How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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This para bothers me:
The last sentence is jarring compared to the rest. I'd recommend two things:
1) possibly make last sentence be its own para
2) lose 'were bound'. To my ear, it just doesn't fit the rest of the tone/tense of the para. I mean, the situation IS already 'interesting' there's no 'were' about it. Maybe something like, "The ship was still being swarmed and things were getting interesting."
But I'll concede it could just be me.
Get it, Raptors!
Surprised Bucky didn't send along a massive anteater golem.
Storms on the desert, the are being flooded out. And a 20mm sniper is overkill,
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Nah. Overkill would be nuking them from orbit with fire and magnets.
7161906 like they just did. Let's just say, they are all about overkill.
And I just remember the shadow wolfes in the islands... Too bad this time they don't have rape bombs.
I have this bad feeling something bad is going to happen... And I don't know of my heart can take it. I actually held my breath when Ripple got injured :<
Keep up the awesome work Kudz! I love everything you write!
I'm torn between whether to say "my patience is being more and more tested by the chapter" or "nice to have you back" to this.
Song of the raptors. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MPZFn1-AeWI March of Cambreadth
Those ants are about to be exterminated!
A yes, finally a little sated blood lust!
Though, now I'm curious. Where did they come from? How did they come to be? Is their Queen Sentient?
7162848 Well both are Winter Soldiers.
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I have no idea what you mean. I'm sorry. I'm in a lot of pain and cannot brain. I has the dumb.
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Skilled ones, yes. It can be done through force of will.
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'Alicorn' is the 'real life' material that a unicorns horn is made out of.
I think he's asking if Unicorns have alicorn spread throughout their skeletons, thusly weakening their bones, lessening the amount of bone marrow they have, and making them more susceptible to blood loss.
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Why am i never alerted to replies with this story?
The Wind King got what i meant for the most part. I think i got my answer with the need for thaumaturgical fluids for spell casting (or at least as a powerful aid).