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Ah, yesh.
So... Bon Bon is a walking drug factory. Interesting.
Also... Bucky finally admits what we all knew. Good.
Hm, a natural Lay on Hooves ability...
Sounds Legit.
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Um, no. Not exactly. A snoot is the fleshy end of many a mammal's nose. Particularly equines.
A snout and a snoot are similar.
you are like 100% of the reason i always have the giggles whenever i think of hot sauce. i just wanted to let you know that.
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Huh, with the community being so insular, it makes sense why outsiders like Gilda, Zecora, and Iron Will had a tough time. Their smell would be all wrong and the herd would see them as a threat.
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And that is actually a point I've thought about to some small degree, and then debated on as a story element.
I've left it out.
In my mind however, zebras have similar abilities to earth ponies, regarding hooves, making them such effective healers and herbalists.
Loved it! Are we going to see Trixie at some point, or was that just Celly musing about what she'd like to see happen? Either way, more I say!
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I've debated about Trixie. Undecided. I can only branch into so many directions.
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Fair enough. But I do like this world, maybe you should consider a side story that takes place in it after this fic reaches it end. Stuff some background pony perspective in there!
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I've done some calculations. This story could stretch over a million words if I don't trim back.
4363951 You could always make that a side-story.
In other news, very nice chapter. I do love how your taking the time to add world-building into each chapter. It's a unique perspective and one that seems to flow well and doesn't seem to contradict the canon material.
Your worldbuilding is fantastic. I love the attention to the smallest details like pegasus saliva having a waxiness to it for preening. I can't wait to see how this goes.
4363853 'obscene amounts of liquid fire' idk what it was about that line but it was hilarious
Sort of called it. Not so much sanity glands as extroversion glands. Though describing Lyra as "addicted" to Bon Bon is several kinds of disturbing, even if it's accurate and she really has become completely dependent on candypone's chemical cocktail. Really, that makes even worse... though I suppose it's still better than the alternative of Lyra never meeting Bonnie in the first place.
In any case, great stuff all around, from the biochemical revelation to the advancement of the various plot threads. Looking forward to more.
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And nopony knows.
While it has been studied a bit, let's face it. Earth ponies just aren't that interesting. So why bother doing a detailed study of it and throw bits at the research?
Just keep the earth ponies working and making the food. And society will be better off for it.
And nopony has commented about Derpy dropping Rising Star from the stratosphere.
Hmm...
Everypony must be okay with this portrayal of pegasus motherhood.
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I know I am. Heck, if somepony broke Dinky's heart in one of my stories, Derpy dropping the schmuck from the stratosphere would be relatively merciful.
As I posted in the blog thread about this subject:
4364224 this proves that pinkie is a drug lord why am I not surprised
4364270 don't let her know that you know.
4364437 I run her greatest competition: the crystal meth-pire she knows I know and she fears me
4364182 Dropping something from the stratosphere while lecturing is something that just feels right for the dynamics that you have set up, it's something that I feel for some reason just fits in the Pegasus spot for "I'm going murder you" or other threats of that course. Just something to scare them into thinking before acting in a certain manner.
I'm enjoying this story more than I could have ever dreamed of and all that I can really put into words without feeling like I'm stating the obvious is "thank you for doing this." I just love how deep this story was to start and you just keep adding to that depth with every chapter,making me at least, find something about myself that I can relate to each character in the story at one time or another.
Your fan,
Aerigim
thanks for the quick updating!!
I am going off on an irrational hunch here, but are you European by any chance?
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I have to know, why do you ask?
4364560 Like I said, it's an irrational hunch, but it's due to the word "stabilise". "Stabilize" is the American English spelling and "stabilise" is generally the European (I think? Not too sure about European English spelling except for realise instead of realize) spelling.
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I am actually American, but I have been educated by non-Americans.
I use words like colour, civilisation, dialogue, cheque, and other words that generally confuse the hell out of people around me and tell me I need to learn how to spell.
My spelling has fallen out of favour.
4364671 I actually like the usage of non-American English, so no favour lost from me.
I think I'm jonesin' for some earth pony frog.
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Frog licker.
This is a truly fascinating piece. I applaud your efforts in going one step beyond in making the ponies something more than merely humans in equine clothing; you've really gone and done something quite unique.
I shall be looking forward to the next updates.
well that was interesting but i do have something to say ponies do not have a bone down there like most of creatures (known as a baculum).......
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I know that. But ponies could still say they were boning one another.
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noot noot
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Earth ponies can be introverted individuals. Nopony is saying they can't be. But as part of a biological directive, those are going to be the exception, not the rule.
Stop thinking like a human for a while. They're supposed to be alien and different.
4364933 Betcha can't lick just one.
So.....yeah, just spent the last 2...probably 3 hours power-binging through this whole thing so far.
Very rarely does that occur. This last chapter, in particular, was very good.
Well, no wonder Ponyville is so resilient! It's mostly an earth pony town and that's not even taking Pinkie Pie into account.
I wonder if she's a super-producer like Bon Bon?
Anyways, am I the only one who thinks that if this became widely known, ponies would try licking earth pony hooves for a high? I can just see Blueblood hosting an upper-class 'do and saying after dinner, "And now, the ladies may retire to the salon, and if the gentlestallions will follow me to the licking room..."
that is the most metal and motherly thing I have ever heard.
also in a side note, earth ponies now terrify me.
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same here man. I am horrified.
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Pinkie's breath attracts people around her that's how high above she should be to bon bon.
4364095 And thus why nobody pays attention to the mudponies.
They are essentially cannon fodder. I bet that they are the first ones to die in a war.
There are plenty of them to be used as soldiers and thrown into the meat grinder.
The important ponies are nearly always the unicorns and pegasi.
Is that not correct?
4365138 Bah. Your comment did not show up in my notification box.
Bloody hell Fimfiction. Sorry for that other comment.
Anyway... Like I said, merely a nitpick on my part.
Otherwise, the story is fine. Though I will admit, I have read up enough on eugenics and of how the Nazis viewed genetics that
this type of data makes my skin crawl. Of course this is of no fault of your own, as it adds to the story itself.
Still, I cannot help but get the picture of goosestepping unicorns, pegasi and earth ponies killing each other for a superior master race.
And yes, I can clearly see there is no such thing in your story, nor will there be in the forseeable future. Just me and my crazy head.
That, and how the fandom treats each species respectively and what not. Just let it off as me been the usual foolish man I suppose.
Hmm, you've given me much to ponder.
I love what you've done here. LOVE IT.
what is this a romance novel or a science lesson
Despite how well that reads, folks....DON'T USE IT ON A GIRL IN REAL LIFE!!
...I have two hand prints on my face now...
.......
Are you a fucking doctor or something?