How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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I wonder what the general response to Bucky's stairs will be.
*evil laughter*
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Well, some student is bound to be bad and sent to the headmaster's office sooner or later...
Exterminate! Exterminate! All typos will be Exterminated!
Very nice touch with the name.
Finally. No one can tell Cheerilee what can and cannot be taught like we saw back during one of the chapters we saw everyone in her class. Well, no one except Bucky. But I am sure he would approve of the truth, the actual facts being taught rather than what others deem is the "Truth" and what are the "Facts". Such as was explained by the one lesson they had saying there was no Slavery at all, and yet Sentinel pointed out that was false and the fact such lies were being taught instead of the truth seemed to be part of what was taking its emotional toll on Cheerilee.
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It is difficult for a good earth pony to lie.
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Yeah. And I am sure those controlling what was and wasn't taught in school either weren't good Earth Ponies or just plain weren't Earth Ponies. My money is on the latter.
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There are bad earth ponies... bad earth ponies make some of the best liars.
I couldn't find any typos.
Yeah, that might want to be a she or a Cheerliee. Not sure. :P
I believe this should be "charge"
Can't wait, I'm all for action oriented arcs, but the prospect of a school related arc really excites me.
I'm so giddy right now, Kudzuhaiku. My gait is up and a big smile on my face as I trot alongside my sweet Petunia to Pinkie's place. Oh how I'll spoil her and when she smiles, others will smile too.
So, it's suppose to be no right? Should I just keep a tab open cause there's probably more in there. :/
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A central theme for the coming million or so words of this story.
Charge*
So yeah, I could of kept the posts open and made this all one big post, but I'm new to this, lay off me, eh?
5441778 Dammit, I didn't refresh fast enough.
I'm glad to see that Cheerilee is finally getting a chance to teach without the bureaucracy hanging over her head. She'll be able to teach and handle things as she's long wanted to do rather than how she was forced to by others. I expect a more honest course material and history classes, as well as better cultural understanding between both the tribes and the different races (ie acceptance of pegasi swatting).
Even if it's a bigger workload, I'm betting the overall stress will be less for Cheerilee once she gets used to it.
5441802 I'm really good at spotting minor details of other people's work. Would it be annoying if I helped edit from now on? It's kind of easier than I thought it'd be. Plus, there's a lot others missed that I've left unspoken about and it usually ends with people just going on to the next chapter instead of looking harder. :P
The fact that the words "Yay School!" are in my head on any level terrifies me.
i wonder when the Chase will beging, this is just the prologue no? *sarcasm*
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Feel free... the errorists cannot win!
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I felt a million word prologue was only barely adequate to set the tone of the story.
5441838 a proper prologue should have been 2.5M words, (this fic punchs FOE word count into the dirt) but what else can we do, we will do with a mediocre prologue
Such reactionary thinking. You have actually put somepony in charge of a school who actually knows how to teach. The good ole stallion network will go into cardiac arrest. The “if it looks good on paper it must be good” faction will flutter themselves into an early molt.
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A lot of plots were soiled this day.
Very interesting chapter, but I have a major question: Why is this suddenly M rated instead of T like before?
5442022 Kudz was informed by a Moderator that he couldn't have chapters that are just linked to the porny chapters. So he had to find a new solution. This is the out come. Live in fear, bichas.
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Because this way, the stuff that was at least (partially) in the "lost chapters" can be part of the main story.
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I didn't change this. Currently asking the mods what the deal is.
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Odds are, if you've still got links anywhere to the old lost chapters, they're treating it as one big story- and mature-tagged it for you. Got all the old ones edited out?
5441838 Which makes me wonder...
With how much time has passed to get to this point in real time...how long are you thinking the story will take for you to tell to your intended completion?
You mentioned what you intend for length previously, but it doesn't give me a sense of the time you need. I'm just curious.
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Chapter 433 was the one that got the story changed. The scene with the foals in the bathtub. That got the story changed.
5442155 Really ? Foal bathing ? We have partial desmembrament, we have profusal bleeding, we have foal rape, we ahev all sorts of sexual actions but it was a foal bathing that triggered a mature tag on this fic !?
OK, world...stop for a while. I need to step out. Thanks !
The pressure of coming up with foal OCs on the spot...
I'M NOT GOOD UNDER PRESSURE COOKERS!
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Some people have a weird sense of what makes a fic (un)worthy of a given tag.
If whoever bumped The Chase for bathtub "floatsies" really did it for that, I'm surprised they did not act earlier on the "peanut butter" diapers and filly-bits scrubbing a few chapters earlier.
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Wasn't just the floaties... it was scrubbing a colt.
5442204 I know right? Nothing was described either. He used the word sheath and that was it.
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The absurdity of that is beyond anything I could have ever imagined. Does this have any chance of changing upcoming content?
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Accidents happen!
Shouldn't Sunest saying "she demon" be hyphenated to "she-demon"?
Need more. Need more Chase. Wanna see more stuff with the school.
Also, my computer can no longer load the main page of the Chase it is so big, has so many comments, ect, that it takes over a minute to load now. Is easier to go to my favorites or my feed and get around through there.
5442765 I had to give up on the main page a long time ago friend. I tried (stupidly) to access it this morning, went to make breakfast and came back and it was just finishing loading up for me
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It is funny how filly and colt hygiene/scrubbing were fine when Twilight was telling RD about diaper disasters a few chapters earlier but putting the theory into practice for normal bathing suddenly isn't.
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Short version, someone freaked out when they saw the word "unsheathe" and reported it to the mods.
Finally... Here...
Oh god, I dont remember reading something so fucking large since diaries of a madman. Good work, really enjoyable. Thanks
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i have that problem since chapter 370-80, i usually come here from earlier chapter (i use 164 personally), you got a pretty good pc if its only take a minute, its 10 or more minute for me (also my whole pc freeze and cant do anything either)
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Welcome in the front lines soldier!!! Your fun is just about to start
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I don't understand this problem. My chromebook instantly loads this page. The mane direct page.
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Maybe fimfiction was optimized to chromebooks? or its open the main page and the comments separately and thats make it faster on chromebook?
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I dunno... my chromebook is a pretty zippy little machine. I keep getting surprised by it. Especially when I read that folk have a problem loading fimfiction in general.