How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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I feel like typos killed your parents. Now you're like Batman, never resting, always hunting those scum down.
This is a bucket.
...Dear god...
I just had to do it.
Now... Who's going to sleep beside who? Awkward moments, yes?
It's already quite obvious what HAS to happen. A Repeat of Keg Smashers raid on the Previous Laird basically killing all of the Nobility, but on the griffons. If that only creates a power struggle in the lower classes, then proceed to the way the Pegasi were reformed by Commander Hurricane: Kill off all of the adults and leave the young alive and the eggs as well and reeducate them. Only way I can see peace happening.
gryphons kinda insanitary, aren't they?
........... she kinda came to the conclusion about how to help her friends in a rather non supernatural way.
ever since that episde everyone has the view of cutie marks as related to some mystical force guiding them. takign destiny literally....... if they were just destined then they would just appear, not be found.
5178903
Griffons do not lay eggs.
5178904
Oh Goddess no, not tonight. I'm too tired for this...
Something scary is obviously going to happen from within the group because pinkie has had her punchy knee for a while. Or maybe Bucky is just naturally scary due to his tint.
Also while I am totally engaged in the griffin part of it I would totally love a `mean while in ponyville` chapter so we can check up on the other characters.
5178891
- That was a good one.
- What?
- Oh you just wait Rares.
- Applejack! It is like the night of our first sleepover! Ugh! Why! I can taste it!
- Will you two shut up?
- Fluttershy's silent but deadly creepers...
- So sorry...
- Twi', I'm sorry, but that last fart had lumps in it!
- What?
5178911 rolls eyes. nevermind.
not saying it against this story, as there is a narrative reason for the destiny thing. in fact it seems to indicate that destiny shouldn't be in anyone's control.
what i mean is that so many people took it to mean literal destiny over a metaphor. nature of the cutie marks seem to imply metaphor over actual destiny considering they are not born with them but find them.
5178945
In Soviet Stalliongrad, cutie mark finds YOU.
5178910
Then keep any of the females opposed to change that are pregnant alive until their... whatever the griffon babies are called are born and then add them to the corpse pile.
5178961
Cubs, then fledglings.
Muninn reminds me of 19th century London. Sooty skies, dirty water, and no indoor plumbing! All we need now is a crazy pigeon lady.
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Hmm.
Where does Raritys fainting couch come from?
it's clearly not nearby - 60 seconds in.
5179062
Hmm indeed. Link does nothing.
5179066 You're too fast! (fixed now)
5179062
Type three conjuration. The manifestation of physical objects.
5178914 also it would be a great little vreak to lighten the mood abit
So why don't they teleport back to their ship, and teleport back to their room in the morning?
that is all
5179117
Yeah, let's have EVERYPONY projectile vomiting!
Teleportation causes extreme nausea and vomiting unless you are desensitised to it. Plus the mass of calories burned to move that much mass would be considerable.
5179140
Even with the load spread out between 2 unicorns and 1 alicorn?
Also, Rarity, RD, and AJ have teleported with Twilight before without any ill effects.
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Seriously? These are becoming intentional, aren't they? You're intentionally throwing them in so your readers will actually read the story.
5179152
In story, Dash yes.
Not very trustworthy. Not something the Princess of Friendship would do.
I wonder if the gryphons realize that a couple of the ponies are carnivores. I foresee some chicken a la king in the future.
5179062
The title of that video should be "Rarity Being Rarity".
I just realized today that I didn't give this story a thumbs up. Then when I tried I remembered why. My phone hates almost all stories on fimfic and tells me that is the incorrect rating code, unless I give the story a thumbs down. So yeah this was an enjoyable update thanks.
5178877
He's doing a dang good job of it.
293 chapters in and he's given no quarter.
5179117
Because that's not how you diplomacy. You are guests, you take the hospitality of your hosts. Your hosts see to your needs. That's why 'needs' became a diplomatic weapon of sorts, like we're seeing here. You can tell how much the host wants you to be comfortable and how much they respect you from your furnishings and accommodations. TOO ritzy, and they A: Want you to be blinded by comfort and let your guard down, or B: REALLY want you to like them, perhaps more than they should. Then there's this, ranging from subtle to (like this) obvious where they show you a horrible time to either A: Test your mettle as diplomats, or B: Wear you down so you can't participate well in the upcoming mindgames that they'll be well-rested for.
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I am discovered. Somebody understands the game I'm plotting.
5179076 could also be that she teleported the object from somewhere in her house.
5179514
Yes, I just said that. Manifested items have to come from somewhere.
5179541 shrugs.
'More' is not needed, here.
So, this arc's off to a good start! Also, I second the request for a 'Meanwhile, in Ponyville' chapter or two. Not immediately, of course, but at some point would be nice.
Personally I'd fuse the beds and make a pony pile
5179076 waitwaitwait.....Rarity is a type 3 in chase verse !? I always though that she was a highly specialized and functional type 2 !
Edit: also, lovely development on booth Rarity and Dash. Just to make clear (remember, im slow !): Only Bon Bon, Lyra, Yew and the folas are aboard The Mare, right ? This means we have two males sleeping with the girls, Lugus and...(dramatic pause)...Sentry !
For some reason i highly doubt that Lugus and Sentry will share a bed. Oh my, who, and i repeat, who will be the lucky guy to sleep with Twilight ?
- Sentry and Lugus, you booth out there on guard duty all night !!! Don´t even think ´bout sleeping with us !!!!!
...aaaaand there goes the mood. Way to go, Rarity ! Way to go !
5180343 I´m not a native english speak, so apologies in advance.
You´re the second person to adress this. But IF you consider that Starjammer´s research was dark in nature, to say that there are even "darker" experiments wouldn´t be necessary to point that those are really bad ones ? Like, mind rape and twisting, not only slightly dark ? Thus, the "more" is justified ?
5180343
But real life conversation goes like this. People toss in words for more dramatic effect or to drive home point.
5180492
That's fair. But it's a grammatical error, so I pointed it out. ^^ You don't have to cut it, obviously, but to my mind, the sentence would flow better if you did.
5180482
Yeah, that would normally be the case, except that 'darker' already means 'more dark', so it's what's known as a redundancy. It's similar to the expression "ain't never", which is what's called a double negative. It makes sense, but is technically incorrect.
...I really hope I don't come across as a jackass with this comment.
5180574 Not at all, actually, thanks for the explanation ! I´m trying to improve my english skills.
5180831 New to the story, huh ? Don´t worry, things will get worse...then even worse...then REALLY bad and, then, better...grab popcorn and a soda, this story is a emotional roaller coaster.
5180601
No problem at all! I'm always happy to help someone learn a bit more about syntax and such.
I'm actually tempted to offer to try being a proofreader/editor for several authors on this site, as I've found people who have fascinating concepts, but truly atrocious grammar and spelling, and I know that if their horsewords just flowed a little better, they'd go a long way.
Awful, just awful! Not single horrible unbearable whine from Rarity, but I suppose she know better in this situation.
Also: Prince Buckminster Bitters should construct a nice dungeon for Pinky Pie to have fun in.
Rarity Belle: fashionista. Drama queen. Cat lady. Sorceress supreme (now with pizzazz!)
5178877
why am I laughing my ass of right now?
So Rarity is a Killer Queen now?
5178877
Oh wow, i'm reading a story that The Great Rust has read..... I feel tingly inside.
5208787
I think its the face
yep definitely the face
Dark.
this will probably end poorly. it will be glorious.