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You sir are a writing god. keep up the great work and I hope you feel better soon.
Wait... they're onto something there. Why did they all go in that direction, if not for the pregnant filly?
Whelp, this is going to freak out whatever it is that's controlling those wolves. We already have undead; I wonder what's next?
An excellent chapter.
There may be typos, but I couldn't see them past the awesomeness.
:)
Dear Sweet Bucking Mother Of Celestia, Luna and Discord. How fucking depraved is whatever is controlling these things getting that it is going after UNBORN Foals.
They really need a proper medic
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They Need this Medic
Commas needed here
So, was Sentinel basically putting himself between Derpy and the guard pegasi in terms of pecking order?
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No. He was just being Sentinel, offering respect to everypony he thinks is worthy.
It is a habit he will keep to for the rest of his life.
No words can describe how awesome this chapter was.
Shit has hit the fan... Cant wait to see how Derpy reacts to the new foal lol. I betcha she wont even
Let it go as soon as she sees it
Oh and I hope you feels betters *huggles*
Them bushes, eh? huehue
I just realised that they now have the embodiments of 3 of the 5 elemental elements. All they need now are unicorns specialized in wind and heart then they can let their powers combine.
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If the foul was the target then will grow up to be a very powerful or unique unicorn.
*slow clapping*
get those pesky typos, get 'em!
4830625 Depending on what is considered an element. in my opinion, you have:
Earth
Fire
Water
Air
Shadow
never heard elemental elements. I've always just called them elements.
I, literally, felt sick in some parts...ok, now i think that the "gore" tag applies...really, there is no way it don´t.
I love this history but it IS an emotional roller-coaster. Please, by no way i´m complaining !!!! Each chapter is better, but i have to say that, if at this point, you take a couple of days to booth write with more ease, and to take care of your health, i would LOVE to have a couple of days to recover too. One could say that i could just stop reading the updates. One clearly does not understand how addicted i´m at this story.
Typos !? Yeah, sure, just wait ´till the sickening images settle on my mind and i´ll look for then. Gimme a month or two. Or twelve....
I think that was supposed to be 'be'.
I didn't see anything else.
Wonderful as always. I hope the foal gets adopted into Bucky's Family.
4830758 I think that "Elemental Elements" Was used because they are effectively Incarnations of the elements themselves.
4830625 the traditional elements are fire, air, water, earth
This means there is always an opposing element
So if you stick shadow in, you should get the opposing element of light
This story also contains the elements of lightning and ice
According to my headcanon in order of opposition
Light/darkness
Fire/ice
Water/electricity
Air/earth
Arranged on 8 spokes around a centeral element of chaos
But this is just me thinking
Btw, what is the element of heart??? Elements are the fundimental forces of nature, where does heart go and what does it do? *sticks in chaos*
child birth is a beautiful (and disgusting) miracle
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4830976 kud are you listening?!
Poor thing, i hope the pain goes back to a managable level for you soon. I wish i was half as good at anything when im suffering as you are at writing. Its crazy.
This chapter was beyond amazing... i just wish i wasnt reading it while im alone at work in a creepy sounding building. Holy crap. Scared the heck out of me. I could have pulled a Pina and weed myself.
Chapter 90.
I've been wanting to ask this since around chapter 90, hell it might've been round chapter 85.
You update is around 2 chapters per day, 3000-ish words.
While balancing my social life, school, and reading, I could not read these faster than you post.
Since chapter frikin 90.
Oh my goodness dude, determination stat of S here. Constant crits, flinching fools, balls made of antimatter, two chapters per day.
Wow.
Anyway, a while back I realized I didn't remember what Bucky's coat or eye color was anymore as they were describing his burns. I was gonna ask on the most recent chapter if we could get another full description of what he currently looks like. Guess it's good it took so long to get around asking since he's changed a lot.
2 chapters a day, I can't get over this. It takes more than passion to go at that speed, you're amazing man.
Also, all caught up, finally!
Kudzu, if you are in pain, TAKE A BREAK. You are more important right now, don't put yourself in pain trying to write for us. These last 6 chapters... the buildup is more than appropriate for this level of insanity, and I'm assuming that the foal will be of incredible importance in the future. Good work Kudzu, I'm officially shell shocked, just... wow...
You're pumping out 2-3 chapters a day. I think the community will forgive you for taking time to get better. Don't slave over this if you could be using the time getting better.
I am with some of the others on this.... I love the chapter and the updates, but don't hurt yourself to do it guy!
Having said that, and I know this isn't a question and answer session.....
But....
BonBon..... Gay or Lesbian are about preferences, they are not religious orders. lol If you feel like riding the wild Bucky then you do not loose membership to the club if you have a go. You want foals anyway...... What is the issue really?
Anyway, awsome chapter and I look forward to the next but if you need a break then take it!
Wow. This chapter was insane. Action-packed, dark, depressing, but ending with a bit of hope (which makes it all worth it).
All of that build-up is finally beginning to pay off.
Well Sombra still appears to need a new type 4 host. The unicorn foal may have the potential to be one. Although that would be dependent on if the host needs to be related or not.
Oh my god, Sparkler....p.gr-assets.com/540x540/fit/hostedimages/1393049720/8654426.jpg
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He has a tan coat, a black mane, (get it, beer, black and tan?) and he has grey eyes. Had grey eyes. Now a grey eye.
'He wrapped barely moving body of the foal in a protective bubble.' *he wrapped THE barely moving body* Just a heads-up bro.
Well....I like the direction Lyra and bon bon are heading. I think it's odd how their was a family still around...very suspicious...
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In communities like these, you have families that live dozens of miles out. They harvest their grain, they haul it to the central town, and then it gets distributed. Not everybody lives in the town and you get a lot of isolated farmhouses spread over a wide area.
There are still other families on the isle, and they are safe now, even if they are not specifically mentioned in the story, it is implied, due to the various homesteads they find as they travel.
i, uh wow.
such sparkler, much bad-ass.
i just noticed that how much sparkler is like rhino in warframe, it clicked to me with the roar.
Would not Thistle be producing milk if she is far enough along in her pregnancy?
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She's about five months in.
4833438 Ah, I think it varies, but yeah, does sound a bit early for milk.
Interesting. How does moving petrification work? I know basic physical reaction physics and I know the those particles are condensely packed to create stone. Every particle would need to be individually enchanted in order to link to her nervous system and telekinetically; or something else, in order to move accordingly. If I'm correct I'm pretty sure pony brains do not have multi-tasking brains, unless they've developed such as a side effect of their sentience. Even if this was so, they'd be considerably smarter and heavily advanced in tech, in just a few hundred years.
I know I'm missing a whole bunch of other shit, but I'm pretty sure you get the jist of it. Anybody care to elaborate how this works?
4832717 Oh hell, imagine if she gets Steel Skin? Though is Rising Star then Ember or Valkyr?
The purge continues as minor spelling errors are picked out. And well... I don't think I can finish all of these and the lost chapters before New Years.
Strong drink might have helped with the pain but rest helps too. And I still say this even though it's over 18weeks old. Oh well.
Holy gobshite that was scary and intense... jeebus cripes on a stick...
Awesome job... awesome job.
I demand BonnyxBucky
Hmmm... In my search, I seem to have stumbled across this chapter. Mamamama rescues Harpy from the vermin
... Damn. I think that's all I have to say. Damn.
ugh that foal birth that was wrong. at least the foal made it.
god this I could never forget
I knew where you were going with this as soon as you stated the mother was dying
and I hoped more than anything it wouldn't happen
and even after everything that has happened, before and after, this scene I feel is the most horrific in the story
Man, that was a rough read right there at the end, with the lititle village and onward. Still, great chapter, and great story. It's a great read so far!