How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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Toward the end of the lawyer party. Is says his when it should be this.
Violet will Not be too happy with you.
The Cold Stare of dooooooom,bucky will win probably
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Copy paste a direct example?
“By all means, of course. I have an appointment coming up, so it would be best if we wrapped his up. I just wanted to drop off these papers and give you a very brief explanation if I could. I have an office here in Ponyville, so I can be reached at any time,” Great Scott responded
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Found it. Only had to go 30 some odd instances of "his".
“Okay, okay, I won’t give you any hints,” (Sunset Shimmer) said as she backed away.
...Does Ripple fight for the sake of bittersweet love?
I seen one. MWAHAHAHAHAHA.... *coughcoughhack*... I am NEVER doing that again soon.
Oh, I am gonna like Violet. And I wonder how Diamond Tiara is going to react to finding it she has a brother?
The question is still floating there, unanswered. Will shining whack himself or live on with pain and glaring depression. Hopefully he'll chose the answer that is less selfish and shallow. ^.^
This new Violet Velvet character, her and sunset should totally fuck. :I Like, just, fluids everywhere.
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This is why you control-f "wrapped his" rather than "his".
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That information was not available when the first post was made. Look at it yourself.
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I think you both get what I'm saying but we disagree why I said it.
Yeah, what few comments of myth's that I read sound like they came from out of his ass (specifically the left cheek), but even in crap, there can be bits to pull. The author is well aware that myth can just be ignored, yet he chooses not to. He draws something from the ramblings which helps him continue or even implement new ideas.
Besides, myth is hard for this story, otherwise he wouldn't be reading it either. But that's my two bits. If the author or myth wants to tell me I'm wrong, I'm more than open to it.
might have. or at least might've.
i love Violet already
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Could you clarify what you mean by that? I'm not entirely sure. If you meant the first comment in the chain, I refer you to this section:
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But I did not know that at the time.
This is all I had to go by. See my problem?
Velvet Underground will be a JOY to read !
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Underground?
5416386 Oooops....do you think she´ll be upset if I mess a little with her name ?
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Do Ursa Majors shit in the woods?
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No, seriously, do they?
5416420 Do they shit at all ? I mean, magical creature that, pretty much, feeds uppon maigc itself. Does digested (?) magic left something to be expelled ?
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Milk went in... shit must come out.
Hoho. I'm going to love watching her keep Bucky in line. And then laugh hilariously the moment she tries to when he's in his element and he just flips her off and jumps off a flaming airship into an exploding volcano. Or if she tries to get too alpha with him and finds out her stare doesn't work on Derpy. Wingslaps for days.
You make references to them constantly but only now have I spotted a typo.
needs an oif between "line" and "work"
I feel really good cause I managed to help finally
When i read Velvet's lines, the first voice that popped in my mind was Maud.
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I wanna see what happens when her Stare meets Fluttershy's. Would one overpower the other, would they cancel out? Or would they create some kind of Super Stare Singularity that would doom us all.
5416114 chrysalis still a problem there (exaggeratedly belligerent fist shaking)
other than that. he can find a weakness and tell celestia or luna. they could just strap them to his back and go after him, and bucky could brainstorm an idea to defeat him.
oooor.....
Bucky- you transformed me into a freaking tiara!
Luna- twas the only way you could help us without becoming a liability.,
Bucky- but a fucking tiara?
unless something occurs that requires the mane six to defeat him............. which is something i am not seeing in the story as of yet. enduring strife is one thing, overcoming it is true strength. none of them overcame it. hell bucky broke harmony so completely that the mane six were worthless in repairing it. if he cannot find the weakness of the night stallion and exploit it, how could a force he accidentally wrecked going to help in any way?
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You have to test for weak points when you are busy building the perfect weapon. Any points of weakness must be eliminated during the prototype phase.
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Ah. Yes.
Did he edit that or was that a different comment entirely?
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The comment should still be there.
5416585 yet he broke the elements of harmony like a dry twig without realizing it. the thing that was supposed to be the enemy of this night stallion, and he basically killed it without effort. and bucky cannot beat him.
you can understand my growing doubt there. so far the elements of harmony have been easy to break and the bearers incapable of either healing their own or ovecoming strife. to endure is meaningless if you do not overcome it.
it just does not seem to be working, whatever tests they are enduring. least from where i am seeing it. even if some of them are enduring till you figure out how to overcome, pinkie was incapable of overcoming and neither was rainbow dash. putting cheese into all of this was supposedly to strengthen laughter yet from what i saw it was to supplement its weakness.
even if i found it all going right, how could being bound by fate as they are, made to endure scripted tests, going to help them defeat something that the fates are otherwise blind to?
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There is too much wrong with this post. It would take too much away from my writing time to address everything. Sorry.
Something tells me that the first meeting between Bucky and miss Violet will be interesting at the very least.
5416680 like i said, it could be because i am not aware of all that is going on. still from what i am seeing, i do not see them growing strong enough to fight such an enemy.
trust me dude. if this was any other story i would be ranting and raving about it demeaning the mane six by now. SOOO many stories like that. however i can see there is somewhere going with this, just cannot see where it is going or how it will help them. the elements exist to overcome chaos and darkness, and at its strongest can even change it, but not endure it.
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I sort of imagine Violet's having a strong high starting power, but Fluttershy's intense soul-piercing gaze grows stronger the more indignant she is. Piss off the Shyshy too much and you'll get the Stare equivalent of Saddle Rager!
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The two stares working together on one creature would be devastating. One is domination, the other intimidation.
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it's like Pokémon or Stratego, everything has a weakness. War has the ability to find the weakness of anything. But even war has weaknesses. War finds and destroys things by their weaknesses because he is really weak. Against an opponent with no weakness he is vulnerable, also if it's weaknesses are such that war cannot exploit he is also vulnerable. Ie. Foals. If the Night Stallion also had a weakness for foals Bucky would not or could not exploit them to win.
It is settled! Violet Velvet and Fluttershy need to have... a stare off!!!
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It isn't so scary... it is like eating an elephant. Only the first bite is difficult.
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Imagine how daunting it is now....... I started this thing about 10 weeks ago btw. So..... it's been a bit daunting. However it is exactly the type of story length i'v been craving.