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I'm gonna post this before reading.
Too?
Immediate thought at the first part of the chapter was Boondocks and chair throwing.
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Normal life span.
Missing word?
Besides the 'were' removal, I'd recommend a semicolon after 'four hours ago'.
Typo?
Poor RD, she's working so hard to be prepared when the time comes. Wonder when Twilight is going to start her training on being a mother to a pony as well as how well she'll fare. (That actually make me wonder if raising Spike was anything like it will be to raise a pony.)
"The foals were should have been in bed almost four hours ago"
Got a 'were' where it doesn't belong.
Must be a were-typo.
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He had a gaping hole where his right eye should be. The right side of his face is missing feathers. His beak is axe like. Jagged on the right side. His description was in the story.
From 428
So tan in all of the cat parts, black and silver in all of the feathery bits. Black beaked. He has a normal griffon eye on the left side. No purple haze. He's thin and scrawny.
pile of ponies in near the door [remove]?
Grabbed by the tater sack and used as a flail. What a horrible end.
"not poop" poor Rainbow
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He wasn't grabbed by his tater sack. Sparky would never do that. She grabbed him by his forelegs and swung him around. Somepony got a facefull of balls.
On one hand, I feel sorry for Rainbow Dash. She's getting a crash course in parenting, and all the dirty details it actually involves. On the other hand, I think it'll be good for her. She's discovering everything now and won't be surprised when it's actually her or Twilight's foals.
I also think this is going to drive her protective instincts through the roof.
So tell me, have you ever been so angry that you beat a motherfucker, with another motherfucker?
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Alright thanks for clearing that up
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sorry I like my idea better.
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........ you know when i said it feels like rainbow dash is out of character..... pee, i could understand. farts is something that she would probably find funny.
why is rainbow dash channeling other characters? first it was twilight, now its rarity.
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Farts are only funny if you are not getting soaked in fart juice.
He reaction was one born of nervousness. She was just peed on. She was worried about little foal plotholes letting out more than a fart. And one did.
She's Cyan O.O Never forget...
XD JK
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naw, man it's cool, it's your story I just like the mind picture of that
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Actually, she is cerulean blue. Light, more grey.
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Cyan is actually greenish blue...
Cyan (/ˈsaɪ.ən/[4] or /ˈsaɪ.æn/[5]) is a greenish-blue color[6] and is one of the three primary colors of the subtractive CMYK color model.[7] On the color wheels of the RGB (additive) and CMYK (subtractive) color models, it is located midway between blue and green, making it the complementary color of red.
I both like that guy, and feels sorry for him....Not sure if it's because his taters were mashed, or because he acknowledged his own stupidity....
The theme of this chapter: doing bodily functions in the tub is a challenge to the senses....
I'll shut up now.
I feel kinda lucky my sister never pooped while I gave her a bath.
Property damage... How do you not do it, Sparky?
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Oh she did it. She just used her magic to repair stuff.
5440420 You know, I was going to post a picture of said meme in reply but it just doesn't want to work for me
Whoa, what was with the three replies I just got that were deleted?
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Wasn't me mang...
5440509 The "Preview" button is your friend.
5440513 Oh, I know it wasn't you. If it was someone trying to agitate me, you'd simply allow me to sexually harass them. It was error on Acarcion's end as he tried to link a pic to me.
In the bit near the end about the booger bulb, while I imagine Rainbow would find both less than enjoyable, I think she would rather "jam it in" instead of "jam in it".
5440515 Well I could preview and it said it was there then when I actually posted it pulled a full "nope" on me :/
5440526 Damn, bro. But yeah, that macro series was what inspired my comment.
5440529 OK, good :p
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Magic solves everything.
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Is this the new "FIRST!" ?
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The pit bull on Viagra defense system.
5440553 Actually, viagra does not cause arousal, nor does it enhance arousal. It dilates blood vessels and simply makes it easier to get an erection. I know that because back in high school I used to pop viagra or a similar drug before a workout.
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Wait, even if he doesn't have an eye he should still have eyelids, I did a bit of research on that a while back...
Or maybe I'm wrong, who knows.
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Half of his face was torn off. Eyelids went with face.
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Oki.
Hm... If he was healed in a "shape shifted" body, would that trigger ascension?
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Did you read that chapter?
Poop?
Spakrler took one mother fucker and beat the other motherfuckers with him.
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Just a thought that I have been gnawing on for far too long but does Peekaboo's talent have to do with a Pegasus version of the Aversion spell? The more I sit down and think about it the more it seems that there is little other that it could be. This doesn't seem relevant given the feel good nature of the chapter but I can't help but wonder if she might have been able to disappear in the tub and give them a right good scare.
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Something like that. Peekaboo can hide in plain sight if she closes her eyes and concentrates.
There is only one being that can see her cutie mark, which disappears if you look at it directly.
Otherwise, you catch tantalising glimpses, but can never really see what it is.