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Like I said , you and Thistle have more things in common than you think Derpy. I really enjoyed this chapter :P
I have come to understand that there is a thin line between genius and madness. I hope Bucky can differentiate between the two perspectives.
Ooooohhhh, i SO want to see this revenge !!!!!
Also: bonus point for Derpy deciding who is gonna enter the herd, despite Bucky´s agreement on the matter. Not that he have much to complain but, still, PHUN !!!!
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Derpy gets a say because she is the Alpha female. Bucky still gets to decide whom he marries. Don't get the wrong idea. Careful there.
Someone draw a mini comic of this. I can totally see sentinel acting like a proud dog/cat heading to shore.
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thanks for the update!!
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Dudes. You get the idea.
Now I have a request for everyone (not you guys):
STOP CALLING ME CRAZY!
And so begins the next 154.3-chapter long sub-arc!
Just a quick question:
How much of this story are preplanned plot points and how much of this is stuff you make up as you go?
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Oh crap, not this question again.
Here is an old screenshot of my notes on The Chase.
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Now, you tell me.
Mind you, those are just the NOTES to the story and not the story itself.
Around here I just pictured the scene from Iron Man where Tony is working on his suit so I used this theme.
Or here
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He IS planning on making some sort of a power armor. Stark had a heart problem, Bucky has an eye problem. I can see it now: a magical reactor stuck in his eye glowing green in the dark.
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Hmmm Cyborg eye, Crystal horn glowing, Black power armor. OMG im getting a bit of a Power Up boner.
or this
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A much better song for Bucky. He does come from high society after all.
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She does have Big Balls after all.
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She?
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Wife's favorite line =P
Such dirty big balls!
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I was kinda wondering if you were referring to Derpy and was seeking some kind of confirmation...
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Yes this applies, Both Derpy and Berry remind be of the best and worse of my wife. Oh and shes a Bonnie Lass.
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Oooh ye found ye a cussie lil bairn spitter!
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yeah a bit shy at first but get to know her and shes got one twisted sense of humor. Half my best friend and Half my evil nemesis, fierce defender of my children, and intellectual and philosophical equal. Keeps me grounded and pushing me to better myself. She is what makes me what I am.
So I have this story about a unicorn, a pegasus, and a changeling, context isn't really important. I just realized though, that my unicorn and pegasus fit right into your description of how the three types work. The unicorn is implied to be powerful, but is quite, quite raving mad, having two split sides, one of them full Edgar Allan Poe level of nervous wreck. The pegasus was raised similar to a unicorn but her main thing is "NOBODY messes with my ponies."
Upon realizing that, I re-realized, that you took basic traits from the show and gave them a huge amount of depth to the point that I'm pretty sure most fanfic writers/readers on this site can be like, "Hey, my character/this character I like actually kinda fits into this mindset!" Which is really neat. I think that's a good way to pull people into the story, having something they already like being able to relate to the story.
I finally figured out why I find Sentinel so cute; he's like a cat, yet he isn't an asshole. Delightful!
Also, Berry pregnant Berry confirmed, I think. I guess earth ponies just know.
Eagerly looking forward to more. I'm always a sucker for mad science.
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“Piña, please don’t cry. Sometimes bad things happen to good ponies,” Barry said, trying to sooth her sister.
i'm at least 75% sure there is nobody named barry in this fic, you might want to fix your spelling there
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How did this happen? I didn't intentionally add this to the chapter. What words? Context?
Fantastic chapter!
A plan is being set in motion and we have had another clue on the Derpy-Thistle relationship. Plus Sentinel had some moments for himself.
I can't wait to see how things continue!
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I believe this is the line that gave it away:
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Right here!
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Actually, you confirmed it back in Chapter 59.
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Meh, that was meant more in a sense of "I want to marry you and have your babies!" sort of way.
But yeah, Berry is pregnant, but we already knew that.
From 59, so people(like me) don't feel compelled to go searching for it.
Huh... I am intrigued by Bucky's plan. Once this armour is (if) proven, then I assume weapons will follow, meaning an effective way to fight the wolves.
I get the feeling that Derpy is allowing Thistle to join the herd, but only once older. If she says yes, and tells Keg Smasher this, I do not see any reason they can all return to the mainland, given what Bucky is doing for them.
Oooooh dis gonna be good.
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But Berry was going to be the alicorn in this story.
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4551141 That picture....
It made me laugh far more than it should have. I blame the fact i'm having a fruit flavored alcoholic drink right now.
". She moved the mass of water near Bucky, where it loomed over his water“You are utterly "
Over his barrel?
"mad. You BELONG the pickle barrel with the rest of us,” she insisted.",
In the pickle barrel? But would this refer to the isle, or the clan?
Odd sentence structure.
All of your love are belong to us!
I don't know why, but I want Sentinel and Thistle to be together.
Well, fuck. I take a two-month break from reading this story, and what happens?
I'm 55 chapters behind.
Goddammit...
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Damn. I was gonna call a plot twist where Berry can't have foals for some reason, being hinted by the fact that despite her previous... experiences she hasn't been pregnant yet.
Welp, time to continue reading another day with it being 2:20am on a Monday night.
If I was right don't tell me, but if I was wrong please do.
Thistle was in mere-pony form
Bucky was thoroughly drenched now,
Derpy resumed her swimming, keeping an eye on her foals
1. Mer-pony?
2. Was supposed to be a fullstop.
3. Just an extra spacing here. Somehow.
And the war on the Wolfs begin
Oooooohoho, please tell me I ain't the only one who got some tingles
An awesome job well done, I love it! :D
Heeheehee.
4835209 I ship it... I totally ship it
6540199 oh the tingles are real right now. My badassedry senses are tingling mighty fierce. Something big is coming, and it's going to be epic. Of course, you're ahead of me, so you already know this.
My irony sense is tingling.
PURGE THEM WITH HOLY SUNLIGHT!
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Indeed brother, FOR THE EMPRAH!