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should probably have a comma after caves (also Firefox spell check tells me that spelling of realized is wrong, but I know you like to use British spellings)
your
Curse you Kudzu, this defines Sentinel's future! You and your cliffhangers...
LEMME SLEEP, CELESTIA DAMMIT !!!
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What the tartarus i´m saying !? DO NOT LEMME SLEEP, KEEP SENDING MORE !!!!!
Normally I would say that survival of the race would come first, but it seems pretty clear to me that these Lunar Pegasi really aren't all that interested in that so I say that arranged marriage is out. If Moonbow were to come along that would be just fine with me but marriage should be something that should be done for love and under ones own will rather than through duress and obligation.
Ah come on. Cliff hanger..... Can't wait for next chapter.
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Honour and survival do not always go well together. Ask all of those dead samurai who charged with swords into armies armed with muskets.
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So, you are only worried about Sentinel's future. What about Moonbow and her future?
4945762 Why do I always say the wrong thing in your comments section? Every single time...
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Not the wrong thing... and you didn't say the wrong thing this time either...
The Chase is all about perspectives.
Celestia damnit, kudzu, you... you...AARRGHH!
I can't even say anything mean, because you're my favorite author.
As for the decision...
...fuck it. This is your story, don't make us make a decision that will likely impact the rest of the story. I don't care if saying it makes me seem like an ass, but that was just...I hesitate to say wrong, but some form of no-no is correct. Cliffhangers are fine, and even if I'm incorrect and our decision ends up changing nothing in the end, I still feel like this was a bad move.
*sigh*
Whatever.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
~TOOWC
I vote for Moonbow to decide...preferably with Sentinel's input.
4945936 Wow, nobody's disagreed with me yet....GET HYPE!
FFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU NOT ON MY BIRTHDAY, KUDZU!!!
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darn it. that was more Cliffy than Dover
Did...did you really just cliffhanger us?!
Also, this isn't a cliff-hanger. A cliff-hanger is defeating the villain, only to find that he was the true BBEG's apprentice. A cliff-hanger is finally saving the damsel in distress, only for her to berate you for destroying her protector. This is half a chapter.
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Who is afraid of Boo Radley?
I actually did draw a tiny bit of inspiration from To Kill a Mockingbird for parts of this.
That, and so much more.
4946122 And this is why I favorited your story. You draw inspiration from amazing sources, and you play your tropes and your trump cards well. I can't wait to see where you go from here!
You. Are evil.
Just thought I'd mention that :p
It would be nice for Sentinel to have a friend of his own kind, and just see what develops from there.
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I keep my sources in the chifferobe until they are needed.
Actually, I really loved that story. As a minority, it really touched me in profound ways and I think it made me a better person.
Oh look, my obsessed fan who just can't get enough of me has commenced his or her daily wank. I hate you so much... PAY ATTENTION TO ME AND ACKNOWLEDGE MY HATE FOR YOU!
I feel so much passion for you that I simply must go through and downvote every comment in a misplaced and screwed up gesture of affection.
Now that I have downvoted, I shall grab a pair of tweezers and a magnifying glass for my nightly session in the masturbatorium.
4946194 Well, if you liked that piece of classic American literature as much as you say you do, then I recommend the novel In Cold Blood. It was influenced by Harper Lee herself, so it might be right up your alley.
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Truman Capote.
I haven't read that one yet, I keep getting references to it and then it slips my mind.
4946242 Well, yes, it was written by Capote, but Lee helped on it. He's also a great writer (Breakfast at Tiffany's, In Cold Blood, etc.), so... yeah. It's also non-fiction, but it gives an interesting view on political dilemmas at the time.
Then again, I decided to read both books last year to reach a personal goal of completing a list of books, and it's been a while, so I might have a different opinion if I reread it. Ah, well.
I am shamed by my failure.”
I dunno about slaps... the mares would probably love it if Sentinel came back with a filly friend.
When did this become a soap opera?
What do I think should happen? Simple: Move this tribe of twelve on to the ship, by teleportation if necessary. Once on the ship, get Derpy up on deck, and she'll quickly cow the ornery tribe members, getting them to settle down (at least for a bit). It should be easy, considering how Derpy is probably nesting with the foals, and won't like being pulled away from them. This new tribe will stay on the ship, below decks, until the ship returns to air dock. At that point, they can be left on the main Isle until the fighting has completed, and it is safe for them to be around the ship (which won't be until all of the high-powered light spells are no longer needed).
If Shadow is staying with the ship during the main fight (or series of fights), then there is the possibility that Shadow will not make it back. (Maybe we know for sure, but the characters don't). It's stupid to start forming emotional bonds with someone, only to have those bonds shattered by one's death. Once Derpy has "settled everyone down", then Sentinel and Moonbow should have their say, but no commitments should be put into place until after the fighting is over.
Huh, what is the age gap between sentinel and moonbow?...
I think it would be best if you had moonbow and sentinel both decide. And I don't think there's the need to rush things, think about Bucky and thistle, how they were before and now, and how long it took them.
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Teleportation, which makes ponies deathly ill feeling... much vomiting and sickness in your solution.
They are not returning home anytime soon. So keeping them hostage below decks is a bad idea.
Gasp! A cliffhanger for all of the 20 minutes it'll take for you to churn out another chapter!
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I thought I'd take a break for a while... maybe work on other projects...
4947197 You.....sick.....bastard
SONUVA-........ Uuuuugh, Kudzuuuuuu....
You go and write these incredible chapters and I get really invested... then you go and drop a massive cliffhanger and i just wanna strangle you. Not to death, because then the story would stop, just enough to get the point across.
4947367 So basically you wanna pull a Homer Simpson on him?
"There are a colony of lunar pegasi here"
Shouldn't it be "There is a colony...
Sentinel. I love the little guy more and more with each chapter. If the little lady should join the herd (marriage or otherwise) I'm sure he would be a perfect gentlecolt.
Quick fix:
“I planned take you with me,”
Planned TO take
"Don’t mince words Just be out with it."
Either missing period or misplaced capital.
Also catching up on stories is good when cliffhanger.
I cannot do as you ask
1. Again, minor extra spacing for me.
I would say it's pretty debatable about hearing what Moonbow wants. She could have her own opinion and desires or... Or she warns to be a good filly and follow her parents words. Find out next time... Which has been out for months and I just need to press next
You and your cliffhangers... egads man.
Nice job, nice job.
Should be "into"
As in "getting yourself into a situation"
Awful about the fate of the lunar pegasai.
Not for meeeeee~
EVERYONE KNOWS that Unicorns have the magical power to tell when people are lying to them!
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you dastard