How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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It's neat how many sounds animals with beaks can make. Lugus and other griffins are like lyre birds.
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I wonder if Rising Star will become an actual weapon smith. He seems to find it therapeutic.
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Question: (Yes I know I should have asked it in the Q&A >.<) Will Yew and Lugus also snag another herd member, or will it just be the two of them?
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How many characters do you expect me to juggle?
4934664 As many as physically possible.
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Count the cast members I am currently working with. Bucky's herd, the growing tribe, the isles, the mainland, and soon, THE FOALS. Oh Goddess Eris have mercy on me.
4934680 ENDURE THE PAIN! MUAHAHAHAHAHAAHH!!!
Lugus and Yew are just getting more and more loveable... if either of them die I will curse your name forever. The feels are just so strong in this chapter. I'm also looking forward to Bucky and Derpy being parents to that whole troop of mares.
4934680 Mercy on you !? You fool !!! What ´bout us, faithfull readers !? We must endure remember more name´s in your story then i can remeber in my own family !!!!
At some point you need a blog post with a resumee for each char...
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You need to make us a character list to keep track
You know, this just hit me and I'm sure someone else has probably brought it up before...but if Bucky has to become an alicorn, there's nothing saying he has to be the alicorn of WAR does he? Heck even the fates have probably figured this out since the vow they got from him was 'don't become the alicorn of war' not 'don't become an alicorn.' While, again, it's not what he wants, things DO seem to be shoving him headfirst towards alicornhood. Personally I think something like Protection or Family works better for him, though the latter might clash with Cadance(Love) or Twilight(Friendship).
But if Bucky did become an Alicorn, think of the steamy mutual preening sessions he and Derpy could get into...
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The stars say war... would the stars ever lie?
As for mutual preening... Berry Punch helped Derpy preen as you might recall. For Bucky, it is as simple as getting a mouthful of pegasus slobber and learning what to do.
Alicorns don't preen. Not time efficient. Cast special alicorn spell, poof! Perfect feathers and you are good to go.
4934863 Some might say the only world worth living in.
A motherfucker.
I think you're missing the word I inserted.
God, this story is my cocaine.
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Well, the stars aided in Nightmare Moon's escape, and we know how that worked out. Whether they lie is up for debating, but they can certainly be defied.
Found one
what, so (you) are you Rising [remove word]
“I am glad that I have came to these isles. I have met some of the most important beings in my life here,”
I spy with my picky eye...a typo here. "I came to these isles" or "I have come to these isles" seems to work better.
And consarnit! Your chapters are too short! Granted, I enjoy chapters on the order of 10,000 words or at least 5,000. Sometimes I have to wait a day to let a couple chapters stack, just so I can let myself sink into the story more and not feel like I'm in sudden imaginative freefall. Brain flailing causes brain failing.
Oooh, interspecies lost chapter? I hope so!
4934568 Even better when you teach them to swear!
So much perfect. Yes. Good.
4934895 The stars mightn't lie. But they could be misheard. And honestly I think the Alicorn of Peace would be good. Cause aside from love it's one of the few things worth fighting for.
That was so sweet and many at the same time, didn't even feel the need to punch a wall afterwards
If he was going to be the 'Lord of Winter' then it would make more scene if he became the 'Alicron of Winter'.
Even though it's pointless to argue the topic when Kudz has practically flat out said that it's not going to happen.
Personally I don't want Bucky to ascend. As it would mean putting him through the very same pain that drove Sombra Mad in the first place, the loss of a loved one (maybe even worse cause he has to watch them waste away). Plus, considering he has Sombra's memories, it would probable compound the pain and trauma he would experience. That would NOT be a pretty picture.
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Going back on his word would cause death.
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But this is how some people talk. Conversational grammar is different than written grammar.
NO!
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one cold motherfucker*
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I considered the Alicorn of Unity, thinking along the lines of his writings about his clan and how they're all ponies.
Crush turned around and checked smithy
by a sizeable herd of earth ponies, lead by Sour Mash
Sour Mash continued .
1. Crush turned around and checked the smithy.
2. Led.
3. Extra spacing before your fullstop. Again.
That Lyre bird video. Killed me.
And thats how I became a hippogriff with pony head. Mother squited me out of her filly beats, small sized hippogriff with paws as forelegs instead of talons.
A mother-fker.
i'm not sorry
Hehehehe, another wel done chapter!
I SHIP IT! I SHEEEEEEEEP IT.
Yew x Lugus = Best Ship
Buckbeak?