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I am now convinced you're watching me. You always update whenever I'm about to do something.
Missing quotation mark.
Get by
Drop the d from 'practiced'
like that," Diamond
Oh fuck yes Rumble!! So, Steeplechaser has filled the void that Diamond and Silver Spoon vacated? Obviously he didn't learn from what happened to them, so he had to learn another way.
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**Turns off camera**
I don't know what you mean.
always keeping calm ey button mash...... er i mean sentinel (seriously they have the same coloration!)
sooooo, none of the foals there decided to pipe up and say that the brat mentally harassing a bunch of ponies? hell just tell his dad that he had leaked that diamond tiara was seeing him and he would be LIVID. a psychiatrist is bound to keep such a thing a secret, and his own son going around revealing his clients would be humiliating and damaging to him.
also i keep on confusing psychologist with psychiatrist myself.
found two of the sneaky things.
Hoisting the try of cinnamon buns [tray]
The grey blur happened to be Rumple, [ Rumble]
5296715 You've... you've seen some shit, haven't you? Aside from the sex box and the horsecock selfie, of course.
We're going to meet Sunset Shimmer!! Is this after Rainbow Rocks?
5296721 Of course he'd be livid because isn't it against the law or something (like a doctor's patient confidentiality clause) for him (the dad) to disclose that DT is his patient, so if whatever body or group that regulates psychiatrist's finds out about what his son said he's going to be in some trouble because he either told him (the son) by accident or left his notes lying around neither of which is going to be good for his career.
lol
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I actually expected Sentinel to use some cleverness, goading the bully into punching him, and then getting all the foals around to acknowledge that they saw him hit the War Chief's son.
Assault against royalty. With lots of witnesses.
I wonder if Rumble will find his way into Ripple's growing army...to help work on his aggression.
"I'm surprised they allowed you to come to school too."
Dang comeback popped into my head. That guy's father being a behavior specialist sounds like a "cobbler's children have no shoes" irony to me.
Also, Rumble's apparent situation of trying to do the right thing but in the wrong way interests me.
poor cherilee, she is under so much stress
A hint of Rumble and Apple Bloom? I like it.
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Not Apple Bloom. No.
What´s going on with Rumble. I mean, it´s pretty clear that everycolt and filly is under stress, but it seems he is taking the worse of it. Something beyond everypony is taking ?
Also, do i sense a Big Mac/Cherilee ship ? Not that you would need it, but i greatly approve this couple !
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They were married quite some time ago in The Chase.
5296869 ARGH, DAMN IT, BRAIN, DON´T MAKE ME DO THIS KIND OF THING !!!
Brain function not found, please leve you bip after the message.
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5296801 i thought it said ripple at first to be honest. seemed like a very ripple thing ta do.......
soon ripple's army will be so great even the fates will bow to her!!!
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I"m pretty sure neither Equestria Girls movie happened, Rainbow Rocks for sure didn't, so I don't think Twilight has ever met Sunset in the Chase-verse up to this point.
Steeplechase: Dumbest bully in the world.
"Hey, you do know Sentinel is the adopted son of Buckminster, the Slayer of Nations, right?"
"Huh?"
"And Spike is the son of Princess Twilight Sparkle, former student of Princess Celestia and Wielder of the Solar Laser Beam of Death, right?"
"What?"
"Did you know Sentinel tore out the throat of a minotaur for shooting his father in the head? With his teeth! And he didn't stop there! Started stomping and tearing until there was nothing but bits of minotaur everywhere!"
"Um..."
"And don't get me started on Derpy, who loves her son and Lyra, who loves her son and makes wicked cool hurricanes... Yeah...you keep bucking yourself, Steeps... Pretty soon you won't even see the top of the hole you've dug yourself."
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Okay that makes a lot of sense, but where are the elements of harmony?
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You know that ponies don't know about this, right? Bucky is going to be formally blamed for this.
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Actually, Sunset and Twilight are close friends.
Twilight has been through the mirror on several occasions.
5296936 so rainbow rocks happened in this sotry? cause it is what kinda leads to the whole functional portal thing. and them becoming good friends thing talking through the journal that LETS that whole thing happen.
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More or less, but Twilight has been taking a few trips through the mirror. Other things have been happening as well.
Wouldn't you just love to know what those things are...
At first I misread Rumble as Ripple. The grey streak description didn't help either. So the entire time the colts were fighting I was just sitting there confused. "Shouldn't the bully be dead already?" "Kudz keeps calling her a he." "How is the family not reacting to this?!" *Reads back to the name* "O-Ooooooh.... right." *Facepalms*
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I assume that this sentence hit a little too close to home for Rumble which caused him to snap.
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You would be correct.
Rumble had to spend years acting like Thunderlane's younger brother.
5296926 Yes, I remember. I'm not trying to be literal, you goof.
Given some of the responses in the comments in the past from other readers, I can understand that. Keep in mind most of my responses when they are silly are meant to be silly. I'm enjoying your story and having fun playing out some scenes that pop in my head, even if they're not going to happen.
I await your next chapter, kind sir!
Well, seems to me that Steeplechase has a decision to make. Keep messing with them, or keep going to the hospital.
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The kid's mouthing off for the same reason Diamond Tiara did. The colt's father is influential and of a respectable station. Because the law would protect him from being physically accosted. You'd have to have some SERIOUS needling skills and know -exactly- where and how to hit him verbally that would overcome both his one defense, and the fact that Sentinel is much larger than he is and a small hill of muscle. At which point honestly it's hard to tell who the victim is in that situation, if you can verbally override someone's survival instincts you have the power to make them suicidal, which has just gone too far and made you the bad guy.
Looks like nothing at school's changed, though. Rumble did good, he's the one in trouble. Steep did bad, he's being protected. Wasn't an unfair fight, so as far as I'm concerned Rumble didn't do wrong.
5296961 specially if they have importance ot the plot here........
if I could predict one of the first things sunset might say.
"Why didn't you just ask twilight to talk to me instead of sending your deranged spitznas after me? And I thought pinkie was crazy," Sunset deadpanned.
5296981 Yike's that foal (Steeplechase I believe) he kicked the meadow muffins out of should consider himself lucky that Cheerilee showed up when she did other he'd have been Steeplepaste (heh heh Steeplepaste). Also doesn't it violate doctor-patient confidentiality if Steeplechase know's that Diamond Tiara is seeing a psychiatrist who just so happens to be his father?
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Psychiatrists can't be held responsible for the actions of their children or even other clients who go off and blab that so and so is visiting the headshrinker.
Breach of confidentiality is more about what the psychiatrist or psychologist does.
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Yeah that kind of statement always struck me as being inherently stupid. If you believe something is a monster (that is a creature that is by its nature some kind of dangerous/violent and probably, though not always, unable to be controlled), then trying to provoke it just shows a complete lack of forethought and probably survival instinct.
...Rant Time!
... ... okay, so an hour and a half later, the rant i was working on got to be too long for a comment post even for my standards, so i'm just going to work on it in my spare time. Maybe later i'll make a blog post of my probably exhaustive commentary on the irrationality of how characters often "poke the caged beast with a stick" and its variations that i see so often pop up in stories. Message me if you're interested in my thoughts and i'll send a copy over when i'm done.
5297046 But how did Steepechase know that Diamond Tiara was a client of his father? Did his dad blab about it over dinner, or leave his notes out and about, or something like that?
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Maybe he WATCHED her enter his dad's office, which is located in their home?
5297046 legal action cannot be taken but his reputation would take a major hit. if their secrets could get leaked because he can't control his son, ponies will not go to him.
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Correct.
5297056 Oh well I assumed that he would have a separate office building or at least make sure that no one else was home that would take advantage of that info (like his son who's the same age rough as one of clients for example).
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ah, okay then. I guess i need to pay more attention, or start taking notes. But as i said before, i am reluctant to start taking notes, firstly because then i would have to reread this whole thing (and oh my god would that take a long time) while taking notes and secondly because then i think i will be getting a bit to much like Twilight. It would just feel too weird to me, like i was doing a book report on an entire series of novels for fun.
5296961 ....... I read this again and I am pondering. it is starting to sound almost parallel to what happened with celestia. escaping to another world.
of course they are fortunately using the portal star swhirl invented after he realized the risks between dimensions. so at least we won't be getting my little centaur or something.
5297053 Booth options are pretty reasonable. Ponnyville is, still, kind of a small town. Anyone could have seen DT entering his father´s place.
As for why one would provoke a monster, two things: human (equine) stupidity is infinite...and the desire to destroy is not limited for any logical...even surviving logical...
Ther is the point that Stepplepaste (heheh, good one) probably think himself as above any danger, quite literally like DT though of herself before. Untouchable. Even after Piña gave him a good nap, this only reforced this feeling, since, fron the on, she was told to not do it again, thus giving the false feeling to him that he was immune to any other attacks from her.
TL;DR: equine stupidity.
Sometimes, doing nothing but looking especially innocent when you're expected to to something ambivalent is enough to drive the responsibles crazy.
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The only way to be Chaotic in a world of Chaos is to be something unlike Chaos, i.e. Order. it's why chaos can't exist forever, eventually it will change and become orderly, at which point it loses its power to be chaotic until outside chaos acts on it.
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Simple, really. Insult his father to his face. Anger does amusing things to children.
"Your dad isn't that great. Can he take on a thousand Griffons at once? Can he blanket entire continents in freezing winter? Can he give up what little he has, so that others might have more? My dad can. And just as your dad is nothing, so are you."
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You say it's amusing to manipulate a child into attacking a trained killer? While I am fully behind the idea that all such bullies require their asses beat, such as Diamond got with the bees, that's a bit morbid - sort of like daring a kid to play in a rusty bear trap.
"Rumble shouted as he punched Steeplechase in snoot"
Missing "the" between "in" and "snoot".
Fixing typos with damaged fingers feels like wing slaps, doesn't it?