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Mad ramblings. Never good. Always bad. Hint of a symptom, or perhaps the cause?
And there shall be a lost chapter over Lyra and BonBon. Actually, I didn't see any errors, and it makes sense. What Bucky was saying about Sombra. If Sombra had trusted his wives enough to help him perhaps he wouldn't be in the situation he was in. It makes me wonder what kind of Harem he had. Was it all unicorns, or perhaps there was a Pegasus and Earth Pony in there.
Mayhap there was a Lunar Pegasus. That would be extremely interesting.
All in all... Great job.
This needs to be removed.
The only booboo here was how hard I laughed at how many times he said the word screw
Hmm... mad ramblings are a side effect of life. xD
4805717 i ramble all the time and im somewhat sane, smart people tend to do that when they have you many thoughts that they cant sort out so they just talk and talk
4805871 true dat.
lol, every time Bucky said screw I had to laugh ...
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Somehow, the lunar pegasus one doesn't seem quite as catchy...
In any case, a very sweet chapter, interlaced with vulgarity to hilarious effect. It really shows just how much Bucky and Derpy have grown since they met one another. I look forward to more.
4804699 Shall we call them promiscuous and leave it at that?
In the name of all that looks to the light, do you ever sleep? Every time I turn around there is a new chapter. I can't even begin to understand how you do it. All I know is just keep it up. This story only gets better.
4807516 SLEEP IS FOR THE WEAK! ...But a nap every now and then is nice.
stroked his face tenderly?
Years of controlling himself has finally caught up, and Sentinel is being the foal that he should be.
Buckyyyyyyy... To much screwing. Not enough sweet sweet lovin'. Sweet sweet mare lovin'. ; )
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Oh, you have no idea how deep Celestia's manipulation runs.
(Major spoiler alert! Beware when reading the following!)
4808634 Of course we know dude.
She is the entire planet that they reside on.
She is nature. She is the universe. She is everything....
Okay, perhaps not to that great of an extreme, but a couple of us have seen this chess master persona of Celestia before.
I suspect that she has nearly everything interwoven into each other, perhaps to the point where she has maybe orchestrated the entire meeting between Bucky and his harem. Or perhaps, engineered the downfall of the nobility while feigning ignorance. That's what my paranoid housekeeper that's in my head is telling me anyway. Could be some diabolical little foal that is doing it. Hey, I've seen it happen mate! Always beware the tiny ones.
On another note, about bloody time the conclusion of unity was reached back in the previous chapter.
I was beginning to think that those typical stereotypes were going to rule the whole story with only a few exceptions.
I am pleased to announce that I have been proven more or less wrong in this line of thinking.
Oh, and uh, my apologies for that comment that I made earlier on in the story.
Though I am somewhat anxious to see both a pegasus and earth pony character elevated to a level of equal or near equal importance to that of Bucky.
It might be me perceiving the whole thing in a light that isn't what you intended, but it would seem that in terms of being capable of world changing abilities, it would appear that unicorns rate the highest out of the three pony subspecies able to introduce major changes that alter the dynamics of society. Again, this is from my point of view that is based on what I have seen thus far. For all I know, you might possibly have something planned for characters such as Pina and Derpy Hooves to equalize things a little. And yes, I do know that in this universe, earth ponies are practically the only ones that serve as the fundamental foundation and base that pony society is supported by in terms of agriculture and to a lesser extent their ability to "harmonize" the sapient beings around them. Pegasi serve as a form of both warrior caste and weather management. So it is probably me being very picky at this point in those details. Otherwise the story is more or less smooth sailing thus far. (And at an impressive update speed as well!)
Still, it would be nice to see something big ushered in by the unexpected like Pina in a direct form.
(Though her indirect influences along with those of her sister Berry Punch cannot be underestimated in terms of their ability to state the obvious and perhaps being even book savvy with little Pina more than her peers.)
Like I said, it is me probably being picky on certain details at this point. Though I am hopeful to see some rage inducing moment that could trigger either Berry Punch or even little Pina to go on a Roaring Rampage of Revenge.
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Or perhaps a more subtle but deadlier form of tranquil fury. We already have seen both Berry Punch and Derpy Hooves go ballistic (Or will be with Derpy Hooves at some point.) when their loved ones are in danger. But I suspect that their cold, calculating side of slaughter is even more terrifying to behold if that is even possible.
Though that is probably just me rambling hopefuls.
On an unrelated note, have some Berry good Punch!
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Hehe... I couldn't help it. I just had to post that pun.
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'nuff said
Make screw not war. That is all.
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Last sentence: "Had a good screw?"
You wrote that in present but it's supposed to be past, because it's a "event in the past that is finish in the present". Or so my English teacher told me :D
Can we get a lyra and bon bon lost chapter please? It would be much appreciated. :3
Sentinel is a pony, he has equine socials built into him, add sentience and you got this outcome.
I've noticed you use "you and I," "she and I," etc. all the time instead of things like "me and you." The problem is, it isn't always correct to forgo the latter. If you wanna make sure you're doing it right, just see how it sounds without "you".
Also, Lyra and Bon BOn deserve a lost chapter. ;)
5092639 You're right. There's a delicate balance between correct and the way people actually talk.
Oh that last sentence.
8'D
What a lovely partner to have, hehehe.
Nice job dude, nice job!
Political correctness out the window Bucky...GOOD!
"Stop saying 'musk'" "Stop eating my food!"