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Poor Sentinel. Uncontrolled Boners whenever he thinks about Moonbow from now on. Poor little guy has it rough.
huh....who is that stallion Berry ran to? I can't think of any white stallions she's conversed with....
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Barley... remember him?
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Yeah... so does Sentinel.
5047259 OHHHHH RIGHT. The old man that has a thing for Luna.
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Fun fact about adaptive evolutionary biology.
In matriarchal species where the females are significantly larger, male penis size adapts, becoming proportionately larger for successful impregnation of the much larger females.
YOU'VE JUST BEEN SCIENCED!
aviators
some day
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Old man? This is not a human in Equestria fic.
5047243 You've read the whole story, right?
You know. If he starts getting boners whenever he thinks about Moonbow, he is gonna have a hell of a time finding more fillies for his future herd.
Random Filly #Whatever:So you're forming a herd, at our age? Why?
Sentinel: Well the Filly that will be the Alpha told me that while is in training that I find mo-*Suddenly gets a boner thinking of Moonbow and becomes extremely embarrassed and unable to talk so runs away*
Random Filly #Whatever:Oh My *Blushing*
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Barely.
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People Barley remember Barely... I mean Barely Remember Barley.
5047328 yeah, i just don't remember coat colors very well. I though he was green, for some reason.
Something just crossed my mind...
Was Blueblood banished along with the other nobles? Or did Celestia spare her "nephew" and subject him to another punishment?
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There is no Blueblood.
fell
-a
I just noticed: Twilight sounds MUCH more regal in the Chaseverse then in the cartoon, where she still have a little childish tone. She matured a lot in the last months, with all that hapenned lately, is that it ?
Also, again, playing with our feelings, going from übber comedy to the ultimate emotional feelings.
5047310 You mean that, proportionally, maybe even literally, Sentinel is hung ?
Gosh, Dinky and Piña will have problem finding a worth mate, with Sentinel as a parameter for, errrr, that, if ya know wacha i mean...
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He's hung like a horse.
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No Blueblood?
Why not?
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Well I think when she had to rescue a flockmates foal from an abusive orphanage run by a very evil Foal Protective Services in a City that is based on kidnapping and orphans, it probably jumpstarted her maturing as a Princess.
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Yay! Somebody's noticed.
Early in The Chase, Twilight was uncertain and nervous. She wasn't comfortable with her authority.
Now, she is grown up and quite self confident.
5047418 Good call...that was a really strong break point for her...
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Her real turning point was slapping Celestia on the cheek and declaring war.
5047387 Oh, so he's not in this and is not mentioned
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He doesn't exist.
5047465 Oh so you knocked him out of yor story's universe
5047310 does that mean that Bucky, having been altered with so many Lunar pony traits, will get his penis enlarged beyond its already ginormous girth?
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No. He will remain hung like a barrel.
So many wonderfull things on this chapter, it´s hard to track then all. Please, say that The Mare will receive an orifice in the front, with a HUGE focus crystal that Bucky can power up...and call it Wave Motion Gun !
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I think Moon Stone Cannon would be a much more Appropriate name
Am I making up this on my mind, or you´ve beed droppping hints that Ripple´s affection towards Rising Star is increasing ? Maybe even to the point where she may accept him in a more intimate way ?
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She worries about him. She loves him madly. But she is a lesbian. That's how she bends.
5047644 Yeah, i had the feeling that Ripple would be more or less the Lyra/Bon Bon counterpart to Rising Star´s herd but, still, seems that she is connecting deeper with him lately...wich is interesting since, in theory, being younger, i though that she would be less prepared to take care (emotionally, not in a sexual way) of Rising´s needs...actually, it seems a little motherly bewhavior from her...again, considering her age, this is not expected.
Yay! I missed Barley. And now he finally gets to meet all the foals that will eventually be around his bedside when he (eventually) dies. And he can finally congratulate them all on the impending new batch of foals. And now they can finally continue clan pickled's great pastime of celebratory drunken shagging.
Also we can finally get an update on how Slate is doing. Changelings have always been the least explained part of mlp for me. I always enjoy seeing how authors portray them.
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She is one year younger than Loch Skimmer. She's healed a bit after learning how to fight. Now, she is secure and confident in her own skin. She knows she can take apart something if it threatens her. She feels empowered. She's the warrior in their herd.
She's also broody, like Derpy is broody, and it falls on her to watch her herd mates like a hawk. If one is down, she responds.
Dinky is such a shout out to Skitter from Worm. As long as she doesn't go Kelphri on us, she should be fine.
Bucky! If you want your throne of #1 character back you must try harder to overcome Sentinel!
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You can't stop those fluffy ears.
YOU JUST CAN'T
Its been so long since any Barley, its going to be like a new character. I could say that I barley remember him :p Im expecting a 'You seem so much older' from both sides of that hug.
I'm kindof surprised that Sentinel wasn't officially deflated Bucky's son during this trip. I guess it will be covered later!
and?
Inb4 Dinky becomes queen of the Changelings.
5047697 Actually, I can name one thing even less explained that played a major role.
King Sombra
"CRYSTALS" and "Slaves" were, I think, his only lines. Oh, and screaming "NOOOOO!" Darth Vader-esque. No backstory really, no reasons why, just a minor bit of exposition that made little to no sense.
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Well the whole "lost empire of ambient love that seems to be a massive reproduction of 'Hearthwarming the Kingdom minus any unicorns or pegasi' thing " sort of tails into why the race of love-eaters' attack on Canterlot makes so little sense.
I mean how long was there between season 2 finale and season 3 opening? Postpone the attack for a few months and then walk up to the gate and say " hey we are a race of beings who are seemingly dependent on the love of others for survival and you seem to have a lot floating around here now that that smokey guy is gone, mind if we move in oh princess of love (and hopefully tolerance)?" I get that no one knew the Crystal Empire was coming back, but it couldhave gone down like that.
5048854 I have a similar reaction every time I am playing Halo on XBL, and I hear little kids swearing with their voices cracking. Then their mother comes in and scolds them and I feel like a
Poor Sentinel. His innocence will be his undoing.
Ah, home at last. I can't wait to see how Ponyville has changed.
An example of how well the characters are kept is evident in the first part of this chapter. We are given Sentinel's point of view when explaining what was happening, and how everyone was laughing. Every one is mentioned by name. Berry, Derpy, Bonbon, Dinky, ect. The only one not mentioned by name is Bucky, instead he is referred to as 'father'.
Sentinel's character traits are so well set that even his point of views are exactly that. The way he views every thing. Right down to calling Bucky his father. First and foremost.
Is is amazing how every character is know and so well defind. This is just one of the many reasons I find myself addicted to this story. Please, keep it up!
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One thing I truly love about this story, is how well the characters are done. Each of them have distinct personalities that never seem to get confused or miss written. They are always displayed the same way, same wording, attitude, thought patterns. The only time they change is when they as a whole change. These changes are always done in a believable manner that is beneficial to the character and the change always remains from the point it occurs.