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punishment for her actions
control in gemstone in
Comma not period, or capital 'b'
And now that the biggest threat is incapacitated, time for the wolves to attack!
Nice with the bell at the end xD and great chapter <3 though Bucky and rising have no idea how much terror is waiting for them when all the mares goes into heat xD
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Scots and Irish.
Think Celtic ponies.
Why do I get the feeling these "Bells" being rung are referencing Starswirl the Bearded
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You cannot unring a bell is classical expression in literature.
Google it for some great examples!
Jeez Lyra, thats a lot of moral relativism. I agree with her mostly, but still. Nice chapter, I can't wait to see what happens.
My inner though while i was reading this chapter;
"Wow, a pretty big chapter...i hope that kudzu don´t worn out himself doing th....IT´S OVER !? ALREADY !? I DEMAND MORE !!!!!"
True history, bro.
BTW, that "bell metaphore" has some source, of you created it all by yourself ?
Gonna call it now, twilights the scholar and bucky is the protector, twilight is a decendent of starswirl and thus bucky's extrememly long distance cousin
It's just a theory of mine, but I think the reason why both Bucky and Twilight can tap into the ley lines… is because they're unicorns.
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I am also guessing this unicorn/artificial alicorn will be showing up in "The Catch".
More awesome chapters! bravo, i really like how you made all their actions very believable, lots of writers have trouble doing that.
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Using the residual energy that radiates from them is very very different than tapping into them directly.
Look at it this way. You place your hands over a fire, and you feel warm.
What happens if you stick your hands into the fire?
I think you mean "over with".
Nice to see the roles in the herd are all cemented. Im so impressed with how you've managed to take all these disparate personalities and make them work as a family unit (which is not to say Im any more adverse to the idea of Pina brand wolf food).
I guess you meant Bucky here, I'm just a tad confused who was being referred to.
Some how I think Bucky has some rather leud plans for his ship. And poor Rising Star summer approaches and he is worried about his drought. But when the summer rains come... Can he handle the floodwaters.
A ring a-ding ding Dinks o.o You go filly.
Bon-Bon you naughty mare....X3
Status: Defcon 1, Arm the Balefire bombs.
"He was a married colt that was somehow maintaining his virginity"
Shouldn't "colt" be changed to filly, he's talking about Sparkler right?
"Bucky froze up for a moment, shuddered, and felt a twinge of absolute terror. At some point, he was going to be surrounded by mares in heat. He took a long drink from his jug, felt a cold chill run down his spine" ....... Can't wait to read about that :P
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No, he was a married colt. That is correct. He is speaking of himself.
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No, this is self referential. Every one was looking at her, and Berry is an extravert.
Okay, caught up. And there's quite a lot here to enjoy. Seeing the payoff of all of this preparation is definitely going to be awesome... though I have to admit, I do feel a little nervous about the outcome of the upgrade ritual. It's possible, yes, but what happens afterwards?
(Also, a necrocurious electromancer? You've made Lyra von Frankenstein. That's fantastic.)
It's probably just where a kelpie's magic is strongest, but I can't help but wonder how Thistle's foal is being affected by exposure to all of these high energy magic experiments.
Looking forward to more.
4770801 Gotcha,
For some reason I read it as "he was married TO a colt"
Things just went from a casual trot to a brisk canter, I can't wait till they start to gallop.
What I want to know is when is when is somepony going to realize that the island needs a sewage network and/or septic tanks and/or a water treatment plant, and start taking actions to bring it about.
4771257 I think that a great many folks realize these things, but it takes a certain amount of money to impliment any of it and so far it has not been available. This is changing now and I am sure many plans are being made. It will likely be a matter of baby steps though...... Storm sewers that run into the ocean and then old style street sweepers. Old style street sweepers meaning the guys you sometimes see in old cartoons with the big white trashcans and brooms....... which was how many cities dealt with the exact same problem before cars replaced horses.
Another bell had been rung.
First thing in my head after reading that line.
Oh how the bells, sweet silver bells, all seem to say, throw cares away.
Oh Kudzu, in these last chapters you have outdone yourself. The happiness is real, the happiness is back, and it demands to be felt after its tortured brother had reigned for so long. The growth has been exponential these last few chapters, and my gods I'm loving every letter of it. I can practically hear the bells.
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'I am also guessing this unicorn/artificial alicorn will be showing up in "The Catch".'
Surely the logical composite alicorn would be CMCicorn. AppleBelloo?.
:)
It does raise the interesting question of how pegacorns, earthacorns, earthasus's would manifest.
I wonder if we'll see seaponies.
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Yes actually. I learned how to type on a typewriter so I hammer away on a keyboard when I type.
Ok, at this point if anyone is surprised to learn that twilight is star swirls decendant has clearly not been seeing the writing on the wall
sadly everytime i hear the word bells I think of dark souls, which them conjures up images of Bucky as the chosen undead.
still, great chapter all around.
Lyra i'm pretty sure this isn't Soviet Russia
The universe rights itself once again.
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Who keeps bloody down voting you?
5274240 Someone who is clearly alert. Both you and Kudzu just got downvoted, to bring his post up to two and yours to one.
Its kind of funny... as I read this day to day I see the upvotes go up. I started at 1301, became an upvote myself, and the dislikes have been practically frozen as the likes are at 1309. Keep up the great work.
Bells are significant! :D
Hahaha!
Nice job on this dude!
I was listening to this at the end there, and it felt like a good song for that moment.
Keep it up!
CELTICS!
6548570 technically Celts. Celtic is an adjective, not a noun.
4770234 All this talk about bells makes me think of For Whom the Bell Tolls