How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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Congrats on 600, Kudz!!!! Wow, what a ride so far. You rock, good sir.
I figured One of em would get out unscathed. I just had it backwards.
That much body shock. Is Derpy's foals okay?
You sir, are a special sort of evil.
Damned Type 3 Earth Elemental Pony. Should have freakin told everyone sooner you don't need air when you become a living rock.
I'm kinda surprised Sentinel locked up so fast when hitting the ice-water. I figured being a Lunar pegasus and having the thicker coat would have helped him.
And once again the day is saved by Super-mommy: Derpy to the rescue! I would worry about the health of Derpy's foals, but the Fates promised they would be born safe and unharmed. They wouldn't risk Bucky snapping.
Hmmm........ Now this is just a hunch, but could Derpy's cutie mark have anything to do with this? It is bubbles after all. Handy when going underwater...
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Aye. Remember Bucky's deal with the Fates.
How did I know that Sparkler somehow was gonna live?
Probably because if she died we would all feed you to the typos
5906652
The proper spelling is actually sigul.
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You had it.
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Probably happened because of his wings. being the way the are, the probably don't handle the cold as well as regular Pegasi. And since the wings are one of the more sensitive areas of their body, it was probably like getting a good, solid kick to the nuts in that could water for Sentinel... doubly so because those were also exposed to the water.
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"They told me having a cutie mark in rescuing drowning foals wouldn't see much use! HAH, WHO'S LAUGHING NOW?"
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A Pony like that would have a hell of a career as the worlds best life guard at a public swimming pool or the beach. They'd basically be able to work for the highest bidder.
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Sounds like a fic idea.
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I have at least 2 fic ideas a day, but I suck at writing unless the ability to just suddenly hits me. I have a fic currently in Hiatus Limbo because I have not been able to make the words come out for it.
Yes
I agree
How could you not agree
Harper is adorable
Plus her father is the boogypony and will do unmentionable things to you if you dont
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Aye sir, I know it. I just hope you'll use that spelling from now on.
Fist 600 get! Woooohooooo!!!
Second why did sentinel freeze up that fast? I have gone under (in controlled conditions with a safety line but fully clothed and it was a good bit below freezing at the time) and what sentinel experienced it a bit much. I jumped in and got a few meters below. I opened my eyes and yes it stung like fuck and my body felt like damn heavy but I was still capable of holding my breath and by my own power swim to the surface and use ice picks to pull myself out.
Are there dark things lurking? Are ponies just rather bad at going under ice? Did Kudz not to proper research-*BLAM* HERESY!
5906818 Unmentionable or unfathomable?
God damn it, kudz, you almost killed my feels... I actually almost cried. Keep up the powerful writing.
5906704 now that is a possibility. One that makes a lot of sense. They are more or less just skin, bone with a few muscles. They don't generate much heat on their own. And having what in this scenario acts as a cold conductor directly connected to his spine results in instant shock and massive pain, causing the freeze-up and the inability to hold his breath. This seems reasonable.
So, you wanna bet he will at some point train to be able to swim under ice?
5906667 So, Bucky won't ever loose young? That's a bit fucked up, he's gotta know that kind of loss at some point. It's a fact of life, the fates don't have any business taking that experience from anyone.
Don't read first part if insulted easily .
You mother fucking bastard. you are a piece of gobshite of a man. How can you sleep at night knowing that you are giving hundreds if not thousands poor readers heart attacks you pile of goat foder. I hope the typos strangle you in your sleep. *venting over* give me more you amazing man. there ar not many things that can make me react like you story telling.
D.T. is going to go totally spaz when she hears about this.
I totally knew she was going to do that.
long haul
Dame... Fell asleep while 599 wip and woke up for 600
Avoided the need to get my pitchfork out and declaring kudz the next r r Martin
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He won't live long enough.
God damn it, you got me to shed two tears, it really hurt my eyes. Fucking toxins being released.
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We now have confirmation that this story will have no deaths of Bucky's foals before he dies.
This says nothing about his wives, though.
he knew he was in danger
...you son of a bitch Kudzu.
5908230 some people
prepare yourself, extreme violence is coming
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Mare on mare violence.
Ok, quick thing:
NEVER smack someone on the back when they are choking. Unless they are literally an infant, that will lodge the thing in harder and make them choke MORE. All it does is knock it loose, and since they would usually be standing vertically, it would then fall deeper into the lungs. If someone is choking, NEVER DO THIS. Use the Heimlich Maneuver instead.
For babies, you can do this, because you turn the whole baby upside down, with their head facing downward and THEN (lightly) hit their back. This will knock it loose, and it falls UP out of their mouth. This is only done because babies are too fragile for the Heimlich, and just hitting someone on the back without pointing their head downward first can kill them.
Not to diss the chase, but that's not what diving into ice water feels like. I do it almost every winter in sub zero weather just to prove to friends I can do it. Then I get sick for a few days and miss school :D.
You know how hard it is to not cry and wail like a foul when something like this happens ? I seriously started to get deathly cold when I thought sparky died !! I'm still fecking cold and I'm wearing a jacket !!!
I don't wanna be that guy, but... probably should have killed her off. :/ Too many anti-climaxes and this story will leave everyone blueballed before you know it.
D'aaaaaaaw
I agree with Zack black, the only tragic moments in this story happen to Bucky, and it's mainly bodily harm.
Shite! I forgot about the fate's deal, I actually thought you killed her off.
6306731 I call Cadence dying a tragedy even if she did get reborn.
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Is there a gif of demoman or soldier of TF2 fighting a smile and losing? Because there should be for that line.
600 down. 200+ to go!
Found one. You could change it to set or put
Im actually surprised firebro didn't surge out at the thought of loosing his first love
So tempted to make a real comment here.
So, sentinel couldn't control his body under water, huh? Alright, who feed the boy a devil fruit?!
No! I relaxed my sphincter to much, now my page is covered in Shitty typos!