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Never have happened.
Also, HOW ARE YOU WRITING ALL THIS.
speeeeeeed. so fast.
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Today, Blinded By the Sun, Badly Written Life of Purple Prosie, Set in Stone, and The Chase.
You have chosen your screen-name well, kudzuhaiku.
Very well indeed.
I'm glad that Filthy is owning up to his failure in DT but... it comes off as a little protagonist-centric that he then apologizes (and offers a large sum of money) for having his daughter assaulted by a swarm of bees. I understand that DT dug her own hole here, and it's Filthy's failure as a father that led to this... but after she already got way more than was coming to her, I don't think an apology to the one who did it is something that's needed. And the whole scene hammering home how pathetic he is seems pretty excessive. As if somehow his daughter getting hospitalized wasn't enough punishment for his mistakes.
I understand Bucky had to understand that Filthy was sincerely regretful, but... well it's just awfully one sided, weighted heavily toward the protagonists, when it's a complicated situation in which both parties did something awful, by accident or on purpose.
... Figures the first time I commented on this story is a complaint when I've been loving the heck out of it.
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Probably with a keyboard.
Also, this may be consequence of Derpy being the center but I get the feeling distinct feeling that pegasi and earth pony culture are being pushed as superior.
We the winged, touchy feely tribe. The other who are wise and in touch with the earth and what not. Then we have the magic users who are unstable neurotic messes. As a unicorn, I take offense.
You have to have a back log of chapters already written right? There is no way you are just belting out this many chapters wit so few errors this quickly. However you did neglect one important thing: what happened to all the popcorn was it eaten or partially thrown out? The people have a right to know!
Wow... I was not expecting that to happen. Perhaps there is hope for Filthy still.
Maybe for DT as well.
I don´t know why but sometimes i don´t like the charater pairings at first, but probably because i doesn´t know them enough.
Now i have to say i am ok with Sparkler and the other one, and well it could be that she just act a bit more teen like i do back than and that is why i probably don´t get along with her right away.
Like i said i am good with it now.
But i have to say, Rainbow don´t have to say that always, i think i would go crazy if there are always the pegasus, wich try to keep me doing something or not. But if they don´t say to much and just watch till something serious happend, then i like it.
PS: I am very statisfied with your explanation about Sparklers Pegasus manners, Earth Pony sin and Unicorn Body.
How do you keep it up with those chapters?^^ I have to be 3 Chapters from yesterday till today after my work
I like the idea of the peanut butter test. "The first of the tests to determine your arcane might, the strength of your birthright as unicorn, the blessing and burden you carry as do we all, is... to open this jar of peanut butter."
Dinky didn't perform cornilingus. That either involves talking to the corn or a certain act that she's definitely not experiencing until she's older.
High-level unicorns can induce fusion!? I'm amazed Twilight's entrance exam surge didn't level Canterlot.
(I suppose it would be very tricky. That's a lot of energy in a very tiny space.)
I continue to love what you've done with earth ponies at their best. Not least because it's similar to the reasoning I used to explain Pinkie's possible fourth-wall awareness. Listen long enough and carefully enough, and you may hear the animators' mouse clicks echo through the earth.
As always, looking forward to more.
Just had a thought. If earth ponies can think better when they are working on something, could this mean that Big Macintosh is possibly the greatest mind in Equestria?
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Eyup.
4330582 i swear i had to stare at your profile image for like 3 minutes because i thought it was rarity sucking on a hoof
Bucky has considered making hydrogen bombs.
Tell me again why Equestria needs the Elements when a type three can stand in for 100 trained soldiers. And level cities.
except discord, nightmare moon, and sombra, all type five.
nvm
... And Twilight's level four? OP
dawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
4332064 That was... surprisingly deep. I like.
I also think the the finished analogy Berry Bunch was meditating on was pegasi are the sensory organs, unicorns are the collective mind, and earth ponies are the skeletal structure holding them together.
This is a most unorthodox story. The hardest part was finishing chapter 1.
It seemed to be a silly romantic comedy.
It became social commentary.
A little bit of horror.
Fascination.
Fixation.
Philosophy.
Something far more than anyone could have predicted.
One of the best, most thought-provoking stories I've ever read.
And this is only chapter 17. I still have 47 chapters to go.
Been wanting to say this since my first read through.
"Bucky didn’t need to make threats. He merely needed to apply several thousand tons of force to a small singular area or fuse a couple of hydrogen atoms in the general vicinity of something he didn’t like."
Total badassery.
... or fuse a couple of hydrogen atoms in the general vicinity of something he didn’t like.
Marty McFly: Are you telling me that this sucker is NUCLEAR?
Hehehe... pooped... Is it weird I feel like Bucky felt when Celestia said 'Plot'?
and knock was
And THE knock was
liquid learning, she could never become lost, being a living walking compass.
Liquid Learning, she could never become lost, being a living, walking compass.
4818595 I'm surprised cities haven't been destroyed during magic surges if that's the case
Seriously? They can just decide to cause fusion? Why haven't angry unicorns scorched the planet?
Their medical tech is probably pretty good, too.
Man this story, it started out as something silly...
then it became something way more intense
Gawd you got skill sucka.
Hydro bombs!
4334431 Oooh my, that's an interesting thought... hmm...
4334431 bet you he's found the Answer to Ultimate Question of Life, the Universe, and Everything. I also bet that ye knows the Question as well, because you can't know the Answer without first knowing the Question.
GO GET EM' SPARKY!
Thousand?
Full stop after anyway
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If it was only "a few" hydrogen atoms instead of a few thousand, this could be plausible. (I think).
Good stuff. I'm hooked.
Fair word of advice
Do NOT read on the green letters with black background theme (in a dark room)
Unless you want to see purple instead of black (it's slightly less noticable than having a sense of smell for me)
Chapter 17-
Should be a comma after living and before walking.
This story is a gem, and I am so glad I took the time to start reading it. I can happily say that this is one of, if not the best, story that I have ever read on this site. I look forward to the rest of the story, and I thank you for the experience you have given me so far. please keep doing this wonderful thing you have been doing, and I wish you a good day.
Seems like there's an unnecessary have. But hey, what do I know?
A Pegasus at heart, an Earth Pony in mind, and a Unicorn in body. THIS is the kind of social experimentation Celestia needs to be perpetuating for the sake of the Founders' dream.
So in a level 1 to level 5 ranking of magical potential, level 3, the middle of the road has conquered nuclear fusion AND established the Council of the Heavenly Bodies in an age long past. Twilight Sparkle ('nuff said) is a level 4. Level 5 represents the entirety of the Equestrian ruling class and completely eclipses anything of a lower ranking.
I have just one question. How many tons of Powdered Invader can be found mixed into Equestrian soil if one digs deep enough at any given open plain?
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...none. for not even atoms remain.