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Not sure, having trouble seeing right now, But I think you messed up an italics some where in the second half of the chapter.
Need to flip the bracket, the entire story is italic from that point.
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Fixed. Stupid typosprites.
Everything after this is in italics. Beware the typosprites!
What would be really hilarious is if, besides food, they could safely eat sources of light that weren't spells.
we're
working
a legacy
I feel (or I kinda feel)
....... sooo why isn't anyone taking into account the fact the experiement clearly is a bust? its has done far more than it should and changed some fundamental aspect to his very being.
literally his cutie mark turned from medicine to poison. if that isn't a sign that it has gone arry i don't know what is. be like pinkie pie's balloons turning to razorblades.
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OH NO IT FAILED EVERYBODY PANIC! THE STORY IS A BUST! IT'S ALL OVER! THE SKY IS FALLING! SCOOTALOOS EVERYWHERE!
Someone needs to take a peek under Twilight and make sure she's not swinging a donger to go with those brass balls she grew at the end there.
5940636 seriously dude. these are supposed to be analytical and intelligent ponies, and they have no reaction to the cutie mark transforming into the exact opposite of what it once was. that should have greatly alarmed them.
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Science is calm rationality.
Key word: calm.
They knew going into this that there were going to be big changes. Rather than become emotional and stupid, these characters are remaining calm and rational as they observe and wait for further data.
So... chillax and stop being such a spaz. Just take a deep breath... and try to wait and see what happens.
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Did you expect The Scholar, a thousands-of-years-old-goddess, and an insane-pony to flip their shit because of something new they didn't expect, but were prepared to study if it happened anyway?
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One is The Scholar...
One the Princess of the Night...
And one is The Guardian...
Together, they fight
crimeBOREDOM in the secret research facility that cost more than several other nations combined total gross domestic product.5940674 this isn't science though. this is magic. a scientific methodology only gets you so far when you are dealing with a force that is fueled by the illogical and the abstract.
5940636 FLEE! FLEE FROM THE SHADOWSCOOTS!
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Arcano science.
And stop being so goddamn pedantic.
5940725 feels like they are falling further and further into a bad situation that they will end up creating for themselves.
I fear the enemy has filled Twilight with a terrible resolve. She won't be loving and tolerating the shit out of any mirror travelers anytime soon.
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And in this, you are correct. What do you do with perfect killers once there is no longer a need for them...
It like unleashing plague rats on them, only not quite.
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Logic is subjective based on the prevailing observable factors known to any particular reality. Their laws of physics, the foundations of knowledge, could be completely different from our own. Magic could be as cold-cut and understood as mathematics, and thus the height of logic. Don't impose your own view on another.
5940759 have a way to reverse it would be the best answer.
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Now... think of what you know of Luna.
And I ain't saying no more. That's it, that's all you get.
... Yeah. Sure. Luna just... gives the responsibility of announcing her last-minute change to the program to Bucky, and laugh off any attempts to criticize her...
That's pretty frustrating.
That's... that's it. I'm afraid to go further on this topic.
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And Bucky's testicles grew three sizes that day.
Bitch!
Luna is pragmatic. She does unpopular stuff that no one else wants to do because she recognises the need to get stuff done.
As happy as I am to see more stuff happening, I feel like Bucky's family's reaction to his transformation was glossed over. After many chapters of them commenting how they missed Bucky's old face, and how they felt bad for Bucky, and Berry blamed herself for Bucky's condition, the intial reactions was more like 'oh, Bucky's back to normal. Yippie...'.
well...
Bucky has chaos magic > he is on the way to be a draconequus
1st SBI agent is made with nice succsess.. bio hazard pony... unleash him on the fools who try to fight Bucky
Twilight is developing a lovely need to killing those who hurt her family
all in all... great chapter and progress
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When harmony magic goes sour, it turns into chaos magic.
But Bucky DOES NOT ascend in this story. No wings. No alicorn. No draconequus. Just consequences for avoiding his destiny.
And the moment they figure out how to send the Shadow sprites back onto Equestria is the moment things get really bad.
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Naw... you include a biological killswitch.
Bucky is very careful in his planning.
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She ran out of love and toleration for them when they used foals to kidnap her cousin and very nearly killed him to the point he needed to be fixed with Phoenix Fire.
Hmm. Bucky is giving off chaos magic. And he has a talon for a forelimb. Oh, that can't be good.
Fever Cure doesn't seem to have much to offer post-transformation. I suppose he'll be a bit more articulate after those sardines.
Ah, as I thought. Swarm them with the weak! Nuisances everywhere! Troll them into oblivion! Ha hahahaha!
Ahem. Also:
Is. I don't normally comment on grammar, certainly not in dialogue, but this is Twilight Sparkle we're talking about.
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Scootaloos everywhere, you say? Can I have one?
Bucky seeming half draconequus, having a far stronger magical output than expected, and now giving off a little chaos magic of his own. He's on the edge of becoming a full on draconequus, I just know it.
Twilight's change is a little worrying. It doesn't speak well of the princess of friendship to be talking about slowly disintegrating someone. Isn't the slow disconnect from certain things what started draconequus-twilight on her path?
Edit: The Shadowsprite idea makes me think of this video for some reason.
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It's not the opposite of what it was. Previously it was bacteria under a magnifying glass. Now it's a Biohazard sign. Think about that. Certain bacterias classify as Biohazard materials. Both are fields of medicine. The biohazard symbol need not mean weaponization. It can warn of danger in regards to certain biological materials, not unlike a magnifying class examining bacteria.
If nothing else, I'd say it's a "lunar"/shadow version of the same cutie mark.
Im curious, If a Pegasus goes through changes, does it just turn them into a Lunar Pegasus or something a bit different. I wanna see Ripple become a Lunar Pegasi o.O
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Shadow infused pegasus. Will still have feathers.
And a curious need to hoot when they see the moon.
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Speaking of Scoots, if she undergoes the shadow infusion, will her wings change and will she be able to fly on her own? Sorry, you just got me thinking with that comment is all.
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If she underwent the change, if being the key word, her wings would remain the same. That said... think of the times that Bucky has flown without wings in shadow form.
5941076 Awww.. Well I suppose that is still awesome in its own way haha. Hope the lunar pegasi make a recovery in numbers on down the road.
5940630 5940674 imma defend Kudz and say that this seems really rational.
Whine about it like this, what did they just do. They changed him but for what purpose?
To make him dangerous.
Cutie mark in bacteria turning into a biohazard sign is the reflection that he has become more deadly than he was before. He has become the weapon he was, through this change, meant to become. The experiment seems to have been a success so far.
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Well she's under Raptor training and Ripple wanted her and the raptors to undergo the Shadowbolt Initiative. I just figured it would be coming, in time.
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I want to bring up a point... How did their Nightmare Moon win in the first place? I believe it was because her sister wasn't willing to whatever it took to win. She didn't want to sacrifice her sister and in the end they lost everything. Half measures and ideals will only take you so far. Sooner or later you have to decide what you are willing to do to survive, and by then no one has a right to judge.
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Light sensitivity is a decent one. I merely forgot for a moment.
Dafuq? Twilight! What has happened to you? And Bucky...something definitely broke.
...I think I just crapped myself a little.
she wants to unwind them like they are a ball of thread...
i feel very afraid
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That was the Princess of Friendship, everypony! *golf clap*
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*Looks down between my legs*
...is that a brick?
Oh yes... I love the Shadowsprites idea~