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XD XD XD Does mean i can't gripe anymore? XD
Enjoyable chapter. Harpy's butt exploded and sentinel gettting flustered is always enjoyable.
I belive that "Ripple and I" was supposed to be "Bittersweet and I"
I'm guessing that'd be Bittersweet, not a second Ripple?
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Two Ripples. There's a scary thought.
Damn, another 4AM chapter, that means I have to stay up later than I usually do to read it.
I think this line has the wrong name in it. It's spoken by Ripple.
I think I broke a rib
Should be either "It'd be great or "I'd be grateful
TYPOS BE DAMNED! THE POWER OF CELESTIA COMPELS YOU!
Another excellent chapter, I gotta say. There's only one thing I saw that the others haven't already pointed out.
I would remove the bolded portion, to make this sentence read a bit smoother. But that, I would say, is all stylistic choice.
The world farted and everyone died...
the typos have struck again
I think that should be "bittersweet and I"
Not a night owl, just from across an ocean.
Upper-case for the 'shores'.
The world is not prepared for two Ripples.
Is it just me, or is anyone else now stuck imagining Lugus in Angry Birds, dicing up the pigs into bacon with his Hook Axe.
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Let alone two Ripples going at it in the bedroom. The Bed, the house, and the surroundings will not survive.
XD OMG Harper, you're such a little shit.
There is a major internet outage in my area. It goes in and out. Posting now while I have internet. Fixed typos.
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Is it masturbation?
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I have Honestly been asking myself that question for years, though more along the lines of it being with a Genderbent Clone.
With Harper's electrical ability, I wonder if she could turn herself into a little farty flamethrower.
Don't you just hate it when you have something to say but don't know how to say it? Or when you want to comment on how happy/excited a chapter makes you feel, but feel that words would just cheapen it....
Man Sentinel is majorly repressed for a 9 year old, or is he like 12. Either way having a couple of girls dangling the goodies can't be good for his inner beast. One day puberty is going to dump more testosterone on him than his brain can handle. And by then it'll be too late for Bodecia to realize how much bigger Sentinel has gotten.
Woo, night shift master race
This was fun! Thanks Kudzu
Let's play a game. Count how many times "Lyra" is spoken in this single paragraph without becoming agitated.
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It is intended to illustrate Bon Bon's fixation on Lyra.
And by fixation, I mean borderline obsession.
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That's cool. I've just noticed you rarely -if ever- use terms like "he", "she", "her", "his", and "its". And this is the most memorable paragraph where you just flat out repeat a character's name in every sentence.
I'm just thankful you didn't do this with Twilight Sparkle. Well... not yet anyways.
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Mirror Pool lovin'.
6395362 Night owls unight!
*Gives Lordofmyth a highfive* :P senpai noticed you.
Whoot whoot lol
Hoot.
Hoot hoot
the night hides me from the cops.
I am just straight up nocturnal... when im not forced to wake up during the day. You get the best bandwith at night