How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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Oh Bon-Bon.... X3
Everytime some pony cuddles Sentinel I imagine him saying "stop! I am the night!"
The he's should be she's.
This is driving me crazy. No, really, you have no idea.
This fic is great, this is definitive, but, sure, if you can set the emotional bound and make a logical read you´ll find mistakes. Nobody is perfect. Last week i learned the Riders of the Lost Ark, one of the most amazing movies EVER ( ) has a small problem: Indiana Jones is irrelevant for the movie. That simple, take Jones out and everything will end the same way.
Damn you The Big Bang Theory !!!!!!!!
Anyways, what i want to say is, there are minos mistakes (i can´t point out then, due to how emotionally bound i´m to this story, but they are thee, it´s simple the human nature) but, then, when i start to think that i should write a comment to tyou ´bout something you should work better...BANG ! You do a chapter and solves it !!! I complained ´bout Pinat...i mean, Piña being a Dinky´s shadow...you go and make a diabetus-level of cuteness chapter ´bout Piña that gives her a hell of a development. Actually a chapter and a half.
Then i was starting to think that this all "lesbian-couple in a herd" thing seems nice and all, but not very reasonable, since they seems as different herds, not really integrated, and if they want to bound, how that would happen, with all the love/sex thing and...BANG !!! Look, a chapter that not only solves (well, start to solve, clearly there is a lot of work to do yet) but, at the same time, makes everything beautiful !!!!
And, as bonus, now we are in the final countdown for Rising Star´s/Sparkle Supersaiyajin training.
Really, how do you manage to do that !? And how this fic don´t have 1.000 upvotes still !??
Feeling or ecstasy, not both.
Yay, magic grenades! Can I test them out?
4765067 actually I think he meant Bucky's usual spot
4765067 no it's right because it's from bucky's point of view
4764978 im not adorible i am fearsome and scary
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It can be both if there is an 'of' Between them
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And his parents are dead.
I am the night!
I can't wait for all of you to read about what happens when he meets Luna for the first time.
4765362 luna "OH YOU ARE JUST ADORABLE"
"NO! i am ferocious and deadly,"
"awwww look celly! look at his cute eyes"
How true...
Not sure if it's possible in your cannon, but it would be awesome if Bucky could make a spell jar that replicates a frag grenade.
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A frag is pretty tame compared to say, trapping a spell that fuses multiple hydrogen atoms together when the glass breaks.
Not that he would do that. Just that he could. Unicorn bravery and all that.
I am actually thinking about a mass teleportation field spell in a globe.
Tossing that in would cause teleportation bubbles. Randomly. Who knows what limbs and or body parts would be sheered off by random bubble bursts.
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I think a hydrogen bomb is a bit overkill for this. I was thinking that shrapnel would be a more effective against flesh than fire and lightning. Or given that shadow wolves are vulnerable to light, overpowered flashbangs would work well. Teleportation fields would be cool, of course then the question is where it's being transported to. That'd ruin someone's day. I'm not sure if you ever mentioned how big the spell jars are, but do you have any plans of making oversized ones considering they are going to be launched from a 40 foot shop by type 3 unicorns.
You know, Lyra, even if you prefer females it does not mean you are not bi........
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There are reasons, even if Lyra doesn't remember the reasons.
You do remember that Lyra disappeared for a while don't you? And was suddenly found again in Ponyville?
FORESHADOWING!
4766849 oh I am sure there are reasons..... it doesn't mean I wouldn't whisper ideas in her ear if given a chance.
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Nope, sour cream. Google it.
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A portal storm. That sounds terrifying...
Now I really can't wait to see the fight. ...
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It actually caught me up too, and had to read it twice, but it's correct.
4765069 and here I am dumbly chuckling at the thought of those 2 becoming super saiyans
Wait, I thought she summoned sun stones? Berry mentioned this previously I think... Or rather, was corrected by Sparkler.
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Nope, it was normal gemstones. Bucky just made them into Sunstones.
Ignorence is bliss. Innocence, once lost, will never be found
I'm actually hoping for some Lyra and Bucky to happen :|
Don't hate on me, I just want to see it happen, I SHIP IT!
Nice job!
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like a baby tiger
Those are fun to play with
Big cat reserve in Colorado, there is a chance you can play with a few... its a really good program, non-profit, they take really good care of the animals, and if you come at the right time with $25, you can maybe get a 5 minute play session with a baby tiger. Take as many pictures as you want too.
I feel kinda weird commenting on a chapter this old, but I found a typo:
Pretty sure that either 'Thistle' should be 'Bucky', or his should be her.
As a boy on the cusp of manhood, I am experiencing something similar to sparkler here but I have come the the conclusion that it changes nothing, and that adults are nothing more than big children that are floundering through life. That being a grownup isn't really as life changing as it is made out to be, and the only real change is that you are responsible for your own fiances. I feel that the idea that you loose something precious or significant when you grow up is flawed logic. one can still be a big child as an adult, and be no worse for wear, or at least that is what I have come to believe.
edit: I also feel the need to add that I think the big change in life is not the transition from child to adult, but from adult to parent.
“You cannot unring a bell.”
I use this quote a lot.
His should be her