Persona 6: Reflect · 10:20pm Jul 22nd, 2023
So, the story has been restarted. I'm helping Bahamut Omega a bit with it, but it's still his demon. And yes, it's still the Omega Ruby to my story's Alpha Sapphire. So READ IT GODDAMN IT!!!
Here's a link so you don't have an excuse not to read it. Get to work, people.
It's been 10 years since the end of Inner Demons 2....
I know that you stated to not ask about it, but in the comments section you mentioned perhaps giving a reboot? I just binge read this series over the past week and I must say that I really enjoyed it. I know its based on a kids tv show, but the story and plot itself feels like it belongs in a novel. I was really disappointed to learn that the story had been canceled. Are you still planning on giving a reboot? If you are, I have a few suggestions. Firstly, the "too many characters" argument can be solved one (or two) of two ways. You can kill off characters after slightly developing them (which makes the readers sad) and you can split the characters up like you had done in the original story and develop each of their arcs. This is a commonly used method in TV/Books and can be done really successfully. Just make sure to tie all the arcs together at the end. Also there are some things in the story that may make readers feel uncomfortable such as the Twilight incest and the Applejack polygamy (maybe less), and I think these aspects should either be HEAVILY refined or simply removed. I also really enjoyed the Vale/Spike Arc which was my favorite. Hopefully you do plan a reboot because I really thought you had something going there. I do recall that you mentioned in a comment that you wanted reader feedback. Heres the feedback that I think all of your readers share: We see great potential in your story and trust your writing ability.
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3163532 Alright. I was wondering. Thanks!