How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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And Bucky abandons one of his foals. I knew he was a rotten father!
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Bucky loves all his foals, he just has the same problem the writer of Bleach has with his characters.
When he doesn't know what to do, he just makes more of them.
Or maybe that fresh new-foal smell is just too much for him to resist!
I think you did well with the first part. I love reflectionary moments like this.
Hope? You assume that hope is more than wishful thinking. I understand there is no hope that I will go to equestria. I "hope" that when I die my soul will be etched into nothingness and I do not fall to madness before then. I realize now that I do not live, I survive. If I was content i would have no clue what to do with myself. I wish for continued turbulence in the world as otherwise there will be no use for someone like me. As always you write well but I reached an epiphany and it has made me bitter as a result.
On the topic of hope, i do think i got a bit out of that first part. Celestia is coming to more fully understand Bucky's place in the world and is recognizing the possibility of productive destruction, and not just in Bucky's actions. Celestia then decides to engage in a bit herself, which i am marking as a personal milestone in her own healing. Especially with the recent revelation of the sickness of the Canterhorn and how it has been poisoning everyone there for generations. Letting loose like this is a major departure from her normal operation and is a good first step on overcoming several old habits that haven't died yet, like tolerating the nobility's prattling.
6550472 DON´T TALK ´BOUT BLEACH TO ME...EVER !!!!!
Just ´cause once i watcvh a certain number of episodes I just HAVE TO watch the whole damn series I had to watch everything. Every...little...fucked...chapter..of...that...dammed...anime !!!!!
´Till the Soul Society Arc it was all giggles and good DBZ-like fights...then the rest came and....brrrrrr....
Please, don´t mention Bleach ever again !
Little annoyed Bucky did this. He knew for a fact Dinky was nervous, and all these people turned out for the traditional service. It was supposed to be a celebration of renewal and life together. Working hard towards a sense of normalcy.
Then just ditched after all these people showed up. Granted, all the Ponyville folk expect this of him, but that's kinna crappy. Hope Derpy wingslaps him one good time for leaving Dinky there.
6550918 Believe me: things will develop A LOT and vry soon. Every character will be detailed. That´s just the beginning. And a little advice: some chapters led to anger. This is made on purpose. The author loves to make us believe that we know everything that is happening, while we don´t. Before going into full rage mode, wait a couple of chapters and, usually, you´ll discover that things are not quite like they appear at first time.
In a way, Bucky is a storm... They destroy almost everything, and anything that survives can grow back even stronger. Clever.
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Dinky isn't alone. The rest of her family is there.
And to be fair, Bucky wasn't thinking when he did this. He was reacting. It wasn't part of some greater plot.
I'm curious as to what happened to Silver Spoon after her visit to the hospital via Dinky (and then leaving Ponyville afterwards)?
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But Bucky is hopefully not "The Oncoming Storm," that would be very weird.
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The Night Stallion is about to find out what happens when you poke a cyclone with a stick.
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The first three times I read this I thought you had written "poke a cylon with a stick" which would have been even weirder.
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Bucky creates an enchanted toaster... one bent on war and destruction.
6551167 Crikey! There goes a wild typhoon! These are so deadly, that they can obliterate an entire army without a single thought! I'm gonna go poke it with a stick...
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Put my thumb up its bum...
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And then Dinky accidentally does this
"but the unicorns had scattered like chickens while Celestia had chased them around"
I keep seeing a large swan chasing a flock of chickens. Wish you had written what she said.
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Found the clip it's a good clip. I seem to be full of clips today.
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I thought it a bit strange too, but then it occurred to me:
Foals, Bucky's true weakness, (well, Derpy and Berry too, but "FOALS" are in effect).
Dinky has grown up a lot, so I doubt she felt "abandoned"; she knows how valuable foals are to Bucky.
Heck, she, Piña, and Sentinel all know this.
Also, a foal birth is likely a HUGE source of love for Bucky, so my guess is that it's a treasure trove of positive energy for him.
That, and Celestia...
PRAISE THE SUN!
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Bucky will return to the spring celebration as high as a kite.
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... He's going full junkie now, isn't he?
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He's quite unaware of what the birth will do to him. He is blissfully ignorant of the tidal wave of emotions he is about experience.
Remember how Tourmaline can feel what other ponies are feeling? Not just emotion, but pain and good feelings as well?
6551280 I laughed way too much at that.. because its so accurate.
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Congrats, Dinky!
Knowing her, she will go home, inquire to the health of Cheerilee and the foal(s), give her father a kiss for being so concerned and helping deliver Violet and company, ...and then give him a good wing slap on the snoot for leaving her there.
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Dinky does not have wings.
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True, but she was raised by Derpy with a very heavy pegasus background and i'm sure she figured out to improvise. Beside, she give Diamond Tiara a smack on the snoot wayback at the beginning, so she's done it before, wings or no wings.
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Just bribe Harper with a cookie to give mama a zap.
And Bucky squeezes out again! He need to stop that, though I do suppose childbirth is important, it was only 8 minutes. And the beginning gave me a Tone along the lines of understanding over hope, but eh, still works.
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Which ones? I made a lot of uninformed assumptions in that comment. In actuality I was probably wrong on more than just two assumptions in the comment. Im one of those people who occasionally pulls an all nighter over the weekend but after a while gets a little bit tired and loopy so he just kind of goes around being dumb, that comment was one of my all nighter moments.
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Fascinating. Thanks for a different perspective. This is actually very useful for when I pick my writing apart and perform an analysis.
i spoke with Kudz when he worked on this chapter...
my bet was the Pinkie got there before Bucky even with his magic... for she has the power of PINK
weaponize that and the world might brake, even discord can't handle her when she uses her power to brake reality
I looked at my read later section and i found this story has 800+ chapters i almost fainted! time to get a good drink a good snack and start reading it..is..ON!!!
6552409 another chaser... good luck my friend, this ride is bumpy but hell lot of fun
6552409 good luck, it's named the chase for a reason, by the time you get through it you'll be chasing a good dozen new chapters :p
6552409 You know that history is divided between DC and AC, right ? That´s stand for "Damn, what´s The Chase" and "After reading The Chase".
Believe me, this story rock lifes and more then one universe !
6551951 I can't remember,
Point is, good story, well written, tales up a large amount of time (in story) give it a read.
6552409 hope to see you up here with us soon.
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Hang on to that thought. Wait for about a million or so words in... and reread this comment.
6556572 and i now realize that it is the most violent war i've read.
YAY! almost a year and i near the end.