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One typo I found.
Also, totally called it on the Sombra thing!
Him not being a total douche nozzle, and married to Platinum were beyond my scope.
Well done, I am loving the long strange trip this story has become.
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEES ... I feel smart!!!! I NEVER can pick up on stuff and I was able too!!! YES YES YES!
(It's fantastic, BTW I just have to be excited that I'm not lost and confused!)
Sombra and Conscience.
Someone was going to make that reference, and I'm glad that I did. I regret nothing!
Seriously though, this was a good chapter.
Mmm... sounds about right
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I wanted to offer an explanation as to why the Sombra we saw was a mindless jerkbag. You don't become a king (usually) by being a mindless twit.
The Elements split him in two.
Don't you hate it when a family phone call cuts out at the worst moment?
In any case, we're back on the climb of rising action. I'm curious as to who the master of the realm is, and what his motivations are. As for the leyline nexus, I'm sure that whatever happens there is going to be epic.
Also, I'm more than somewhat disgusted by the lack of IQ tests for earth ponies. I'd think that Ponyville of all places wouldn't do such a thing.
Derpy is a very clever pony. Woe unto those who might forget that.
Looking forward to more.
The plot thinkens
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Well, yes, Derpy and Berry's plots are going to thicken a bit. And Bucky will be a happy pony.
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I'm guessing the testing is administrated and funded by Canterlot unicorns, whom we've seen are a bunch of useless, self-obsessed twits, with a few exceptions.
interesting. so the idea of sombra losing himself to corruption and being married to platinum, pretty intersting........
how much of this idea comes from the pony sistes journal?
Shit going down! Good job, by the way. You actually made my sympathize with Sombra, and gave him some legit (and admittedly arguable) reasons.
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I haven't read that yet.
Why? Is that in there?
4703959 well no but it does show that the unicorn kingdom was active still. though it does reveal that sombra was nowhere to be found at first with the crystal empire and it wasw originally ruled by a unicorn that bonded with the heart.
will warn that it seems to be written to an even lower age demographic than the show and some things are iffy. like starswhirl somehow perfectin time travel yet never writing it down as it seems, though i would like to think it was something else considering the idw comics, and them basically rhyming a gryphon into submission using the royal canterlot voice.........
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dum dum dum....
4703938 HA! I like the way you think
I´ll refrain myself from saying how marvelous and perfect this is to avoid being offended...
...
Ops, already did it !
BTW, not sure if i forgot someting in the past chapters but, i don´t fully understand the need from Derpy to explain what she´ll do with Thistle to Keg. Care to give a light ´bout that ? I thought that, as long she was accpeted in a happy and caring herd, where she could breed, it was all good and shine for Keg.
Edit: a curious pattern. Every new chapter get 4 more likes to this fic, not sure why exactly four each time, but it happened in the last 3 chapters. I really looking forward to the 1.000 likes !!!
I think you accidentally put an extra word here.
Ahem....
FUCKING CALLED IT!!!
Not too sure I like the idea of Celestia being a damn neuralizer. Also, I will happily help him remove the taint on his bloodline. Somepony pass me my flamethrower.
This chapter was great, did not expect to see platinum though. WE ALL were aware of sombra in the mix, but platinum staying with her husband was a interesting revelation. And hooray for the quest to restore platinums family name, though he is already doing a good job with his family. He may have left his parents and house avarice. But he is still of platinums blood and a descendant and can continue her bloodline through his own foals.
I can't help but compare this to FF4.
Now I kinda wish the cast of this was made into a Pony Fantasy 4, like Pony Fantasy 6 sorta was.
Bucky would make a great Cecil.
Huh, I never really thought of Platinum and Sombra existing in the same time period. I always assumed that Princess Platinum was way before that.
I don't know what I like more about this chapter, the lore that was dropped about the lay lines or the fact that you too think that Sombra was a hero before he fell into darkness!
well that was predictable
edit: not the platinum part, the sombra part
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Yet Bucky is a scion of Princess Platinum. Is it so surprising?
4705502 surprising or not, i didn't see it coming.
4705779 I have been apart for a few months but I have to say. Reliance on others is not as weak as it may appear even if that is your only other option. Worked for the Roman legions.... AND seems more like a force for strength if others all go their separate ways instead. Who cares if you have shields, squadrons or awesome death rays? If they are not there for you it does not matter if you know a god or two. You are still alone.
Now I will go fetch my popcorn and see what I have stirred up...
4704483 AHH!!!!!
Who keeps feeding this pony, the plot thicken!
Ha! I knew it!
Wait... It was obvious... Don't be proud of this
The saddest thing about this arc is how fast all of the characters must grow. Whether it be to bear the near-infinite weight of a many centuries old curse, or the simple yet maddeningly complex acts of managing a relationship(s). The universe is essentially telling them "Mare up or get stepped on!" and it's so sad and yet so gratifying to see them grow so quickly. I'm happy with this new development, it's rather interesting how you took the curse, I think it's reasonable and more than acceptable!
You have my attention O.O
shit's getting real......we be in for a ride and i can't wait for it to start
I really don't like how you portray dinky, she seems like the only one in her "group" (pina dinky ripple, and sentinel to a degree) it's one thing to take lead in a situation, its another to just have one pony be the focus, where only she does things relevant to the main story, everyone like sentinel and dinky seem to have to defend dinky alone, becuase she is the only pony with no self defence or anyone to watch over (you know, that thing that EVERYONE ELSE has done up until here) sure she's been dinky's companion and studied with her, etc. but she seems to be humdrum for this whole story, while dinky and sentinel are getting all the attention, always telking about "protect pina and whoever" just for the sake of the plot, and really, it is starting to irritate me.
now that I've gotten that off my chest I would like to say that you have a very nice story and I in no means dislike it
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Wasn't that established near the beginning of the story though? I thought the whole point was Bucky's family was most powerful in Canterlot due to being from Platinum's bloodline. They feel from grace due to...well, being terrible people, and Bucky is the exception.
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4703719 yup. called it as well, though i admit i had a different prediction as to what the explanation of him being mindless was.
4782963 Mwa ha ha! I was right!
4787550 Yay!
WHOO! I'm at the halfway point!
I think I will refer to Buckminster as Buckmeister.
I just knew Sombra was the boogypony!
Spoilers
had done a great deal to sooth Derpy’s frazzled nerves
1. Soothe. I don't think it's possible to sooth nerves.
Awesom chapter! And sneaky sneaky secrets~ I love em all! They're so gawddamn tasty.
Nicely done!
4734735 I had a cat do that to me once... it scared the shit out of me
Excellent! An addition to the story that points far beyond just this early arc!
Still reading, still having fun.
“Done!” Keg Smasher shouted. “You will have your private room, Thistle will have a herd to look after her needs, Thistle will also have a really nice night most likely, and Bucky gets to watch a nice show, because hey, what stallion doesn’t want to watch two of his mares fooling around.”
When it got to this point i just imagined Keg slamming his hoof on the ground causing a loud boom then pointing at Derpy shouting "DONE!"
Chapter 83
Feels like you're missing a word there.