How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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5893667
Amazing control over her manipulation shoes.
5893716 So, anypony capable of some level of magic manipulation (ANY level) can extend the manipulation shoes capacities beyond the simple "stick and drag" routine ?
BTW, I´m missing more Applejack (best background pony !!!) scenes...Rarity is incredible in your story. But I really miss the good old orange mare....
5893748
She just had a scene...
Oh my god this update rate...
Missing "while" or "end" ?
I dunno, grammar
5893775 Yeah, I know, but it was too short...I need more orange mare time !!! Also, we saw the healing of Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash (actually, less healing and more a blossom for her) and Rarity. Twilight is still healing, but we have some glimpses of that. But poor Applejack is still (or was) trying to heal from the Babs mini-arc. I would loe to see more of her develepment.
5893783
Soon.
I feel sad for Harper
Also wonder why no one noticed my hidden words... They are delicious
Good to see that Rarity is aware of her own issues. There were several times when she didn't even seem to register that the nation was collapsing around her. Now, she can recognize that coping mechanism for what it is. And really, better to be misguided but functional than utterly consumed by her neuroses.
Meanwhile, Belisama is rediscovering a lost art. I look forward to hearing her findings.
I suppose it is a vain hope that Belisama's music will heal Lyra's physical scars, but I think it will at least help heal the mental ones.
5893937
Absolutely true. Accepting a lesser flaw in order to continue functioning rather than collapsing under the weight of the massive flaw you otherwise couldn't avoid. Rarity's more intelligent than people give her credit, typically because they're rather shallow in their own opinions of her - only seeing skin-deep, as it were.
5894090 The troll is strong on this one...
5894126
The mistakes made in the first letter were amusing.
As if Twilight would ever be that careless.
5893783 AJ is a background pony. Just as she is in the show.
Two times 'appeared' in a row, maybe change it to 'show up' or something like that?
Scald or scalding. Tenses, ugh.
5886765 and now I feel offended that you compared video games to drugs. Like I said, video games don't deserve to be incinerated. you can sustain a normal lifestyle without trowing out every single game you have. No one said you have to throw away everything to be normal. I live a normal lifestyle, yet I own every console of Nintendo to date and more than 50 games for each console. I'm just saying video games don't have to be a problem.
“Darling… I am full of surprises… and filled with the need for self improvement…”
. . . and hopefully, soon, full of Barley's foals.
Is this supposed to be "No tickle-tingle", & you just got lost in alliteration, or that correct, because in that case in might be better to turn, that T to a lower-case t, and remove the period that precedes it.