How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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Dammit kudzu, you spoil us!
Edit: Actually not as bad as I thought. If Bucky lived through what happened to him, Keg can survive as a one-winged, three-legged pegasus. (Don't want to spoil it for anyone who happens to read comments first.)
Also, 3 in one day. You're on fire.
Might want to teleport that extra "the" away. Don't worry, it won't hurt.
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Lord Wrecker survives in much the same way.
Dammit kudzu, you made me choose reading the new chapter over sleeping. Now I can't get back to sleep, and it's all because of you.
Fantastic chapter.
I saw no toyps when I went through it, and I would like to compliment you on a fantastic chapter, and in fact, fantastic chapters.
So... prosthetic leg? Then he can be Keg the Peg Leg
It would of been neat if Bucky enchants Keg with a flying spell of some nature, so he can still be a pegasus.
*will be
This story is suffering a severe case of ' author is stalling story end'
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Hah, shows what you know. Who wants to fill this person in?
Edit: This is about Bucky's whole life. He is still young.
I have the huge urge to correct your "typo" but I can't because I know you did it on purpose and to correct it would be a trap... Screw you...
I was thinking why can't he use metals to make wings or legs or something then bind them to the pony with magic so they can fully use them as if they were real
Forbidden nethers... I cried at that. Epic lol
...your just going to keep messing with the spelling in your notes
you are evil kudzuhaiku just plain evil
You make my borning night at work less boring. Thanks!!!!
Bucky is gonna need a long recharge and a lot of food after that procedure.
4822338 Your angry and dismissive reply confirms that what I say has merit. Especially since what I know is only what you have given me in the story. What you have given me is bloated and drawn out.
Still enjoying it though. Wouldn't be here otherwise. You just need to start moving along before people start silently leaving.
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I'm starting to wonder something.
If I understand right, Bucky may still be infested (infected? inhabited?) by the Evil Sombra Spirit that had failed to take over Bucky's body a night or two ago. We know it hasn't been destroyed yet. If that spirit's goal is to preserve everypony in crystals, then what would it think about everything that is happening right now with the shadow wolves? Assuming that the Evil Sombra Spirit™ didn't create the shadow wolves, I would think the Evil Sombra Spirit™ would want to help Bucky as much as possible right now, in order to stop the loss of pony life (so that they can be turned into crystals later, natch').
There are typos in "See typos? Let me know." The words typos and know have suffered a shuffling of letters. Only through my dyslexia did I almost not catch it lol.
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The Shadow has come to the twisted conclusion that in order to keep pony safety, he must end all pony life in perpetual crystal. The Shadow is incorporeal and separate from Bucky, but they have a sort of connection due to Bucky's lineage. It has already tried to take Bucky's body and mind, and in doing so, took a huge gambit with the energy it had stored up and failed. The Shadow is likely licking it's wounds waiting for some time to strike, but I'd imagine if it took so long to begin the first attack on Bucky, it will be a long time before it can even think of attempting it again. I'd also wager the attack on Keg Smasher's family was an attempt to generate more fresh fear to feed the Shadow's powers. It's very likely that the Shadow is now lying in wait behind powerful wards and using the Shadow Wolves as remote instruments of fear.
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I still don't believe that Sombra's Shadow and the thing behind that shadow wolves are the same thing.
If Sombra's Shadow was the same thing that was controlling the shadow wolves, I wouldn't have bothered with keg Smasher. I would have gone for Sentinel. Especially during one of the times when Sentinel was buzzed and sleeping on liquor, I would've invaded his mind and preyed on his fears (the fears that he still has, of living up to his new position, keeping the foals safe, etc.).
Maybe Bucky can dream-walk now, but it hasn't been tested, so it would be hap-hazard and dangerous. If I was able to get Sentinel, then I'd use his body to take out Lyra (at least temporarily). With the night guardians out of commission, I'd have my best-ever second chance at taking out (or taking over) Bucky.
Well... shit. That's not good.
4822611 Dude, ask him about the word count of the 'plans' document. I'm expecting this to have 1K chapters!
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The Chase is going to be around one million to one and a half million words or so.
Please pause to consider this for a moment.
Since being subtle didn't work, have the sledgehammer.
On Tuesdays I use it to hit watermelons!
4822903 Wonder how many weeks of real life this story will take
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I'll come out with it, and admit that I'm greedy.
Does that include or exclude The Catch?
:)
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The Catch is an entirely separate story that I am still fleshing out.
If I added the optional story-lines, The Chase could probably break two million words.
You tease! I was shitting bricks worrying about Bucky ending up as Laird!
Still, this does not bode well if Keggers ends up as a cripple, i'm really curious where you are going with this and who will stay behind to start the school. If i had to guess, I'd say Rising and Sparkler along with their herd.
So, my hostage theory is out, betrayal is almost out (there is always a chance that the Isles nobles are following a plan alongside the thing controlling the wolves, and it was a coordinated attack) and, i wuold say, with a 95% chance, this was a desperate attack from The Thing trying to make Bucky unable to attack it by overwhelming him with the Isles leaddership.
that thing is SMART. I hope that Bucky´s herd realize that and they prepare even more, ´cause i have a feeling that the wolves will be even more dangerous then ever.
And, really, kudzu, stop asking for typos. It´s too much emotional rollercoaster in every new chapter to focus in anything besides the history !
Do not want what bon bon was saying. It just seems wrong.
my reaction to seeing keg
4822261 the keg with a peg leg? i like it
I'm suprised you didn't put in any cannibalistic meat eater thoughts for bucky, even as a small wave off
hugs: 11
4825443 Peg Leg Keg Smasher Definitely fan art material
It's likely I'm being paranoid , but with your way of foreshadowing, Kudzu, I can't help but feel a bit unsettled about this. It's the last sentence in that little section, and Wheatberry is almost always seen giggling in a situation that is not funny.
Again, I'm most likely being paranoid , but there you go.
nethers is not a word. I think you're looking for nether or just "The forbidden nether,"
Edit: Unless you mean that Bon Bon has two vaginas.
Daaaaamn, he was cut up bad, that sucks! D:
But oh so tasty~ hehehe
Nicely done!
Forbidden nethers...
That may be the most amusing phrase yet in this story. I was still chuckling about that during the following gut-punch scene. Kinda felt weird honestly. Amusement mixing with gore and trauma...