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Well. That escalated quickly...
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5k words.
4 word comment.
So is Bucky
i can't call a one big chapter a mini arc... yet, i liked it... a lot has happend while a lot was missed (where are the fights? long way in a super charged train
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I can't heeeaaar yooouuu!
AYE, AYE CAPTAIN!
Ooooohhhhhhh
awesome chapter (as always)
well i knew something was gonna go pearshaped but......... yeahp that exceeded my expectations.
wait a minute, wouldn't tiwlight actually KNOW what changelings are because of the dimension travel thing? or at least have an understanding of what is going on i guess.
do not know if she ever saw one, but we were only shown them interacting with sombra and not the time in-between, but she found information about that world's changelings.
even if the magic is different the origins of a species would not be too much so and two worlds so very similar would have very similar magic as well.
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The alicorn of war ran from a fight. This is important.
flew
And I can't imagine who is going to pay for the cost of replacing the enormous amounts of train track that they broke together...
5111595 the would be alicorn of war did what needed to be done, get the train cargo (note, not the train) as a whole to ponyville. the rest are detail... mad ponys don't deal with small details, that is for the sane ones
he orderer his forces to fight the intruders while going with a shit storm (literal) forward in a runaway devil train
he did good
Also just remebered that i am eagerly awaiting the eventual time when the fate of the changelings will be revealed in the new Equestria once the smoke clears.
Also curious to see Rainbow's opinion on Twilight's new look.
Also Bucky was quite insane, it will take days for the Myrmidons to catch up.
Also all the towns along that railway are now quite screwed for a while with all that happened. Good thing they were just resupplied.
How often are we gonna hear that? Because my instincts tell me a lot.
And that makes me nervouscited.
I've never read someone literally shitting themselves before.
something about that line irks me, but I don't know what.
on the train line
Twilight Sparkle flew off to look at
Learning how winged creatures attract mates, perhaps?
Gotta be completely honest here, except for the ice golems, I'm a little disappointed. I was expecting more from this part of the story.
But I can understand what it's like to feel drained, both mentally and physically, after such a chapter where a lot of stuff went into it. Now, what about the ponies he ordered to stay back? Did they get bored when the attackers saw the demon-train and fled?
That... was... AWESOME!!
That was one hell of a ride (no pun intended). I mean, only a mad pony like Bucky could think of doing that and, oh boy, he sure didn't disapointed. How you deal with several supposed attempts of sabotage or raids? Making the saboteurs and raiders flee making the train nightmare fuel.
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Edit: They're her murderous, freakishly devoted to their mother, foals.
Maybe?
I had a disappointing day that has been forgotten after reading this chapter. Thank you sir!
Um, not sure if you realized this, but the steam pouring off the engines, especially the amounts Bucky and Twilight were working with are going to make the Badlands humid. That humidity is going to turn into a metric shit ton of rain. The Badlands aren't going to be a desert for much longer, unless I missed something really significant.
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Everybody wanted to see Bucky fight... I went against expectations.
You'd almost expect that with how much he keeps pushing his abilities that he'd force himself to turn into an alicorn on accident without any outside help. It can't be healthy channeling their level of power as often as he does. Hell I could see that if it does happen that he somehow binds his powers to something other than war. Granted you've already said it's not going to happen but if it did Bucky would find a way to buck the system.
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ALICORN OF RUTTING!!
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should be "They're her murderous, freakishly-devoted-to-their-mother... foals."
Ehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe
This was the best part xD
well that was fun
Should have said something sooner.
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Ohh come on you were all thinking it!!!!!!
5111720 That's drunken rutting, get it right. Though I'd also see him as an alicorn of Mischief or Protection as well.
They're
OMFG I laughed SO MUCH at this chapter!
Edit: This is the kind of chapter that really really makes me want to be able to fave/like individual chapters.
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Cadance is technically the alicorn of rutting.
I was wondering why they didn't put Half the locomotives in the back, I guess this is why.
Also, What an homage to Scorch on his birthday. I'm sure he was so excited he had to relieve himself with Bucky's mom.
Ohh and Twilight... you just need to get laid already. Have your pen pal surgically remove the stick from your Plot with his tool.
Ahem... Flash Ahahhh~
5111544 such good wow
5111544 But on a serious note, I thoroughly enjoyed the chapter as well seeing more of Luna's myrmidons. Twilight isn't a commander , she is a ambassador of sorts. So it was no wonder that they didn't trust or really respect twilight when it comes to military escort missions.
One week normal speed, half a day 2 alicorn speed.
Give me the normsl speed, I have the sudden urge to do math!!
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you got it wrong Kudz,
Cadance is the alicorn of LOVE making
Barley is the soon to be Alicorn for mindless rutting and perversive behaviour in general
Barley will not die, he will ascend to his rightful place beside luna
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I want to note that War is not about fighting. Its about winning through any means. Bucky could have fought off all the forces, but the chances of losses were high. if not life loss at least some of the shipment would have been. In this scenario the best hope was to escape with no conflict and that was exactly what Bucky did. He came up with an ingenious tactic that won with minimum losses. 10 Locomotives and 10 tenders with Thousand of miles of Track damage... but at lest the Food made it.
Engineer: Hey, Stevedore where these suppose to be chiller cars?
Steve: No, Mostly dry goods and some fresh vegetables.
Engineer: Ummm well the dry goods aren't so dry anymore, and we now have frozen vegetables.
Steve: well, Shit.
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Really, my whole intent here was to show that Bucky is more than just rushing in with brute force. When beating a retreat he applies brute force as well. But he is capable of retreat. He's not quite a one trick pony.
Quite.
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Sorry in playing war games where the objective is something other than beat the crap out of everything that moves I have come to find that getting drawn into the fight is the biggest mistake anyone on an escort mission can make.
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This is what went through my head with the train being described as a demon from Tartarus.
That train is fucking scary. Also reminds me of Satan's Train.
5111781 I dunno...how bout Terror Train...?
CHOO CHOO MOTHERFUCKERS
The train sure didn't stop...
5111940 Herd?
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Doom train.
Or if you know Inside Gaming. The Conductor would be proud.
Train of Consequences...
The ice golems were a lovely touch.
Bucky just created their world's first bullet train. And his sanity is finally broken completely, how will this affect his normal life? Also, I was wondering why you weren't updating... turns out you were creatino a mega chapter. You never fail to impress, nor do you ever stop writing.
Are you planning on mentioning the Daring Do special book set that Bucky gave Dinky for her birthday at some point? You're given a little tip of the hat to almost every OTHER little detail in this story...
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Herd.
You said that the train had the breaks in the engine, but for a train normally there is breaks on every car. If you try to use the breaks with them just in the front the the rest of the train's mass and speed could cause the train to fold, but at this size I'm unsure.
You said that the train stretch from one horizon to the other. I was going to say that is wrong because the horizon is 15 miles away and the train is 4, but I looked it up to make sure and I was worng. The horizon is 3 miles away, but that still means that if you stood at the middle of the train it would 2 miles in each direction not reaching the horizon. If you stood at one end of it, it would stretch past the horizon, thought if you stood on the train I think you could see the the end. I belive it is 3 yard up to see every next mile out so as long as the part of the train is 9 feet up you could see the end.
"Stretch form one horizon to the other" was probably just ment as a hyperbole literacy device, and I am just looking it to much