How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
Page generated in 0.083 seconds
Total duration
976 users online
263,282 hits today, 2,364,530 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
okay, how did you mispel pegasus in such a way and so repeatedly.? pegasususususususuus......
|No difficult penis questions to answer
Got me good :)
And since she has a foal now, she doesnt need one from Bucky. I doubt he would really insist on it.
4869955
Actually, Lyra plans to experience pregnancy later. Harper changes her profoundly. Turns out motherhood is a good outlet for neurotic energy.
4869961 I think all these question and other things are doing a good job of assaulting her neurosis as well. How wellwould she have reacted back in Ponyville to all these situations?
or was that supposed to represent bucky mispronouncing it or something?........
4869987
He's DRUNK.
He also says "earfy pony."
4869995 know he was drunk but i would imagine he would have abandoned pronouncing it after the first attempt. it happening more than once is kinda...... grating i guess is the world for it. made it seem less like him being drunk and more like a bizarrely consistent spelling error for some reason.
ROLF.... Pina is epic, the questions... lol....
4869987
Very much Bucky Mispronouncing it.
4870006
Bucky was attempting to be something of a silly pony.
Stuttering certain syllables is a common side effect of inebriation actually. Especially on objects of psychological fixations. What you see is psychology at work.
4870027 fair enough........... think it needed far more incosistency though. seems fiarly incosistent considering he is so drunk that he cannot pronounce the species name of his wife.
"Here Lies OminousBrony"
"He died laughing his ass off at a drunken pony talking about his mothers frozen cunt"
"He Regretted Nothing in Life. Except that one thing. But he took the knowledge of it to the grave."
"Sounded nothing like rattling glass"
4870044
Actually, it has more to do with the same reason some people use baby talk towards those they love when drunk.
The stuttering effect is subconscious need being manifested in the psyche. In this instance, he made a glass statue to keep him company of something that he loved dearly. A pegasus. He has a strong psychological fixation upon her.
Now, when this need manifests during inebriation, the stuttering syllables, or using baby talk, or any number of other indicators, people are trying to draw attention to the fact that they desire something or are fixated. Somebody, or in this case, somepony, crazily in love, might slip into baby talk, using a ridiculous voice and silly words to show affection, while others might lapse into stuttering to call attention to something they are fixated upon.
We already know that Bucky has OCD. His brain is highly focused on a certain pegasus. Hence, during his state if inebriation, his brain lingered on the word pegasus.
Psychology, see?
4870068
The rattling of all those spell jars is pretty ominous.
4870077
"Was more Handsome than Pretty in life"
The plight of the protagonist. Twilight will definitely be able to empathize. Destiny can be kind of a jerk.
Also, floofy is a perfectly cromulent word.
I have a new hypothesis regarding Piña's cutie mark. I'm sure you know the apocryphal story about how a falling apple helped inspire Newton's theory of gravity. Well, Piña has the power of the falling coconut. Sometimes, her questions and insights bring incredible epiphanies. Sometimes, they just cause brain trauma.
In any case, an excellent way to lessen the dread and severity of the last chapter. I just hope Bucky will be able to direct the assault against the wolves. I look forward to more.
4870071 meant the number of lettering is exactly the same as well as the spelling. him attempting to do so, unwilling to give up on the pronunciation, i can get. but he should be more inconsistent in his attempts. it being different, slightly or majorly, most of the time would better emphasize his inebreation. mostly it just looks copy and pasted.
4870111
Nope. Randomly typed. I wonder if I should copy and paste each instance into a message box and count them out.
4869954 Ctrl+C, Ctrl+V
4870146
Uh, no, see the comment just below this one.
4870110
All of my edumacation allows for some cogeet wordality.
4870111
Damn dude, you pick at the weirdest things.
I'm after going back to the beginning because I love this story and I figured I had forgotten little bits and I found something that I am now questioning a lot. In the first chapter, in your author's note you said you were writing a "romantic comedy". How in the hell did it become this?
4870179
Two instances were of the same count, out of sheer coincidence. The others have some variation.
Funny stuff happens sometimes.
4870183
It has romance.
And I base my comedy off of Greek standards.
There has been some very romantic and comedic moments you must admit.
4870124 if ya say so. still seems oddly consistent.
4870208
I say so because I checked.
See comments other than this one.
That was hilarious. Drunken Bucky is awesome.
If modern songs were a thing in Equestria, I bet Sentinel would be singing "My nose knows what you did in the dark" when he gets a bit older.
Drunk Bucky is best Bucky.
Lyra, please, i need your help too...can´t...breath....gasp....
4870325 I know right? I just about blacked out from extreme laughter.
I mean....what.....I...I don't even.....I don't poses the ability to even...
I'm gonna go defy the laws of physics right now, cause my lungs can't possibly hold the amount of air I need to laugh at this chapter without passing out.
THAT WAS ADORABLE
ADORABLE CUTENESS
ADORABILITY
*hugs all the ponies*
*hugs kudzuhaiku*
THIS IS AWESOMENESS IN ADORABILITY
Derpy feels emotional and happy :D
This chapter alone needs an extra upvote...
Loved the chapter. Would drink again.
4870751
Evapourate is correct.
Was derpy laughing or dying?
After reading again, and again, i noticed something:
Bucky was drunk, but not stupid...he saw the danger coming, unfortunally too late...
Shadow Wolves are nothing compared to a heated mare !
loved the chapter!
I am still amazed at how quickly you get these out.
Just be careful about the whole sticking to the "pure" lesbian thing.
I understand you want to have some diversity with all the different types of love Bucky is experiencing, but you have written many moments that show Bon Bon and Lyra both having amazing life changing thoughts about and because of Bucky and the situation they are in.
It just seems odd to me that after all these moments where you show that they trust Bucky with their heart and soul that they still go "Boys! Ewww"
I get that love and lust is different which I know is part of what you are trying to show here, but love is also known to break through many barriers including gender.
I guess what I am trying to say is do not stick too hard to your plan of keeping them "pure" if in the course of the story the characters change and grow.
Ponies change...and with everything they are going through change is going to happen.
It may not change their opinions to all stallions, but their opinions on Bucky...well I can see that making a shift.
“Oh he is going to as drunk as a lord,” Berry sighed.
Shouldn't it be "he is going to be as drunk as...."
Also, Lyra: "She silently swore that her womb would remain a penis free environment."
She made the deal with Bucky though right?, she and Bon Bon would have his foals in order to enter the herd.
4870910
Yes.
4871199
There will eventually be sex between Bucky, Bon Bon, and Lyra... but Bucky will never actually put his penis inside of either of them.
SPOILERS! Do not read! You have nobody but yourself to blame if you see this!
4871831 Oh I get it... I think... c:
drunk ponies are the best. nice and awkward chapter. <3
is bucky's emerald eye polished emerald or not?
pegasususususususussususss....
4873165
Uncut emerald. Raw and unshaped. Set in a bed of black fulgurite.
...that has got to be the best insult I have ever heard!
Sentinel being... cocky little colt? This... this is good!
fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/221/e/a/bonbon_oh_celestia_why_by_ilhajaot-d5ahud2.png
You know, hardness doesn't equal durable. Here's a simple you should all try at home, kids, drop a pillow (soft) & a sheet of glass (hard)
on your living room floor and see which one survives the fall.
4871831
I feel as though that might have poor implications concerning what you think of actual lesbians.