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Yay! Back to school!
...I wonder if she'll be in time for the spelling bee...
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I hope that pun doesn't give people hives.
Well, I was hoping to see the evening, but never mind. I wonder what DT's reaction will be when she sees Dinky again.
Most likely piss herself and run away. Good.
Go Derpy and Berry. Woo.
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Derpy's reflections about the evening forthcoming. And Berry's.
You update fast, I approve! Another nice chapter, sexy and sweet.
I can't read "the birds and the bees" without thinking of Dinky's special talent.
I continue to love Berry Punch. She is going to make this relationship work come Tartarus or tidal surges, and there's not a thing Bucky can do to stop her.
Looking forward to more, especially how the rest of the class reacts to the return of Dinky Hooves, apimancer.
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Dinky Doo Bee Do Bee Do.
4342559 Man, these are so bad they just sting, aren't they?
Very nice. You update fairly quickly on this story so I wouldn't be surprised if you have another chapter up by tonight. (no pressure)
But seriously, well done. I'm glad you had Berry and Derpy go the route of "we do this all together" instead of the "we will go ahead and Bucky can catch up later". I'm interested to see what the pegasi and earth pony foals will do when the magical class is in session though. They can't exactly do the practical side of magic, even if they listen to lectures and understand the concepts behind it.
4342646 Worse yet, more just keep buzzing around in my head.
Two things.
1. The fastest way into Derpy's proverbial pants is to treat her kids well. Okay.
2. He is with two mares who physically over match him because he is well... him. So Death by Snu-snu is a possible hazard.
It is ok that Bucky is a bit shy, but if they are going to do the next step, i would like him to be a bit more agressive and surprised them both with it. I mean that he should come totaly out of his shell this moment and beeing the one in charge in this moment, maybe if he is a bit drunk.
I like Berry Punch at most in this fanfic, but i want to see her only one time totally surprised and powerless if he is going to use his magic for some funny business or just show one time that he could be more bold if he want to. He don´t need to stay this way after that
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#1 Flock behaviour. Solely from my own perspectives, I would see pegasi looking at prospective providers in a positive light. Bucky isn't the least bit physical, has terrible observation powers, and is not at all like a pegasus... But he's kind to foals. And that goes a long way.
Just an opinion, though one that influenced the story creation.
#2 One tribe pulls wagons and plows all day. One tribe flies and experiences extreme g-forces. One tribe sits in a library and studies. One of these things is not like the other...
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Magical education is actually going to take place outside, as a safety precaution, when it actually begins to happen. Bucky insists and puts his hoof down.
Minor bit of a spoiler I suppose.
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Argh, I totally planned to use this word in the near future. Well, I was going to go for "apimancy" but same diff.
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Something to that end is planned. I mean, he's already shown that he can tickle. And Bucky is capable of being devious, as are most unicorns.
I mean, Bucky is capable of using magic without the usual visual indicators. That's sneaky.
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I don't think there's anything stopping you. Well, except the pedants who might point out that from a strict interpretation of the suffix, it actually means telling the future through bees, not bee magic. But no one likes them.
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I personally am abuzz about Dinky's bright future.
Oh crap, I made Fluttershy cry with that one.
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Your right, i just don´t think she had enough already.
I say this maybe more often every time if i really like a fanfic, but i would like to see maybe the next generation of their offsprings, maybe with some other tags adventure or maybe Dark.
I just ask because i know you would do a great story, i said it already, but you are one of the top 3 Writers, wich i could find till now.
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Speaking of things not like the other, in your world building are you going address the following?
1. The two other tribes in Equestria: Bat ponies and Crystal Ponies?
2. Griffons appears to be part of Equestria. (If the games are any indication they must at least have an enclave). Are there hippogriffs around?
I know you're just concentrating on the main three tribes but it would be interesting to know how you would handle those ideas in this setting.
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Crystal ponies are a deviation of the current three tribes.
Lunar pegasi are their own herd structure, never part of the Founder's vision.
I have thought about them though.
I kept things simple for the sake of the story. Crystal ponies were gone for over a thousand years. If lunar pegasi were tossed in, they could theoretically replace the solar pegasus in the triune model.
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I have a sociological story on the drawing board about a hippogriff. Going to be a lot of racism in it. It is about being trapped between two races and not quite being accepted by either.
It exists only in rough drafts, but it is probably going to be a mature story, so I can comfortably delve into a number of subjects.
Including the fact that male griffons, being feline in nature, have barbed penises.
Holy hell, good author...
Discovered this story last night, have not binged this hard for a while. Keep up the great work. I'll leave some of my actual thoughts on the story elements a bit later when I'm not on a mobile keyboard.
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Just me really. Occasionally readers point out mistakes and I fix them.
This fic manages to be both adorable and intellectually fascinating at the same time.
Well, after doing some heavy thinking into the way you've portrayed unicorns, I feel the need to ask you something.
Did you draw the need for serious emotional control from other magic-users in fantasy? Because the level of restraint and inherent danger remind me of psykers.
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Many, many sources.
4343531 You. I like you.
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Maybe now it's Dinkys turn at acting like the Queen Bee.
thinking about school, i kinda wonder how Silver Spoon is doing. We don't hear much or anything of her perspective in the story. I wonder what she will do now that that incident happened.
As an asthmatic, I cringe every time I read the line 'perfume'.
still trying to clear the sleepy from his head
and maybe bit more spooning than usual
1. Uhh... Don't you mean Sleep? Or is this just a pun?
2. And maybe a bit more spooning than usual.
It seems I would be a very good magic users, it being tied to emotions and all that.
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Are you saying that because you're an emotional person or because you have good control over them? They way I understand it is in order to be a strong magic user you'd have to have strong emotions but also great control over them in order to be the best one can be with magic.
Nice job Kud heheheh, back to school!
I wonder... how this will roll out.
4342533 Heheh, these comments are abuzz with witty replies...
Yeah? ye-no?
okay )_o_o)_
I wish women were like Berry, telling you what to do and how to do it, while full of understanding.
I am a man, but I act like a computer.
And a computer needs exact commands to function.
Or you'll get a syntax error and recieve a blue screen of death.
6829639 Error. Probability program has stopped working. Attempting Reboot.....Reboot Failed. Immediate and total shutdown required.
6918681 Insert installation disc into C drive slot for immediate OS program download!
6829639 Part of it is to keep in mind tone of voice, and to think about things from the other end. Part of the problem is boys just go "Well this is different from how my guy friends are, therefore it is CONFUSING and not worth the effort". Often times boys don't really TRY to understand from the ladies' perspective.
I'd reccomend maybe trying to read the book "Men are from Mars, women are from Venus".
Also maybe try asking some female friends for help too, instead of just lovers.
Personally with interacting with both, I typically find boys to be more confusing.
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i got an idea.
she could do the spelling bee with bees.
like make the letters out of them and watch and laugh as everypony freaks the fuck out.
I think that would make for a BEEutiful scene!
Yes i know im about 900 chapters late...
Holy hell Bucky reaaly reminds me of... me. That's a slightly disturbingly close representation of my thought process. Down to the fears, confusion, slight temper and miscommunication. I need a Berry Punch to explain things without judgement...