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Elysium is a part of Tartarus.
I've changed it a bit for ponies, but not much. My Elysium is a place of eternal green fields.
Know much about Greek mythology?
Calling Tartarus a prison is just plain wrong. It is, but it isn't. All of the dead went there. The good and the bad.
There were places like the Fields of Asphodel and the Elysium Fields. The Fields of Punishment.
I think you meant 'hung'.
I had a feeling Bucky was trying not to think of something, but didn't expect it to be that. Sparkle is right though. They are going to face difficulty at home.
F5...F5...F5...F5...F5...OH, nice, new chapter !
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F5...F5...F5...F5...F5...F5...F5...F5...F5...
Kudzu, would you mind if i ask the others fans ´bout other stories they´re following that have the same ammount of awesomeness then yours (even if they have completly different focus, like comedy, adventure, anthro) so we can have something to do between your updates ?
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Not sure I understand what is being said here...
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Gosh, worst english skills ever, i really need to improve.
Okay, let´s try another way. I was ´bout to ask your fans ´bout other stories they like too. Since we all love the Chase-verse, this imply, in some level, that we have a like-mind. So, before asking then ´bout such good stories like yours, i asked permission, since i´m not sure if this would be disrespectfull or not.
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That's a really good idea.
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Thanks.
So i´m following a Godzilla-sized ammount of stories right now, but very few make me stop anything and read. Chase-verse stories are some of those. The other story that makes me stop anything is Mente Materia...it´s a cross with X-Com games, but you don´t need to know those games (i don´t) to enjoy. Actually, Mente Materia is a sequel, you MUST read Stardust first, then Broken and, after that, Mente Materia.
You have Twilight Sparkle in the human world (no anthro, she is a talking pony) while a alien invasion is bringing chaos to the planet. Her peacefull personality is a big problem when you have power to crush several tons on an enemy that is VERY willing to kill and slash you in the worst possible ways. Lots of action, a really good impersonation of Sparkle (wich includes a personality debrief from the human command psicologist) and very charismatic chars. And the most terryfing Discord i ever saw. Really, this guy have 4 or 5 scenes and he scares me to the ground.
Hurrah! 'Tis been Featured Again!
Only one "e". One lens, two lenses. Silly English.
In any case, Sparkler probably could've picked a better time to address the issues facing the family after they deal with the wolves, but at least someone has pointed out that those issues do exist. Still, they'll cross that bridge when they come to it, and they still have a bridge covered in ravenous shadow aberrations to cross first.
Harper's hair brings Pinkie Pie to mind. Hmm. How do party ponies work in this universe?
And, as I've said in the past, Dinky's element is the greatest element of all. The element of BEES!
Looking forward to more.
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To be accurate to the actual Greek Mythos, the entire Underworld-realm is named after its ruler: Hades. So Hades the god, rules Hades the Underworld-realm, and all those other listed sub-realms (such as Tartarus) are under Hades' (god & realm) custodial dominion ("ruling" is a bit strong, since Hades did not actually want the job of running the Underworld-realm).
Tartarus is indeed a prison, the Olympians' "maximum security" prison. Tartarus is where the Titans are kept locked away. Likewise, Tartarus holds the very worst of souls that have offended the Olympian Pantheon, with no chance for redemption or release.
The Fields of Punishment are for the "lesser" condemned souls are put for their eternal punishments. The irony being that most condemned there could leave that sub-realm if they truly repented or were remorseful of the crimes they suffer for...but none ever do.
The Fields of Asphodel are the "neutral" sub-realm, where souls who are neither "good" nor "evil" remain. The Greek Mythos' version of Christian Purgatory.
And finally the Elysian Fields, the Greek Mythos' version of Christian Heaven.
Just a friendly point-out from a mythological scholar (not just Greek) & fellow brony...
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http://www.fimfiction.net/story/1571/the-end-of-ponies - Bonus airships!
Set in the bleak wasteland that Equestria's become.
With shining beauty from moments that were.
One of the few fics longer than the chase. (for the moment).
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/195240/succession is a very much shorter and alas stalled fic.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/67362/hard-reset is Eakins take on Groundhog Day. Though with dramatically more TwiNinja. The dark tag is quite earned.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/186794/blinded-by-the-sun is yet another of the many on my list that shares a particular problem - just one writer!
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Hard Reset is 99% of the reason i registered on this site. Fall of Equestria seems interesting, i´ll give a try but more then a year without updates scares me. Thanks anyway !
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I said what I said because it is more than just a prison.
I did say that it was, but it wasn't.
Just feels wrong calling it a prison with it being so much more.
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Well it depends upon the particular mythos' version of Tartarus you read, of course. Whether the sub-realm is "just" the Olympians' "maximum security" prison of eternal containment &/or torment, or more than that, comes into individual interpretation. But at Tartarus' bottommost-base description throughout any of its versions, is that it imprisons the Titans and the irredeemable &/or unforgivable by the Olympians.
Also, saying that Elysium is a part of Tartarus is incorrect, as is saying Tartarus is the whole of the Greek Underworld-realm is also incorrect. Both Tartarus and Elysium are sub-realms of the overall realm of Hades.
Hawai'i is not a province of Arkansas, in the United States of Arkansas. That was what drew my eye.
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It is part of Tartarus in the sense that it is part of the Greek notion of the afterlife, part, parcel, and package as a whole.
There are also the Isles of the Blessed, for those who reached Elysium three times.
I speak of them collectively as the realms of the dead as a whole, and the version I use in The Chase is of course modified slightly.
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Right, if you are labeling Tartarus as the overall Underworld-realm as part of your fan-fiction, that is fine. I have no problems there.
I was speaking upon the actual Greek Mythos itself, not within your fan-fiction or even within MLP:FiM itself, since that was the comment that caught my eye was about.
I believe you meant 'were'. But otherwise, I have found nothing.
Typo,
'It was over in a moment, and the Harper giggled as she rubbed her head with her forehoof.' Delete the word 'the' before Harper's name. :)
Ugh... I hate gasbag airships. Why can't somepony invent a 400 HP diesel arcane engine? Bit a stabilization here and there, Pinkie Pie has already figured out vertical flight so that shouldn't be an issue.
Make it look like something awesome and fantasy like to fit the story... something like this.
img4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100829051349/finalfantasy/vi/images/a/a0/Highwind_5.jpg
5059830 With WHAT resources?
Sentinel yawned feeling exhausted .
Sentinel yawned, feeling exhausted .
1. Eh, just a minor spacing for your fullstop. I have zero idea why things like this bother me the way they do...
I should hurry up and read the other chapters as well so I can add my two bits for speculation. Speculation is fun. Meh, I'll throw in my two bits here anyways.
I wonder if Sentinel will grow up with an immunity to having a milking fetish? Maybe he'll meet a pony who has one and be like; "Oh, you're into that? Heh, you seem so much like my dad."
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Crude transmutation. Sure, wouldn't look EXACTLY like that, but it would function the same because Bucky would say so.
Another awesome and well done chapter dude, awesome job on this!
Hahaha! I love your writing dude, legit, its great!
Keep it up!
Harper. Called Lyra. A Cow.
6977657 oh my god, i missed that