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Have to behave
That should be cap.
201 chapters...?
Coulda sworn there was a cap on 200. Not that I'm complaining.
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Or top
For the first bucking time i cried in this story. Sure, lots of sad moments, feeling moments but, actual liquid pride, first time, during Rising Star´s moment. But this whole chapter was...just...perfection.
Possibly a bit of very fine nit-picking, but I believe "blood thirsty" should be either "blood-thirsty" or "bloodthirsty." I've never encountered it as two completely separate words, and Mirriam-Webster seems to agree.
Also, it feels good to get back to the comic, slice-of-life chapters that made me fall in love with this story. (Well, that and the exploration into the sociology of different tribes.) The Isles arc was a stark departure from that.
and berry is down for the count
Three chapters in one day? And of this caliber? You spoil us. I hope you get paid for your writing some day.
"Lord Rising Star and Lady Sparkler Doo Hooves will see you know "
This should be now.
I've read plenty of written works, but this is going into my top 3 of favorites. I don't know how to write everything this has made me feel or think just that it did so strongly. Respect.
I can imagine the look on his parents' faces.
A Haiku of Kudzu
Kudzuhaiku is
a great storyteller of
misunderstandings
I've been with this story since day one, and I have finally made an account on this site. Now I can comment!
I remember seeing Chapter One and reading it. I didn't have access to a computer for about a month after that. I came back and found over 3 dozen new chapters, and the trend continues. You never cease to amaze.
Kudzuhaiku, you are by far one of the finest writers to grace this site. This story especially; I laughed, I cried, and I'll have you know that 200 chapters later I only died from the feels 20 times.
I hope you like the haiku above, I think it illustrates your style. As readers, we come to our own conclusions as to what's what and who's who, only to find out we misunderstood what was being done or said and why.
In any case, keep up the good work!
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Aw, thanks.
Oh, Berry thinks it's bad now? Just wait until there are 5 more foals in the house to take care of on top of the normal stuff.
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Berry Mash
Juniper Berry
Brandywine
Barley Bitters
Ditzy Doo
Dizzy Doo
Bell Heather
Whinnifred.
Harper Heartstrings
Hazy Daisy (named after a person who does a lot of great art for The Chase)
Bog Myrtle
This is not all of them. Just think about that for a moment. These are the ones that are named.
The contract seems overly generous to the point of ridiculousness - it seems unlikely Celestia would be as upset as she was if it was written with the utter knowledge that it was a joke.
Perhaps replace the 'Shinies best work ever' with 'Lyra rewrote most of it and it's now rather silly, Celestia got the giggles'.
Otherwise Celestias reaction earlier just doesn't work for me. (very, very far from the point where I'd consider The Chase my favourite story on fimfiction.)
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Rethink about why Celestia was upset.
The contract was mostly Luna's work. As stated, all of this was her idea. Bucky made a deal, so to speak. Luna honours her deals as the former bearer of the Element of Loyalty. Luna has a devoted minion who will blindly obey her every command and protect the empire, Bucky gets to stay with his family.
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Darn it, now I really want to help out in naming the foals, but knowing you, you probably have more ideas about what they will be and how the names will help their coming about.
Still, I DO like the names you have in store for us. We know four will come about.
Still, it will be a very crazy delivery considering there's twins when Twins are very very uncommon from what I have understood.
Well, either way this has been an enjoyable read and I do look forward to more chapters. I hope you get wonderful ideas, a good nights rest and more exciting thoughts.
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Holy hell, Rust is in the readership. Making waves there, Kudzu.
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Brah, I'm like a bad fart in an elevator. Can't escape me.
Get drunk and screw. I wish I could see his parent's faces
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I was gonna say something about you catching wind of it, but then this post right here. Just got manhandled.
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Well, I hope you enjoy the story. There are a lot of mixed reviews lately.
.....My reaction below.
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Bon Bon had to pull stuff out strand by strand, worm by worm.
Some of those worms can be several feet long.
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Started it sometime last week. Couple hundred thousand words later, here I am, honestly curious as to what will happens next.
Also, Sentinel and Moonbow are probably my favorites. Sentinel is a goddamn boss and Moonbow is like the extra spicy salsa for his nachos of life.
5008897 I know. I had one. ONE. and it was so disgusting knowing the damn thing was INSIDE ME...which is why I only eat meat Well Done.
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I am glad you are enjoying it.
5008584 Out of simple curiosity, which stories would be your top ten favorites? P.m. me the answer (if you feel inclined to give one) so as to not distract from The Chase.
Dinky can summon a billion bees but not wipe her own butt? Me think she's faking for attention.
Wouldn't the contract be null and void since it was made under the old laws which are now no more? or is it just going to carry over? bit confused by that bit.
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Remember that part where it said that many type threes can't write their names with their magic, because they lack the fine control? Power =/= finesse.
And when you're dealing with wiping your butt, finesse is a really nice thing to have.
Kudzu, I've been thinking... There's the Knight and the Librarian. There should be an apprentice to learn the workings of indomitable fighting style from Bucky, simultaneously learning the ebb and flow of the world, including the battlefield. With these skills the chosen character would move on to rebuild the broken once again. Just a thought
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Wipe... you know how you get rid of worms, right? They came out of her ass. Have to pull the rest of the 1-2 feet of each one out that's left inside.
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I stated this somewhere earlier... but that sort of thing doesn't matter. Laws are a constant and binding article. The contract was made with the Crown, for one, which is not bound by law. Secondly, the contract was made while the laws were still in effect - even though it's not based on the laws insomuch as was made possible by the laws. Either way, once the contract was agreed upon and signed, it became a permanent fixture. The laws dying out in the next few minutes doesn't bother it because it came into being and was made a permanent agreement before then. Had the contract's wording required the same laws as were present at its creation in order to remain undefiled, then the contract would be voided. But obviously Luna and Shining accounted for that.
That aside, the time for questioning the contract has passed, and many people have already questioned how the contract can stand - and were shown that it's not a problem due to alicorn cleverness and the fact that it's not bothering anyone. The contract has proven to be a good thing that just looks bad. Everyone is happy with the outcome. Even Bonbon, she just doesn't approve of the path they used to reach it with the dishonesty. Bucky's happy, his herd is happy, the Princesses are happy, Equestria is happy. Celebration! Jubilation! Poorly ripped-off Star Wars honors ceremony for everyone! Now with real Chewbacca!
me because of the chase
I love this story, but have found something that finally bothers me. Celestia is giving me whiplash here, one minute she sorry and trying to comfort Bucky and then later she's treating him like a hand grenade. Put in armor throw at enemy Griffin then hope your not in the blast radius. The last person who treated him like that got a Derpy smack down, then pissed upon. Sorry still love this story just realized that. Celestia is one of my favorite characters only reason I bring it up, or I could be missing something entirely and look like an idiot. Either way it was a good update can't wait for the next.
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Now it's time for Bucky's favorite pastime... get drunk and screw
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Damn straight!
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He's the Alicorn of War, he just hasn't ascended yet. Conflict, strife, it's part of who he is. It's a force of change, of evolution. He is the Guardian of Equestria, just as Sombra was. Just as Starswirl was the Scholar of Equestria, as Twilight is now. It's literally what he's supposed to be doing. The Griffons are attacking ponies. They're sending Twilight to try and talk sense into them.
If sense doesn't work, then what? Sit there and cry that the griffons are murdering and/or raping your subjects? Or send War itself to deal with them? Predators only truly respect force. Send Bucky, Bucky got all kinds of force.
5010165 Yeah but, alone? Buckys bad ass but an entire nation is a little hard to handle even if your out of bubble gum. Also he's told Celestia he dosn't want to be the Alicorn of war so it feels petty that she's doing that.
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Entire nation? I doubt the griffons are that civilized - likely a loose federation of hunter/raider tribes like the old vikings, with something approaching civilization in what's left of their twin capitol. Nevermind they've no doubt not yet recovered from the ass-stomping Equestria gave them last time.
It's not a matter of being petty. He doesn't want to /ascend/, and he hasn't. That doesn't mean it's not his duty to perform. You also don't have to take on a whole country to defeat it. Just the right individuals. Either way, he wants to do this. He even mentioned he wants to protect -all- the foals, not just his own.
All that aside, they're sending Twilight and Bucky. Two of the smartest ponies in Equestria. It'll be dealt with.
Found this chapter... Heart warming. :3
We need more rising star and his parents, I want to see stuff from their perspective. :D
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That's a job for Pina or a swarm of bees in the shape of a claw.
5010200 Cool I'm tired so I concede because were arguing over stuff we don't know and you sound smarter than me.
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Bucky... Smart?
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From a technical perspective, he knows things that are... things.
From any other perspective he's kind of a blockhead.
Question: Since Discord is the one who took out Tirek this time, does that mean the Mane 6 didn't get their Harmonic Power, and are thus relatively useless in a conflict aside from Twilight?
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No rainbow ponies. Sorry. Something else happened, Which will be explained later.
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Step one: drop massive rape bomb in middle of nation.
Step two: drop a second.
Step three: repeat steps one and two ad nauseum.
Step four: accept surrender.
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Step five: Shit pants as Eye of Terror opens, giving birth to Slaanesh.
Are is written twice