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knight
naiveté? I dunno, I may be a bit out of touch with my thesaurus/dictionary...
Edit: Oh wow, that took a bit to register (Surprise's family.)
I knew Lugus was large, but to be half of a rotational cycle? Preposterous.
Stop calling Sentinel cute, he is the night!
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Both are correct spellings.
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No Solar Flare, but we will see Celestia change a bit as she realises that she is no longer isolated from the world and besieged on all sides. She has help now. Ponies she can trust.
And she will slowly adjust to having family again that can help her out.
She has a major growth arc!
So the next few chapters will be a song of fire and ice? Shit...
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Wait, still funny...
I guess a lift could be considered a gift, but I'm supposing you meant 'give' there.
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well tbh this is the first time I've seen this joke referenced outside of the comedy show ( I forgot who it was), so it doesn't seem overused to me, but maybe I've just been living under a rock
i love my cuddlebug
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There so needs to be a scene change that goes from Twilight and Bucky fighting to Lyra and Thistle. And perhaps then back to the train as Bucky freezes some griffin raiders. And then somehow we need a scene with Spike leaving somewhere.
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Alternately that first scene changing could involve Sparkler and Derpy. Or some combination of those four.
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Wouldn't Bucky be more like a White Walker?
5105724 please dont murder everything i know and love
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Okay
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i'm not too familiar with other songs, but whenever someone says "fire and ice" my mind jumps to this.
it's rather funny how well that first part could be lined up with Chase cast members.
Hey kudz, you know what an understatement is? That's a pretty fukin amazing example of one xD
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Why do I find myself reading Surprise's dialogue in Pinkie Pie's voice with a hint of Spitfire?
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Ripple is sweet and innocent.
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- I don't know silly.
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I still don't get it
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Surprise's family are not solar pegasi.
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Chapter 246
This is the loveliest and kindest filly that I have ever had the fortune to see
None can be more innocent than she
5105413 Your avatar makes this the greatest thing ever
All the best stories and tales get time skips.
And all these awesome chapters are most excellent.
You have mixed tenses here, it should probably be "all pegasi are" or "every pegasus is". Also maybe a comma before class.
I really like the little chant/poem that goes with the Blink spell.
I keep thinking this when I compare Bucky's family to other pony families...
Derpy: Urgh, i´m so frustrated with this !!!! I need to kick something or...
Berry: Hi Derp....MmmmMMMMMmmmmmmfmfmfmf...
Derpy: Ah, better....okay there Berry ?
Berry: Just...need...some...air...where I was going...again...?
BTW, i though that Rising and sparkle had planned to go to the university. What changed ?
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It was first seen in chapter 28 I think.
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A war.
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You know, after reading through all these chapters, I have to say I'm not certain if I absolutely love this story or not.
Moonbow and Sentinel's interactions were absolutely adorable (The mental image of Sentinel hopping away after being pounced gives me a big dopey smile even now). And because I adore Moonbow so, the initial stages of her training were... concerning. I have much less respect for Luna, even though I know logically that it will help Moonbow survive later (The scene where Luna tells Moonbow to call her "mother" was, in my honest opinion, entirely creepy).
And this brings me to the major issue I have with this story: Everything cute and happy and silly has a moment where it must face it's opposite, and emerges tarnished from the experience. I will never be able to look at any of these characters without seeing the tragedies and suffering they've experienced. While there are instances of cute and joy, they don't seem to fill the holes left behind.
That said, it is a wonderful adventure, and I'm looking forward to following along as it reaches the end, however long it takes.
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Thanks. Really.
I wanted people to feel emotionally invested in the characters. To feel something for them. To be afraid for them. To share their triumphs and their failures. I wanted people to feel uncertainty or express doubt on if something was right or wrong. I want people to feel that occasionally, something could have turned out better or happened differently.
Moonbow will return to the story eventually, and she will be a very different character.
Did I read that correctly?!
Sentinel is going to get a nice matured Solar Pegasus in his little herd?
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What?!
Surprise has a husband and a foal of her own. They are lunar pegasi. She can relate to Sentinel.
5106106 Oh...thought he was gonna get a nice cougar. Good ol misunderstandings come out with silly humour.
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Quite honestly, the pool test is just... terrible.
Someone had a theory that it actually wouldn't kill, but even afterwards Luna referred to it as deadly, which makes me believe that it actually is.
So this means she was entirely willing to sacrifice a pony, who is part of an already endangered species, that she supposedly feels affection for - enough so to have the pony call her mother.
So either the word 'mother' has no meaning for her, or she's secretly sociopathic.
Bucky, you'd better get your foals as FAR AWAY from this crazy mare as possible. She'll kill 'em all!
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I don't see how this leads to cougar.
I am very worried...
Now I feel the need to edit... or something. First it was everybody shipping Zecora and Rising Star just because they had one scene together, and now poor Sentinel and Surprise.
Why!
5106121 Older mare, younger colt. If she's a mother, she is likely double, maybe even triple his age.
My apologies for getting confuzzled with this, I read it right, but interpreted it wrong.
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Say, I'll just say it isn't dangerous and word will spread. And the most important part of the initiation ritual will be rendered meaningless. That will completely destroy all my hard work, but hey, ponies have a right to know they are safe.
Or...
If I tell everypony it is dangerous and perpetuate the illusion it is dangerous, ponies will continue to believe it is dangerous, and it will continue to serve its function.
Being dunked in the water mindwipes the pony dunked, and leaves them in a fugue. Luna then cleans up the mess with some selective memory editing and everypony goes on about their lives, none the wiser about what took place. The bones in the pool are sort of real. Each time a pony fails, bones appear in the water to indicate yet another failure in the spot where another pony fell. Celestia kept this ritual going the entire time Luna was gone. Twilight was even there at the ritual if you notice, ready to help out with some memory scrubbing if need be.
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Sentinel is that kinda pony I suppose. He has the mojo.
5106167 Teehee
5106153 Hey, ummm....
Just a question....
DO YOU EVER DO ANYTHING BUT TYPE? I aint' complainin' but seriously, DoaMM takes two weeks for 15k words.
You take 2 days.
If you were a pony your cutiemark would be speed writing.
Seriously tho, how can you write 7k of awesome a day?
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Some days, I can clear 10k words. The 7k days I am slacking off and I feel guilty.
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Oh, so the water is more a mental death than a physical one?
Well, that's so much better.
However powerful Luna is, she cannot restore perfectly all the minute experiences and memories (most of which aren't consciously remembered) that help shape a pony (or a person) into the being they are. If even one of those experiences changes or goes missing, the end result is a pony who is measurably different from the original - even if by only a little.
If you've been taken apart and put back together like that, how can you ever know that what you're doing is something you would have done, versus something that the person/pony who put you back together pre-programmed you to do?
There is very little worse than questioning your own free will.
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All it removes the memory of trying to become a Myrmidon. See, this is why I didn't want to answer this at all. It is better left as a mystery because NOBODY will be happy with any way I answer it. I can't answer it in a way that keeps everybody happy.
Answering it now was probably a mistake and I did it against my better judgment, but it seems a lot of folk are still worried about it (Not just you) and really wanted some kind of confirmation.
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Mental manipulation is just a personal phobia of mine, apologies.
But if it is limited to just the myrmidon-related memories, it's more acceptable. Somewhat.
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There's always likely to be some assumptions made especially by those of us who continually debate over what might happen next as we religiously check for updates . Don't take it to hard if someone jumps to a conclusion making a wild guess. The best you can do is set them straight and move on.
As for the cougar thing...I didn't really get that either though I will say I hesitated a bit at the statement.
While it insinuated that the husband and foal were different it didn't strike me as anything specific to lunar ponies. More like "in their own way as a unicorn or earth pony" or just a different pony in general. There didn't seem to be anything linking to something as rare as a lunar Pegasus. I'm thinking maybe something to give a stronger link to Sentinel in the discussion like, "Oh, you're just as cute as my husband and foal" Well, obviously something not as clumsy as I put but that was just an example. And I may have missed something obvious making the point but then I'm just stating what I see at the moment
5106249 that is the same with anything and everything. you will always have someone who really dislikes or does not agree with an idea..........
and I have a feeling I do not have much room to make that statement...... oh dear.
cute little chapter overall. surprise is rather entertaining herself. and celestia has to deal with a lot of things it seems.