How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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I keep saying it. Had she calmed down, she was capable of conjuring water. She failed to do so.
that is kinda why i have the semi head canon idea that ponies and beings of magic have supernatural survivability. considering how dangerous ponies technically are and the world they live in, something hsa to keep from a daily death total from bein in the hundreds.
Again with the downvoting of everything I post.
Somebody has no life. Or nothing better to do with their time apparently.
Another amazing chapter, and I am settling myself down to upvote every comment our Kudzu posts!
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While it is only your comments being downvoted and not everyones, I feel this comment I made on another fic still applies
Oh. And now it looks like they possibly downvoted me.
this should be 'can't go anymore but she's a foal and you might let it slip. (Or somehow have Pina slip in a comment about it but that'd likely ruin the flow and the moment.)
and this should be doesn't but the same thing applies as above so I'm not sure if these are actually typos? Are they?
Dinky is a tough little cuss, man. Can't wait to see the family unload on those shadow bastards!
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Dinky speak has its own nuances.
So does Derpy speak, Berry Speak, and Sentinel speak.
I don''t know what...... but something about that line is just wrong
funny
but wrong
Sleep, this fan commands it. Your no good to us suffering from sleep deprivation kudz. I'm sure my fellow fans will understand. And keep up the good work, there's a reason you have such die hard an fathful readers.
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Mid 30s? Where does it say that?
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Your portrayals of the foals is frequently quite good. Pina saying she sat on Dinky's head and farted...and it was wet. All while coming across in the sense of foals being somewhat unknowingly blunt and direct in a way adults often forget how to be. Well done.
And just because it keeps niggling at me, I hope Bucky someday finds spells in the ley lines to restore his body. It's certainly not outside the realm of possibility.
Oh, and grammatical whoopsie.
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“On my wings,” Ripple replied.
“We’ll, let’s go,” Piña said. (Does this line really make sense in the flow or am I being wonky?)
...HA!
Oh Celestia, angry Dinky!
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Soooooo I'm not gonna lie here I'm a bit worried about the direction Bucky might transform if I'm reading into the foreshadowing correctly, I might be horribly awfully wrong of course but I'm kinda worried you're gonna go for a were-pony or even worse ugh........ a pony/wolf hybrid transformation just umm if you do be careful that you don't drive bucky too far into the "edgy cool" character trope......
or do I mean its your story dude I'm just throwing out my two cents about it.
I just wouldn't want this to happen to poor Bucky.
XOXO LOVE THE STORY KUD <3
It seems like this is something Bucky should have taught Dinky earlier, or was it that he just wasn't expecting her to advance this quickly?
This is NOT a criticize at all...just a feeling i have...
I miss old innocent Dinky...sure, i understand (and you already told us, in a blog post, that all of then would grown and change due to the suffering, and you made clear that the foals would bear the biggest change of all) why you did that, but, still, i miss those lovely chapters with her being so foalish. Good that we have a new foal (although it would take sometime before she can even talk) and Piña is still so innocent...
And, really, i understand how difficult is for you to sleep, due to pain and other things. But, even so, try, at least, to lay down and rest. Not as good as sleeping, but better then worning yourself out working. I recommend breath exercises. I have asma and seleeping problems as well, and laying while i control my breath rythim helps a lot...
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And that is where you are wrong.
That chapter is the essence of The Chase.
Your own views have been provoked and challenged, and later, in another chapter, events are a bit more explained and make more sense.
Happened a lot in the earlier chapters and there was a flood of butthurt. Like with Cheerilee, who was a BAD TEACHER.
The focus on Dinky's suffering was intentional. I wanted an emotional gut check where people would fail to be reasonable and rational. It was pure emotional manipulation. And then I went and made things clear. I added reasons for why it was done and the rational thoughts behind them.
Sociological imagination and society crafting is a fickle thing to do. Keep in mind that your view is shaped by what you know. Had you lived in another part of the world or another era, this might have been merciful behaviour by a human standard. Or a normal thing to do.
Heck, before there were child labour laws, right here in America we worked kids for 12 to 18 hours straight in stifling factories with no breaks, no food, and no water. While there were deaths, a lot of those kids survived and went on to have kids of their own that also laboured away in those factories. A person of that time might be reading this, realising Dinky collapsed after about four hours, and wondering what the hell is wrong with the little weakling.
Just try to keep an open mind.
This reminded me of http://www.newscientist.com/article/dn19473-transgenic-indian-superspuds-pack-more-protein.html
Transgenic potatoes to make more protein.
A solution to the ethical issues for some ponies about meat-eating.
It's becoming increasingly clear that Bucky turning himself into a shadow creature has had an impact on his activity cycle. He's no longer comfortable in the daylight. Heck, he even sees better in lower light.
As for Dinky, I admire her fortitude and self-awareness. The previous chapter was, as you put it, a punch in the emotional gut, but it was necessary. The alternative was a repeat of the Diamond Tiara incident. Dinky has to be able not just to call up phenomenal cosmic power, but to put it back down afterwards.
I look forward to more.
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why yes, i knew.
okay Yoda.
They must be really bored... I got bored last night... But i put an odd comment on Knighty's page. I wasn't being a dick.
What is up with Bucky? Shedding, greying and eyesight failing? Does he got malignant rapid cataracts and mange or something?
Sounds like his body is falling apart, the least important systems failing first.
“Well, let’s go,” Piña said.
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Another chapter well done, awesome job dude, awesome job!
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As an insomniac I approve of this message
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First of all, I want to say that this is my 3rd time reading the chase from the begging. I truly love this novel. I think you are soing and amazing job qith the caracteres and the story. Amazing work!!!
Now, my opinion on your message:
If that was rhe case, then bucky could have explained to dinky right away.
Even better, he cpuld have done it regularly, if he already knew that it could happen. I only think that bucky and derpy gave dinky a really hard time for something that wasn't her fault, and the knew that. Or maybe im missing something.
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Sleep is for the living and the dead.
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