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Well, time to break out the ol' bucket'o'cofee, this looks like it's gonna be a loooooooooooooooooong read.
P.S. From what i've read up 'till now, it's just adorable.
Have a like.
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Thank you.
the pegasus
6243273 I know, but this like trying to drown the Human Torch in gasoline. I mean, SURE, it's technically POSSIBLE, but...
6245093 i was thinking that they would use magic to cause ignition in gunpowder.
I have to ask, why did you keep this as one huge story, and not break it up into smaller stories?
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That had better be a big bucket of coffee. Unless you have an amazingly high reading speed, you're in for at least several solid days of reading, or 10+ if you only read 8 hours a day. (This is based on my estimated 400wpm, which a script tells me would take 78.5 hours to read all of The Chase.)
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I dunno.
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They told me to break The Chase up into smaller sections...
But I didn't listen!
Things are heating up!
Why is Bucky injured? Unless the ice elemental wasn't a transformation like a griffon Bucky or a fem Bucky...
Nice queenly-ness there.
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Did you forget what happened to Sparkler when she was shattered?
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It was liked when that giant demon smashed Sparkler into tiny bits and she had to form herself a new body from the rocks. Bucky's body became the ice, and all the damage done to that body transferred to his normal one when he reverted.
6245118 Yeah...fuck the system !!!!
Man, Bucky has a rare talent for sticking it in either crazy, or murderous. Belisama is now a 100% certified badass.
Why people dislike this? This is funny!
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Oh goddamnit she's Touki.
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The transformation spell he usually uses is like a Pokemon's Substitute move. He's still there and can do whatever he wants, but anything acting on his body is just messing up the Substitute doll. He dumps his meatsuit into a pocket dimension and builds a different body for his consciousness to be in. This is more BECOMING something else.
Good to see all those power leveled ranks in Bad Ass Bellisama has been taking is paying off.
I get the feeling that little Cadance is going be torn between sobbing into Bucky while hugging the stuffing out of him, and using her tiny hooves and wings to beat the cap out of him for being such an idiot an worrying/scaring her like that.
Heh. Bucky has it coming when Cadence gets ahold of him.
Poor Bucky.
The number of chapters makes me wary, not because of the length, but because you literally would have had to publish one chapter a day. From my experience, every single fic that publishes one chapter a day is usually subpar when it comes to the plot and grammar. The number of dislikes adds to this fear.
What I am commenting for is to ask people who read this fic if it is worth it, or if it is just an extended slice of life that is made up as it goes along.
Granted, I could be wrong and the person writing this is a superhuman that has the brainpower to write and come up with a beautiful overreaching plot, while simultaneous picking apart errors as they are made. Someone who pumps out idea's and chapters like a machine, and who's quality stays constant throughout each chapter.
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Error detection is crowdsourced and the plot is mostly well built and easy to follow. I suspect all the downvotes are from the content itself. The dark tag is very well earned.
And Belisama proves why she embodies the "Killer Rabbit" trope in my mind.
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I do 5 or 6 chapters a day of different stories. I am not human.
We're nearing 2,000,000 words!
6246843 Obviously.
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Don't worry, he gets better.
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Gentlemen! Behold! The end result of wife worship and telling them that they are pretty!
6246843 all hail kudzu! for he is a god of writing! seriously though several chapters a day? each with over a thousand words? how do you find the time?
So, when do we get the the Shounen Anime Final Stand Battle? You know, where all the characters you've seen up till now, even ones you might have forgotten about, all join together and are given their own individual moments of badassery as they take on waves or specifically numbered, equally skilled, opponents. It's fucking everywhere man, it's how epics like this usually climax.... No? Just gonna go another five hundred chapters? Shrugs What ever man, authors call, not mine.
It's great to see Belisama come full circle. She was a Slave herself, one who was terrified and abused. Now she liberated slaves who are terrified and abused themselves! <3