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Spoilers!
I plan to showcase the herd dynamic at work when raising foals.
Berry pleasing indeed ^^
I like the new picture!
Ain't nothing wrong with what you did, Bucky. We all worship the sunbutt in our own way.
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And the Royal Canterlot Belch? Freaking Awesome.
Woot! Things are coming along nicely. I think the pace is actually really good. While I would love to have more happen in a chapter, the word count would need to be higher for the pacing to be good. And you update this like your sole purpose in life is to write fanfiction. Thank you, because this really has become one of my favorite stories on this site.
It took me a paragraph to realize that this was a belching competition.
The alternative..........
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Only Luna possesses that mutation that allows the Canterlot Fart.
She can toot her own horn and announce her own entrance.
Just watch out when entering that entrance.
No, this does not please me. This does not please me at all....
Dang it I can't keep a straight face!
And, like most people, I cannot picture the Royal Canterlot Belch without picturing "Fus Ro Dah"
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So, is this the first time that Bucky has been put of bed?
I'm a also curious, how are Bucky's actions going to change how he seen by everyone else? I assume that everyone was allowed to remember that Bucky had done something protective, even of the exact details have been purged.
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Ponies will know that he was just trying to keep Dinky safe from all the "hugging."
Nopony was seriously hurt thanks to Bucky's intense levels of control. OCD and magic go well together. Except when it doesn't.
Sidenote:
Quickest fix would be to replace there with that. Also replace a where with were
This is the longer fix, but breaks it into two sentences, which can be a plus.
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Fixed!
Hahaha Bucky's belch was the stuff of legends. I wonder what a full on alicorn belch would sound like. I sure hope Berry's challenge doesn't trigger any actual violence against her or her newly formed herd. And if somepony decides to try to seize her or Derpy's children, I hope it blows up spectacularly in that somepony's face. Possibly in the form of the Ponyville pegasus flock! Just don't let it get that bad!!
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Ever seen Hitchcock's "The Birds"?
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Haha yes I have. I feel reassured.
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Such lovely, lovely images.
I read this, and I couldn't help but imagine the area in question radiating its own light, like the suitcase in Pulp Fiction.
Also, Bucky may be the most impressive belcher I've seen since Wakko Warner. Well done, sir! Truly, the Thu'um is a mighty and formidable power.
Now try to do the national anthem.
Looking forward to more, especially when Berry throws down the gauntlet. (Horseshoe?)
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The neighbors hearing orgasmic moans...
The neighbors in Canterlot that is.
Also...
Bucky's jump upwards in type.
I had scenes planned out where he struggles to contain the new level of magic. Scenes very similar to the season finale where Twilight struggles with being the Uber-corn.
I don't know how to feel about it now, I feel like I had my thunder stolen.
Also, Tirek was to be the main villain in my story The Wager.
Which might be scrapped now, I don't know. Meh.
The Royal Canterlot Belch is indeed a glorious thing to behold . This kind of thing is the reason I can't stop reading this work of art, concepts that I never would have thought of given thousands of lifetimes just because of how silly yet realistically possible it is, makes me tear up a bit .
Atomic belch lol Love this chapter, but i will have to take brain bleach to remove the image of Celestia's plot out of my mind or attend therapy...
Myabe Bon Bon can help
hahahahaha...................sooooo...um....ya so it was funny.
Thanks for the laugh, and the quick updating.
This chapter made me laugh my ass off. Awesome.
Did...did Bucky literally scare the shit out of those pegasi?
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Yes!
And Discord crapped actual bricks in an earlier chapter.
Bucky caused a shit storm over Ponyville.
Wait for the next chapter, I can not.
Oh... my... f*cking... GOD!!! You unmitigated SOB!
... you owe me one new lung, two new sides, and a gallon of tears because I have been laughing nonstop for the past 10 minutes because of the "Royal Canterlot Belch".
More... I demand more! *A wild seizure appears*
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4375425 double that order
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Twilight WAS. Past tense.
Element of Magic, potentially type six or unclassifiable.
....................... that is disgusting......... UGH!
Oh god I finally caught up and
ROYAL CANTERLOT BELCH *dead*
Berry should have been there.
Ok, first of all? I'm sorry for not commenting earlier, but this story hooked my up so badly, i simply had no time and HAD to read it all. Second of all: you hit the bullseye, i love the concept and while first chapters are a little clunky as far as narration goes, it's clear to see progress with each, new one. You deserve the best cake in the world for it and i'd bake you one if i knew it would survive the journey.
Man.. You killed me with the "Royal Canterlot Belch" hahahahahahhahahha
Given all the fart and butt jokes lately...I REALLY hope this doesn't mean what I think it might...
Why is the royal canterlot belch so FUNNY!
I get it now! The Royal Canterlot Voice is the pony version of a Fus ro dah!
4520507 FUS ROH BUUUUUUURP
SWEET CELESTIA'S TEATS! THAT was too much I laughed for about 5 minutes straight after reading "The Royal Canterlot Belch"...just the way it was described flowed so hilariously beautiful.
so good...................
Past-> passed.
This may be my favourite chapter.
Then again, about twenty might be. :-)
I i'm really loving this story... Each chapter has this really shinny gem in it and it always makes me laugh!
I'm a little worried about Berry though....
I hope everything works out.
I'll have to read more of this fantastic story tomorrow! For now i'm been fighting sleep while reading this amazingly addicting story! Welp, G'night!
Hmm..."The Belch Herd 'Round the World".
Yeah, I misspelled that on purpose.
luna must do this in season five!
I laughed so hard at this chapter that I started crying. Then it started to hurt, but I kept laughing anyways. Then I fell out of my chair and hurt myself while still laughing. This went on for about fifteen minutes. I almost expired.
it pleases me
I love all these puns and play with words XD I was hooked on the first chapter but now I am definitely hardwired to this story now :D
Bucky has transcended the limits of a normal unicorn to become a SUPER UNICORN
sorry couldn't help myself
what if celestia heard it too ... and joined in