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Indeed, there's something wonderful about the idea of make things go boom.
Is... is Bucky making fucking MAGIC GRENADES? THAT IS AWESOME! BTW, I'm stealing this idea. it could come in useful for some scenes.
Ah, morning sickness is kicking in. Why do I want her to run out f the room, straight into Bucky, and puke on him. I can see it now; Derpy staring at him in shock whilst he just wipes his eye and cocks his head. "Good morning, Derpy."
I hate to get into your stuff but you might want to up the candlepower of his flash grenades.
Two million candlepower is the power of a good led spotlight. He might want to try to match the Luxor
sky beam, it is 42.3 billion candelas, you could read a news paper at ten miles with its light.
Here is where I got the figures http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Luxor_Las_Vegas
PS; love the story and the world building
I agree completely with the authors note, but would like to comment that candlepower is officially called lumens. Is this where the
balefire bombflashbang is invented?So, let me get this straight, this story is 86 chapters and the whole story, is about the MC being chased by Derpy so they can "snoot-bump" through 235,756 words and it isn't done......
I imagine those flash grenades would be lethal to the wolves, but harmless to ponies.....
Huh, how hard is it to put a flashy spell in a glass ball... If it's not, it might be mass-produced. that would be a good solution to the wolves. ._.
Can't help but feel weird when I'm reading rising's part. XD
Gud chapter as usual. :3
You people aren't paying attention.
The light goes into the gemstones.
The fireballs go into the glass orbs.
One is a constant light source and not a grenade.
The other is a device that goes EXPLODY!
Someone should have told Bucky about arclamps, and how developed film negative blocks out heat/infrared light. (cheap chemicals and simple graphite rods plus some lightning)
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Read it and find out... it is a story about misconceptions.
I'd like to see Berry using high tech non-magical means like exploding fulminates and greek fire... or a powder keg to make a Berry big explosion...
4719391 I also feel like it needs to be split into sequels, but that's not my judgement call. It has everything that's good in a story though: epic feels, lols, drama, expo on pony culture, hot sex and combat. It really belongs on the shelf with 5S/4.
Could Bucky ad sunstones to his armor to make light armor?
4719584 What story is it that you're referencing?
Now you just need a few jokes next chapter..
"That's the bomb!"
"Who's the bomb?"
"You're the bomb!"
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I think "5 score divided by 4" is it's name, might be the actual words instead of numbers
Add an "of" in there.
*A
Delete that extra "to".
And add that spare "to" over here.
Those are all the errors I found. NEXT CHAPTER!
It's okay, that only proves that you're a good person.
:D
i have such a dirty mind, i read that he was horny, going downstairs to "take care of business" and "experiment", then i heard about the glass jars that can "contain" things cleanly and I lost it
i feel so terrible
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Unfortunately that wouldn't get all of the heat, you're going to get a lot of heat transfered through radiation as well. Buckey could also fine tune the frequency so no infrared radiation is emitted. Actually, given my understanding of the shadow wolves ,it would be even better to emit primarily ultraviolet light.
The song Side of a Bullet comes to mind, only with bombs instead of bullets
4719508 Now there is a problem that the description no longer adequately describes the story.
What I got out of this is that Bucky is tired of this Isle's shit, and so started bringing hand grenades into the mix.
Well, Bucky, all that's left is guns. Then you've got renaissance warfare!
I'm a bit miffed at the part about light sources that don't give off heat. Light as it is exhibits in radiant energy, which converts into thermal energy on contact with other substances. Although you could use magic to convert the radiant energy into some other harmless form of energy with as much efficiency as magically possible so the thermal energy is at a minimum and is negligible. Do you have different explanation, or something like this one?
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The author likely meant "heat" as in infra-red or otherwise invisible light.
While any wavelength with sufficient power can burn, infra-red is the range most effective and efficient at heating stuff. In many cases, it is also the most convenient.
You do not feel as much heat coming off a 100W-equivalent LED bulb as you do from a 100W halogen... the 100W-equivalent LEDs might get uncomfortably warm to touch while a 100W halogen would feel searing-hot at close distance from the infra-red radiation alone.
“Rising !”
Berry wanted
toRipple to stop bouncing up and down1. Extra spacing here.
2. Extra To. Mentioned... About 17 weeks ago from this post by Azure Blackstone.
Now you have me envisioning Bucky as the bomb maker from The Battle of Algiers.
So, they are actually going to carpet bomb. Welp dem wolfs are even more screwed
BOOM BOOM JARS!
Nicely done!
LOL, I have never felt so weird reading something like I did with Rising.
Keep it up!
4730719 I bet that'd be easy for Bucky to do, just need gunpowder and something to shoot it out of Magic~
Science kids!
Missing a word there.
I know, 80 some - odd weeks late, but I like helping writers improve, even in tiny ways.
Fun chapter. I like Bucky's style.
4719410 And seeing as how he's horny as hell this applies
All of this reminds me that Bucky is very much like Batman:
Sure he's Really Good to Great WITHOUT careful Planning & Cunning....but WITH it? They BOTh become EPIC & LEGENDARY. They becomes gods amongst mortals.
With the time Bucky is getting to prepare, I almost feel sorry for his True Enemy. Almost.
so basically magic grenades with various effects? Reminds me of AC Revelations. Crafting bombs... always was very fast at it... came easy to me along with using the crossbow, hookblade (and all the tricks), french bastard sword and the maces...