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I now feel that Pina is the filly version of Tiny Tina
Damn... massive respect to Crush.
Not... not a pony? And nearby? How... about Bucky unleashes frozen hell upon and then Sparkler runs in in rock mode? Rising Star and Lyra can burn anything they miss.
I NEED TO GO TO BED DAMMIT!
Must...resist...
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Only nine pages worth of text. You can do it.
Ok. All Bucky needs to do is get over or near that mountain and fuse some hydrogen atoms. Problem solved. Or generate enough magic to make Crush as big as the mountain and let him handle it,
Also:
Take out one of the first worked.
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And the isles become a radioactive hellhole for a few thousand years.
- Look, I'm a ghoul!
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Alright. forget nuking it. Just grow Crush into a giant and let him CRUSH THEM!
Also, I would love to see a good old fashioned Brawl between Crush and my OC Quakehoof. His name is just as revealing as Crush's and the others on the islands you mentioned.
Crush is amazing
I REFUSE TO DIE
or at that moment in time
*gargle gargle gargle*
Here, have dark humor
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The isles breed a different sort of pony.
Keep in mind, Berry Punch and Bon Bon both come from that stock.
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Hammer throwing. A prood Scots tradition.
Whoa, I actually found one.
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I would kill to see that happen.
Wow. Dinky may be physically dangerous, but Piña is socially terrifying. That's one heck of a diplomancer right there.
Yet another way ascension could tempt him: the alicorn growth spurt.
And the villain's lair is spotted. The adversary knowing what they can do is bad, but at least they know it knows. The question becomes whether it knows that they know that it knows, and they don't know that. You know?
Looking forward to more. Though I have to question Lyra insisting that they prepare somehow. Haven't they been doing that for the last twenty or thirty chapters?
4874619 Waitwaitwaitwait
Which chapter did it say bonbon, came from the isles 0_o
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Early in the story when it is mentioned that she has a familiar lilt.
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Specifically, chapter 33 where Bon Bon warns Bucky that those two mares he loved were going to rip him apart.
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*Re- reads chapter 33*
I... did not notice that
You've put loads of other little hints everywhere haven't you that will only make sense later on, or ones if we notice them
Oh dear
Thats it, going over each chapter 5 times with a fine tooth comb :3
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I like to hide stuff in the middle too, where psychology dictates that people are the most likely to forget something. When you read, your brain usually remembers the beginning and the end. I like to mess with the human mind. Because I can.
Earlier on in The Chase, there was a lot of butthurt over certain events and people cried foul because there was no foreshadowing or indicators over what happened and that the events didn't make coherent sense. But the clues were there, and people failed to notice them. Made a lot of people rage-quit the story because they lacked focus and attention.
I had quite a few angry private messages about my subversion tactics and people said The Chase was a troll-fic.
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CRUSH, SMASH!!! X3
4874831 I like you person :3
Messing with peoples minds
this is slightly evil
good
:D
and how can one rage quit a story 0_o especially because of the first few chapters :P I loved those!
*re-reads the entirety of the chase again to pick up on all these pointers*
Ahahaha, Pina has weaponized her adorableness.
Sounds like that hematite ore might have some copper mixed in with it...
a question : what kinds of magic are in the orbs? i think there's ice, fire,electric...that's all i remember.
too
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Don't forget the magical rape bomb.
4874936 color? :p
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Described as being purple and violent I think. I'd need to go back and look.
4874953 thanks!
oh,and :
“I hate to say it, but I think I am probably to exhausted to do that,” Bucky answered.
"too"
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Looking purple and violent somehow... is the description.
Too many 'To The' s!
Should read like this
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I'm thinking that, since Piña has all this magic but isn't able to do the normal Earth Pony things right now, all of that manic is going to her head.
Hey, look, only two more upvotes to get to 800 !!! What we can do to get those votes...I KNOW !!! One more chapter....NOW !
Pretty please ?
The answer is obvious: Platform shoes.
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The Inaudible Hulk!
I'm going to suggest a lich as the villain.
That or some Italian named Guido in a wife
bleaterbeater.I just made the mental connection that Bucky is kinda like a good guy version of Napoleon.
I now realize what Bucky's theme song is...
4878267 that or... god I love posting this video!
by virtue of his Cutie Mark.
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Alternatively, they can ship ponies off the islands, then blow the islands to kingdom come. Sure, they'd be radioactive, but at the same time nopony would be effected (Except whoever is controlling the wolves, assuming it's a pony. But we didn't want to save them, anyway.)
Perhaps some magically transmuted rubber cushions where in order
1. Were.
I know I should sleep. Sleep is essential. But now, it feels optional.
I want more of Crush, he sounds awesome, hehehe.
Nice job!
'than'
Comma at end of sentence should be period.