How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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solution they could use is to physically regress them. set them to the biological age they mentally are. likely would allow their minds to begin developing again and they could have a new, and likely better, life out of it.
Bad Luna. Get a foal a stuffy... He was a good foal
Nice chapter considering the info in it. Fast capture of the mirror pony. Too fast... The poor fool didn't have time to react.
Sentinel got his hunt... Smelling
Twi still too innocent and dence... Considering she killed thousands with the sun she still judges Bucky for playing with minds
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Look everybody! Lord of Myth can do things even an alicorn can't do!
No... really, who would want to? Information is still being taken from them. They're non entities. Resources. They're a book with legs and a few basic needs.
5380538 makes no sense that it would be impossible considering what they are capable of naturally. turning flesh to stone, transforming into shadow.
and age spells ARE possible. don't you remember the magical duel episode? and i highly doubt the alicorn amuelt legitimately grants alicorn level power to begin with.
can't call it headcanon when the show tells otherwise.
and the WHO is bucky. and luna would know better than anyone that a second chance is deserved.
"There
I dont know what else there might be, but another good chapter tonight... Today... Whatever time it is..
Anyway :)
5380249 ......... why erase that memory? after getting fended off and all that, it is likely the ponyville ponies would have calmed down and be completely ashamed with themselves for what they almost did.
5380533
Too fast indeed. It'd be interesting if he was just a decoy duped into this by the actual guy with the burnt off cutie marks.
5380549
This was already discussed to death and even explained.
I'm sorry, I'm too tired to debate this. But this was done to protect ponies from feelings of shame and to prevent any feelings of pedophilia from awakening. This is not something that anypony wants to remember
And this is the last that I have to say about it.
5380558
He was asleep. He can't stay awake forever.
More details are coming.
For the past few chapters, I've been watching your total word count tick up and up. I'm waiting for the new milestone...
5380559 ......... this is the first time i ever asked it. and mistakes are known to repeat if not learned from.
Twilight needs to learn when to turn her mouth off.
Though that experiment could make an entertaining Lost Chapter.
Delete the first "The"
Didn't get him a stuffy.
True villains right there.
watched
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Um... to clarify, in case it wasn't clear.
The mirror travelers are lobotomised. One wanted a stuffy. They ARE the villains. Luna is still having a hard time wrapping her mind around the notion that these are adults with the minds of foals.
5380563
I can believe this if he's a villain.
Because justice never sleeps!
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Oh I was clear on what happened to them. I was making a joke on how "mean" it was for Luna to not get him a stuffy.
Kudz....go to sleep. You need to stop running yourself into the ground like this, it's and can't be good for your health (wishing there was a Fluttershy stare button) so Sleep! We'll all be here tomorrow.
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I was worried that I had written it poorly in my sleep deprived state.
5380563 5380558 he's just a stallion... Weak pony who needs sleep. Not like our writing machine kudz who doesn't sleep... Just takes a brake from time to time when the keyboard overheats from use.
5380574 I agree. Bad Luna
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5380564 soon
5380625
I have been writing since about 3 or 4 am this morning.
I could probably finish off one more chapter...
**Collapses under desk**
5380582 so turn them into foals........ Age spells exist in equestria as trixie displayed with the alicorn amulet. a regal sister could probably make it a permanent change.
in asense they aren't the villains anymore. they are just kids stuck in a terrible sityuation, least mentally. they have to do something with these ponies at some point. the best way i could think of is they are physically reverted back to foalhood and given new lives.
poetically it would be just. they come to this world for a new life, and they are given a new one.
and even the issue of the damage bucky did is dealt with. the parts bucky damaged would be parts that would be developing still when they are foals. effectively, they are reborn and the evil ponies are gone forever.
5380633 go to sleep.
Well that was anticlimactic... I thought there was going to be this huge epic fight, but no, Sparkler just petrified him.
Mister writing machine better be asleep...
5380633
I think we need a version of this that says "kudz" instead of "seth".
I would just like to say, when it comes to this story, I came for the plot, but stayed to see how many different ways you can ask for help finding typos.
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I had to do a double take. I thought that it said "stiffy" and not "stuffy".
Maybe i need sleep too.
Nah! I'M OFF TO MAKE SOME WUBS!!!!!
5380806 bad pony, very bad pony... we need to wash your mind
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Can't let you do that. (Magically glues you to ground). I'm not losing any epic thoughts today. Or ever.
5380820 i'll send Bucky to "foal" you
This is what I get for reading this after watching an old Dr. Who Episode:
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age spell would be wrong. He didn't mentally age regress them. They are brain damaged, they will be foal till the day they die. Imagine a child never growing up mentally but their body does. How do they react going through puberty again. How will they act as they continue to get older? It would be more a mercy to execute them. Permanent foalafication would also be bad, immortal children kept in a prison. Eventually they'll figure something is up, being kept prisoners for things the can't understand... very sad.
So instead of turning equestrian ponies into foals mentally.... he'll turn them into angst ridden teenagers?
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THE WUBS WOULD NEVER ALLOW IT!!
(Dissappears in a cloud of smoke, only to be replaced by Trixie)
Also, I think we all need to start a thing. A thing on Kudzuhaiku's prolific writing ability. Kudzu is the Chuck Norris of fanfics on that front.
So here's my start.
Kudzuhaiku doesn't sleep. He brainstorms the next chapter.
5380878 i kinda brought that up.
the damage he cause are likely to areas that would still be developing when they are faols. sending em back to that point will allow the brain to remake these sections. the developing brain is surprisingly malleable. new path ways would form thusly, and they could be raised in a far more stable environment.
i had already taken into account the brain damage. reducing them to that age and letting them age naturally after would allow them to grow new neural pathways to form that cognition bucky stole over time. the villain is dead, and a foal has taken its place. some legitimate science to it to be honest. not 100% accurrate i suppose but sitll.
This would suggest greatly Whitetail Woods is nestled within the borders of an ancient and still active caldera...like Yellowstone.
I am now awake.
5380565 Never procreate. Please, just don't. If you were to pass your mind set on to another generation it'd just be troublesome. Please, do this for me. Let me die knowing that you won't do anything sexual. Just give it up and keep doing what ever you think you're doing. Have fun with it, get dumber with your hypocrisy, but for the love of god don't... and I mean DON'T spread your stupid throughout the world.
5380917
I have an epic beard too. And it is filled with typewriters.
5380565
What Mistakes? Only mistake was the miscast Want It Need It Spell. It's not like remembering what happened would prevent ponies from being affected by it.
Uh... can some refresh my memory?
...wait, never mind.
Good, they should be afraid of things that go bump in the night!
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Hidden Hollow Fortress. The place where Luna does... questionable... research and what not. Remember the undead changeling?
5380917 kudzuhaiku types the words "roundhouse kick" and typos in the last 5 chapters mysteriously disappear.
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The council could have tried slandering Bucky but how would they defend all the frivolous PUBLIC FUND spending on the rich that Bucky axed off? That shows a total disconnect between what the council does and what the city actually needs.
What sort of responsible city council would vote for garbage collection every other week for normal residents vs twice a week for the rich when sanitation is becoming a major issue across town? If the rich want their garbage collected twice a week, they can pay for it out of their own pocket.
I am not one to bring morality into these situation, least of all when amoral methods get results faster/better than the standards, but I am thoroughly disgusted by Bucky's lobotomy magic. It is one thing to prevent a prisoner from causing trouble, because in war that's what prisoners are meant to do even if it costs them their limbs and lives, it is another to use this on them.
If Bucky makes them foals, then he should at the very least ensure they receive the proper care from that point on. No prisons, no scares, no fear of the dark. If he would not put a normal foal through it, he has no reason to put a lobotomite through it.