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Oh, Filthy... When your spawn starts bullying one something other than a Pegasus, say, first seen victim is another Earth Pony, I think you're instilling your racist values incorrectly...
... Not that there's anything good about such values in the first place.
Continue, sir.
Hmmm Somehow i think he is love her to fast, well i think this is what is meant in last sentences.
I thought or still think he would noticed his love for her at the dinner, wich he was offering to make her feel just a little bit better.
Your writing is really good, i enjoy it every time.
PS: Could it be that you planned to write different perspective in this fanfic for each tribe? I think i like the idea
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Not so much love, not yet, but more of an unsettling feeling of needing something and not finding his usual comfort in his solitary life.
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Well i think this is somehow naturally if he just think about his parrents and maybe he even noticed, that he has no or not many friends yet. Could i ask what his cutiemark means? I think it had something to do with alchohol and drinking much or something like it right?
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He has a hops plant. An ingredient for brewing beer.
Buckminster Bitters was meant to brew beer...
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Well i read to much storys lately, i think i just mixed it up then. Alright, the drinking was just a suggestion, i doesn´t know it that good anymore. Normaly i make sure to translate something if i am not sure with it. So befor i make it a spam here or an accident spoiler, i just want to congratulate you for your good work again
Oh look, Filthy's a moron in this one. Why am I not surprised. And Bucky? You're looking for a house that smells of muffins.
4299215 You mean like Applebloom?
4299407 Yes, Applebloom.
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I've known some intelligent racists.
I notice that you mention only Filthy Rich, when there were two fairly stupid ponies in that exchange of viewpoints.
Have muffins even been mentioned?
Does Cheerilee still seem like the heartless villain?
4300062 Two? No, I understand Dash's logic. Filthy is an idiot through ignorance. If he knew what Dash had to do each day, I'm pretty sure he'd soon change his opinions.
No, they have not mentioned I believe, and it was just a joke.
Maybe not a villain, but she still did not want to hear Dinky's side of events. So she needs a wake up slap as well. Teachers are supposed to be impartial and understanding. I know this doesn't happen, but the whole event was too OOC for her to me.
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Rainbow Dash seems to entertain the notion that earth ponies really don't work all that hard.
Cheerilee has zero tolerance hitting policy. That whole scene made it pretty clear. She's under pressure from all sides to do this or do that and give concessions for every little thing.
And she can't. If she gives on one issue, even a seemingly minor one, everypony will expect, no, demand for her to give on the other issues.
And yes, this is all slightly OOC. It has to be. Otherwise, the story premise fails.
4300103 I'm not say Dinky shouldn't get into trouble, but that Cheerilee, from that scene, never even thought to ask why Dinky hit Diamond Tiara, she went straight for the punishment.
And really? I think Dash would know exactly how hard they work, you know, being friends with Applejack.
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Applejack seems to have plenty of time to go on adventures, vacations, iron pony competitions, family gatherings, run through the White Tail Woods, disappear and go down to Dodge City for who knows how long, take off and visit the Crystal Empire on multiple occasions, etc.
Applejack really doesn't work that hard.
She has an awful lot of free time.
Rarity actually spends more time working than Applejack does. Rarity is always under some deadline and too career focused to do much else. One of her failing points within the show too.
There are plenty of earth ponies that probably work harder than Applejack.
Like Big Mac.
Who takes up the slack while his sister off doing all the things mentioned above?
Everybody, say it with me.
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ya know, thats EXACTLY what i did.
I started to read this fic with low to no expectations at all. The ammount of chapters almost driving me out.
Now i look forward to a sleeplees night, since i won´t stop ´till the very end. Really, really great work !!!
I have conflicting thoughts on this fic.
The very idea of these... Race differences is abhorrent to me.
You know how easy it is to generate conflict with them, which is why I suppose that they are in this story.
Even still, it irks me to no end to see it here in action.
Who says that an earth pony cannot be individualistic and introverted?
Who says that a unicorn cannot have the strength and hard grit of an earth pony?
Or how a pegasus could be the mix of the two?
Bleh. One has to wonder why alicorns have not massed produced in your universe yet.
Sterile perhaps?
Whatever. I suppose a superior master race shall come up...
Eventually after centuries and centuries of gene therapy.
Then they can dominate and annihilate all the others in a glorious blood bath.
4365122 Ever heard of the Robbers. cave experiment? One interesting thing of note is that the two groups in the experiment formed two opposing personas(?) and conformed to them. One group acted rough and tough, while the other acted 'proper'.
When it's obvious which group you belong to, people tend to conform to that group's ideals. In Equestria, everypony is pressured to conform to a specific culture (might be using wrong words, sorry) from birth. I wouldn't be surprised if there were many ponies who didn't conform to their tribe's ideals, but I also imagine they'd be in the minority.
Also, I'd like to call bullshit on that gene therapy bloodbath thing. Rather, I imagine that ponies as a whole would take gene therapy when it's widely available, and the remainder would die out. Eventually, the planet Equus would be populated by a homogeneous species with legends of how they were once seperated into three. Maybe.
Assuming ponies learn of gene therapy. Assuming their biology even remotely resembles ours, and the laws of physics themselves aren't greatly different - and I can't help but doubt this.
*Note: I don't actually know what gene therapy is, exactly. I imagine that it's the artificial alteration of one's genes, ore the genes of one's offspring, but I don't know for aure.
4365122 Racial/Cultural differences are real. Stop drinking the blue pill kool aid. This fic has nothing to do with one race being better than the other. All races and cultures have their ups and downs.
And I think this is where I have to check out and give you a downvote. The whole concept of the story hinges on the differences and conflicts between the various pony races, and it doesn't fit the setting in the slightest on top of making several of the ponies blatantly ooc.
If you had set this story shortly after the unification of the tribes, maybe 50 years or so, this would be a really good story. But having it set over a thousand years after the three tribes were unified just makes this whole thing incredibly unbelievable and destroys the suspension of disbelief necessary to enjoy it. It's almost literally impossible for the various ponies in the story to know so little about the other tribes and for the various cultural norms not to have blended together into a more unified Equestrian culture, with differences based primarily on location rather than by tribe. Completely ignoring the fact that Derpy's family is far from being the first multi-tribal family in Equestria, several of the ponies in canon completely oppose the racial dynamics you've created here.
Even with that AU tag up there, the fact that it's so long after the unification of the tribes destroys the whole concept of the story. Unless, of course, you're basing the entire thing on some entirely rebuilt version of Equestria where the tribes were just recently unified and all that stuff with Nightmare Moon, Hearth's Warming, and immortal alicorns never happened. Which I suppose could be explained in the prequel.....that's incomplete.....with only a single 2.5k word chapter.......
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It's alright.
hmmmmm......... after reading these previous chapters i think i can smell a bit of a problme. largely you are basing far too much of the sociology on the likes of twilight and rainbow dash. using them as bases is good but it is pretty clear that most ponies are not like tiwlight or rainbow dash. the itnellectual part might work, as their powers come from how their minds mold magic and create effects, but tne neurosis, antisocial aspects, do not work as that is something more tiwlight's issue than something cultural. with pegasi i can see physicality as being cultural, but not to the same standards as the really aggressive rainbow dash.
do not know what earth ponies are but i can't help but fear you are gonna kinda shit on them. you already said something about earth ponies instictually relying on pegasi. that makes not a lick of sense considering the raw strength of earth ponies. aerial protection is not needed when you have the physical force to make most mundane predators regret even looking at you. they are the most durable and physically powerful pony type, able to destroy homes insgle hoofed and even crush stone if needed. the earth ponies are the one species of pony whose aiblitie are the easiest to use for defensive and even offensive purposes.
do kinda like the idea that the poniesw, while sapient, and not entirely removed from animalistic tendencies. though as i said the cultural stuff is kinda iffy.
The feels are weird. How many more chapters I got? Almost 200? Fuck.
Dude, with that ending? Fuck no.
I honestly can't tell if you are trying to use reverse psychology or not. If you are then it's totally working...
Sooo... Unicorns are like pony hipsters?
And not a single contraction could be found.
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Funny, I found 92.
He's a few of them.
5173383 I meant in the dialogue. Like,
She uses "i am" way more than a normal
personpony would. Ehh, it's not that important. To each his own.5173912 It's most likely a character specific trait.
Seriously, I don't think I've ever read a story that didn't want to be read, but this might be the first.
Some of the dialogue felt a bit wooden, especially between Dinky and Sparkler. Regardless, I'm still relatively intrigued by this, so... onward!
Liking it so far. Five chapters in and no bumps, I figured I would have stuff to nitpick over but so far only one error.
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wobbling on her hooves and trying to carefully fold her in wings.
her wings in
I think I'll like this story.
I started to re-read and this chapter caught my attention.
At the stage the present story is at, if familial link is as strong as this story portrays, I really feel sorry for Larch.
At first the constant change of character perspective annoyed the living shit out of me so I stopped reading it. But I found myself wanting to know what happen next, and my brain just kept naging at my subconscience to want to finish so I picked it up again. You must be doing something right for me to want to keep reading even after getting annoyed with it.
...
Did I mention how much I love your pegasi headcanon in this fic
That's good table manners? Man sign me up! hahaha, nice job!
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You made me laugh very hard xD
The Unicorn belief that they should have only one of two foals, will only lead to their extinction. Take 50 males and 50 females and pair them up they each have 1 offspring, pair the offspring off and they have 1 offspring themselves, each generation halves itself until there is none left. If they all have 2 then you keep the same population. You need 3 to make the population go up.
I'm going to say the obvious here that, assuming an equal birthrate of sexes, unless each female has an average of at least two heterosexual children who live long enough to breed, the species will go extinct.
Maybe you meant two or three foals?
So bucky wasn't the first to say it.
Rereading story again for fun, I remember first finding it at under 300 chapters and now look where we are 868 chapters and no end in sight. Best story right here
Dinky has been elevated to best filly. Sweet potatoes are the greatest thing ever!
Derpy's family is my ideal family.
You know you're crazy when you talk to yourself right?
7074541 I think it is funny... maybe a little cute.
7222411 Well I did laugh with the reference to a lion tamer story and possible author, but he now said in his current blog he's sharing his insanity. Don't agree, It's a long haul catching up to the current chapter but to me, it only makes Kudzu a genius.
7074541 naw. Your only truly crazy when you argue with yourself and lose.
4744588 I dunno about that. Just look at how there's still problems with Men & Women communicating together.
I mean I think some of this is exagerating, but many places in Equestria are primarily based upon 1 Pony species being the dominant one. Ponyville is mostly Earth Ponies, and has been Earth Pony Centric for a long time. Canterlot is mostly Unicorns. Even out west like Appleloosa, you still have a lot more Earth Ponies than any other tribe.
Hell even in the mixing pot that is the USA, there's still a lot of racism and such. We still have stereotypes like "All Asians are good at Math", not even acknowledging that it's NOT BIOLOGICAL, but CULTURAL. Which is why a lot of poorer Asians like those from Laos typically have below average test scores. That's just ONE that remains to this day.
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And then the one you lost to takes over your mind and controls your body until you can actually win an argument against them.
I cried a little...