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hehe If my little sister said something like Pina just did! I would either laugh or freak?
I'm not sure what one, but there is a missing word here somewhere.
I can't wait... hold up, controllers of the season, right? What about elements? Bucky raining down large shards of ice, whilst Lyra sends bolts of electricity...
THIS IS GOING TO BE GOOD!!
So, what shall it be called? Hmm...
AS CURSEBREAKER?
AS SOMBRA?
AS PICKLED?
AS... AVARICE-HUNTER?
Ooooh, how about AS SHADOW?
Also, yes Pina. Your standards need to be high.
Piña is best Filly!
Aaaaand its back in the featured box
Its there practically every time you post a new chapter
It is a caravel and therefor it fucking HAS TO be named "going berry" or something like that.
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Y'all motherfuckers KNOW that I'm right
(Not serious of course but it was the first thing I thought about when I saw the word "caravel" and I have this delusion that I am funny)
Remember when i complained ´bout how Pinat...i mean, Piña had not enough love, and seemed being only a shadow for Dinky´s ?
Forget it...total and utterly forget that i even thought that. She is so cute that i think i just got diabetus....Please, tell me there will be a "coming back with a hundred ton ship hull hovering above their heads while they keep talking ´bout family" chapter after this one.
Pina is freaking awesome, just like her sis.
awwa, almost makes me wish my own father wasn't a festering plothole seeing how sweet Bucky is with Pina.
teh feelz
Some well disserved Pina an Bucky time, she has fallen into the background a little bit, it's always nice to see Bucky spending some quality time with his foals.
Bucky's pain from the new horn isn't something we should worry about is it?
Fav chapter in a minute. I still kinda want Pina to be wolf food though.
I found this gem when it was up to Ch. 86. I caught up in about 24 hours. I couldn't stop reading. I don't know how you've done it, but don't stop. The Chase is now, easily, my favorite story. The only thing I don't like about it, is that it's ongoing! I need to know how it ends!
at the mention of crumbits i could only think of her a Tiny Pina
Oh gawds, That's twice in a day I've been slain by overloads of cuteness from you.......
That was a sweet chapter.
4740788 the cuteness is real!
I luv yor story lots, but I feel like yor beating around the bush.
I am dying to know... Who is this depraved psychopath controlling these monsters and besetting these ponies with them? The suspense is driving me up the wall
I'm not the only one who caught that "Lord of Winter" thing in the AN, right? What's that going to lead to?
4741127 Maybe the bad bit of Sombra?
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There is a blog post about it. The 100 chapters blog post I think.
Am I honestly one of the only people who is pretty sure they know exactly who the main antagonist in this story arc? Yes? Okay. Here's a reference to help you out.
It's Nega-Scott!
Good luck with that.
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Let he who is without puns among you cast the first stone.
4742308 Nay! Let the conglomerate of puns continue! There is no shale in them!
Hmm... The Storm has a nice ring to it, but aside from that, amazing chapter! More insight to the ingenuity that is the mind of Piña, and it's great to know that she doesn't take her father's heroism for granite! This was certainly a needed chapter, it really opens things up!
Hmmm....
The Crystal Empire in a frozen wasteland...
Bucky having a talent for ice magic...
The Lord of Winter...
K, am I seeing a pattern here?
~ TOOWC
Just read the newest 3 chapters. You scared me with the hiatus suggestion. Please keep them coming.
*Comes back home after vacation and finds 10 new chapters written*
I think Iv noticed a pattern here
Kudzu = very fast growing plant
Kudzuhaiku = fast writing author
Are you by chance a mutated genetic plant hybrid/human ?
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I am a big fan of the earth ponies myself. In this story, nothing is what it seems to be at first. Keep reading. You will be pleasantly surprised about the earth ponies.
Eh~ I kind of like the idea that pegasi can just go "Fuck gravity" on their own when pulling chariots thru the sky though.
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Oh, they can. Sort of. They can buy spell globes from unicorns and smash them into a sky wagon or a chariot to enchant it. You don't actually need the unicorn to be there.
Sort of like the near field manipulation shoes in The Chase that allow pegasi and earth ponies to have a small amount of unicorn magic in their hooves that allows them to perform day to day tasks.
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You've quit far too soon. Not all of the ponies are as separated as you claim. Just some of them. Some are far more unified.
But this story has been designed to make you focus on point and make you think about it, and then it shows you something else.
Nothing is ever quite as it seems.
But quitting and down voting is an option. A mistake, but an option. You haven't even scratched the surface yet.
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Neh, I meant them having some form of contact telekinesis that let them be able to drag chariots behind them seems like a more fun idea than letting a unicorn be the main factor of the work.
For a guy who likes the other two races so much, you sure seem to be giving all of the fun stuff aside from flight to the unicorns. Even skipping out on giving the pegasi a slight bit more of a perk that could give them a more even standing. You had to work to make that be because of unicorns, you know.
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Pegasi have their own magic that unicorns need from time to time as you will soon see. It is a mutual exchange between them all.
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Then I hope you prove to me that you didn't just give the unicorns all the cool & flashy stuff, 'cause it sure seems like you have so far.
It's well written & all, it just seems like the racial abilities aren't all that balanced. What you gave the Earth ponies still seems kind of small narratively speaking.
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That is kinda the point though. Life isn't fair. The unicorns got the power to manipulate magic directly. That is all kinds of unfairness right there. The others got the ability to manipulate magic passively. The Chase is designed to highlight some of these contrasts.
As for the earth ponies, pony society and the entire pony race would die off without them. The unicorns would go utterly mad. Well, most of them. The pegasi would slowly slip into their barbaric and brutal blood-lust and would return to a state of total war with everything. The earth ponies keep shit calm. Out of all three races, they are the most important of them all. They allow the other two races to continue to exist with some semblance of sanity.
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I know that in-universe it's an important aspect of pony nature. I was just saying that, since it's not a very active ability & not heavily emphasized (though it does add a lot of meaning whenever an earth pony touches someone to calm them down), it doesn't feel that important to a reader.
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All of my yes. Going Berry it MUST BE.
please?
YAY you finally made pina more than a shadow! finally she gets characterization! also I would also complain (WHINING!) THAT pina is way too articulate and mature for her age, but I realized that she learned to talk like that from berry, so its all good
4740670 Best female character in a vid game, EVER
Also don't forget the meat bicycle fits two.
Winter is coming XD
Oh my god, that mental image of Bucky shoving tea ups and crumpets up Blueblood's butt...
He could feel Pina’s breathing quicken
1. Forgot your tilde above the N here.
It really makes me cringe whenever someone tries to point out the downsides of being smart.
I understand that the view of the characters does not necessarily reflect the view of the author (it could, I don't know).
I still want to point out some things, however. Being smart, or rational, does not make you inherently unhappy. Yes, you might be more likely to realize the situation is bad, however, being truly smart and rational also means you will realize that your situation is not that different from that of others. Being realistic does not make you incapable of enjoying the small things. The most important thing is to realize that if your goal is to be happy, and prosper, moping about it won't help either.
As to holding yourself accountable... that has nothing to do with intelligence. Neither does being able to justify what you're doing is right. If you need to rationalize something, and don't see it as such, that is more a sign of lacking intelligence.
And being smart also has the considerable advantage of being capable of doing better or more efficient in most things than a not smart person.
This might have been a bit too much rambling. Fortunately, I like rambling. I do apologize if I'm bothering you though. Good day.
5540057 rambling? Ha, you're comment isn't even a quarter length of some of the comments I've seen on here. So I say you're good
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Awesome chapter dude, awesome chapter!
WARSHIP! Hahah! Broadside!
Nice job.
Winter is
cummingcoming.Best pony ever!
Never change, Piña. You rock!
Like an alicentaur can with a few tail-flicks.
SKY PIRATES, ASSEMBLE!
needed to be done