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And then there was one more.
Not a bad chapter, and I know I'm supposed to be looking for Typos, but it's hard to see them when you're just enjoying the story. Filler chapters aren't bad, but they are, by design, filler chapters. While you could claim that you are using this chapter to develop the potential and future relationship between Diamond Tiara and Sentinel (and you are) it would appear that this chapter is more along the lines of simply having a moment of peace. Something akin to the filler episodes in DBZ.
The search for the giant pearl, and so on. Fun chapter, not exactly necessary, but fun none the less.
The Ron Jeremy Pony has spoken.
I foresee these mares making Bucky cast multiple enchantments on a camera to follow Sentinel and Diamond Tiara around without them noticing it and taking a picture of them whenever they are doing something adorable together since they can't keep an eye on them 24/7.
An adorably fluffy chapter.
Two Leasts there.
Sooo, when Bucky charges into battle, does he shout, "For the Herd!"?
*shot*
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Do want! I want the silence enchant to wear off at some point so they hear the click and whirr and wind up looking at the invisible camera with a 'wtf' face in the middle of a cuddle.
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-curbstomps, Wrynn-style-
Derpy's milkshake bring's all the colts to the yard....
Ahhh! Not the cute and adorables! Nooooo, you'll kill me again!
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Click. Whirr.
Invisible clicking demon proceeds to chase them through town while Benny Hill plays.
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There is actually important stuff hidden in the filler. Like Ripple's real function and why she is so close with Dinky, Pina, and by extension, Diamond Tiara.
The comment about toys losing their voice... oh so important.
And there is foreshadowing. As always. Hidden in the fluff where people forget about it.
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I can see him pulling a Richard, smirking, and yelling "For Pony!"
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Yeah, I got the toys losing the voice. To me it was sort of a moment when that magic of childhood and innocence is gone. The toys are no longer able to help guide those young colts and fillies into adulthood, and instead must be set aside.
"When I was a child, I spake as a child, I understood as a child, I thought as a child: but when I became a man, I put away childish things."
Which is why I love Pinkie Pie. That childhood excitement, innocence, and unconditional love is shown through her time and time again. She's a joy to write.
Ah, well, still a fun chapter.
RJP
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WAIT. WAIT. WE'RE MISSING A GOLDEN OPPORTUNITY.
Moonbow. Diamond Tiara.
This is obviously the best thing ever.
Oh Sentinel, you can deny all you want that you enjoy your time with Diamond Tiara, but everyone else knows that you're falling in love with her.
And that's what makes you adorable.
Well that and when you're hunting and fishing.
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He's hunting Diamond Tiara. He's just not sure how the hunter / prey relationship works here just yet.
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Sounds like Bucky needs to give Sentinel the lowdown then.
rather enjoyable. though I can't help but feel this is the NINTH conversation about mare milk in this story.
So, I had a problem with this fanfic. I love the story and all, but I found that something was missing. That thing was a page on TVTropes. So I went and fixed that. The Chase now has a page on TVTropes! Go give it some Wikilove and work some Wikimagic on it!
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At this point he practically is Pony Richard.
...Well, minus the need to fuel his magic by killing innocents. Also no 'FWOOSH,' that's Rising Star's department.
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That only works if Sentinel picks up a unicorn too.
so cute
Im waiting for Dinky to let her guard down so Diamond Tiara can finally get revenge for the bees.
Meanwhile...Primrose is forced to watch this over and over and over and over again...
A wild typo!? Word Processor, use Correct!
5135537 Correct hit. It's not very effective.
Typo used Double team. It's evasiveness was increased.
5135100 But would be awesome as hell.
Before I read any more, I read the first few words odf the paragraph where Lyra comes in, and I am calling it, Bon Bon disciplined em all good for honesty.
*reads on*
Hehehehe, called it. Also, why isn't the warning on THIS chapter, and I agree with Lyra, that is depressing.
What, when you got together with Bucky?
7160687 I was drinking a Milkshake when i read your comment, guess what happen lol.
A wild typo appears.
Go Reader!
Wild typo uses Confusion.
It's super effective!
Reader uses Edit.
The wild typo disappeared.
You won!
Reader gained 65 exp.
Reader leveled up!
Reader is now level 34.
What's this? Reader is evolving!
Congratulations! Your Reader evolved into Proofreader!
Proofreader wants to learn Thesaurus, but already knows 4 moves.
Replace a move with Thesaurus?
1, 2, and......poof!
Proofreader forgot Complain.
Proofreader learned Thesaurus.