? Or at least a variation of his voice? And it's not just because of the Derpy/Doctor Whooves thing. It's also because the tenth doctor can be so kind but also so hostile, switching in the span of a second given the right situation.
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For the people with the jimmie rustling issues.
Handled well! The family of misfits continues to grow- Good thing Bucky loves his herd so deeply that I think he won't stray too dark or even cleave fully to Keg Smasher's policy. Purges might be the Isles way and sweeping things under a façade might be the Equestrian way, but I'm hoping Bucky forges a truer path. And sanitation, maybe some aqueducts... No pressure, pal!
4498732 Weird when the fic first started i always voiced him in rorys voice, cuz of how he was back then. i thought about switching up, but then i remembered that rory went through a similar character development when he wanted to save him family so it still fits
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I don't believe that has happened.
HA HA!!! YES! YES!! YES!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHH!!!!!!!!
Should I be expecting a new race of magical earthworms later on?
I like how you are developing Thistle. While I typically don't like things like kelpies, I think you will be an exception. Also, I love the earthworm.
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Worm ponies!
(Later on, it's mentioned in the comments 'in my universe, anything can breed with anything)
REminds me of one of my riends. He's always randomly popping off it off with a slight accent. "dawkness." SO the similarity here made me smile.
Hmm...
Poor earthworm. Its point of view is so twisted.
To me, she's coming across as overtly sexual because she's a survivor of some pretty profound abuse--and I can't help but think that the pony who inseminated her is only the most recent perpetrator.
The earthworm!
Earthworm Jim!!!!
4497255 Checking if you've done that already or not. No doubt it would be a torrent of emotions when it happens. And note that if you attempt to reply to me from another chapter except this one, I wont get the notification. It's fickle that way
After re-reading chapter 59, i wonder if Luna ever caught up with the miserable excuse of a stallion that used Thistle. The repercussions should have been EPIC.
What was up with the Earthworm?!
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To see if people were paying attention.
Um... is it weird I want to read a story with this particular Earthworm? kekekeke.
Awesome work on this well done! I will not lie... I liek Thistle, she's a cute character and she needs some luvin, hugs and snuggles!
STAT!
Nice job!