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Why...Why did you do that, Lyra...
Should be loose. Also:
Run Bucky!
Kudzu used "New Chapter".
It was supper effective.
You try to block with "Work Needs to be Done".
You fail miserably.
Your boss "Scowls" at you. You "Fail to Give a Shit".
Proceed into new chapter...
This was a good chapter.
Also, poor Sentinel. He's learnings too fast, but things he needs to know.
BWAHAHAHA! Trollestia strikes! And Bucky is gonna get the worse of it.
Also, poor Sentinel. That is one way to kill a boner.
Bucky, I'm disappointed with you. Sacrificing your son to the sun alicorn, so that you may get away safely.
Tsk, tsk.
Edit: wait. it says right there Bucky runs too. Nevermind.
kinda spooked me when you said you were seeing stars and had trouble breathing there..... then I remember I was chuckling during and story and realized you meant you were laughing as you wrote it.......
5151008 I´m starting to think that half of kudzu´s health problems come from this story.
Jesus twilight... Is the concept of sex foreign to you or something?
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- Sex sounds boring. I read about it in a book, I don't see what the big appeal is. It is messy, gross, and requires a lot of embarrassing physical contact.
5151021 Someone needs a life changing orgasm. Berry !!! We need you help here !!!!
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*facehoof*
*double facehoof*
*facedesk*
Oh my... This... This is actually pretty bad
Ah, yes. Post-party depression. Well, Celestia knows a cure for that, and it's best delivered at 122 dB (+/- 2.)
For a moment I thought that Twilight might try to matchmake Flash and Dash, because there isn't enough romcom screwiness in that relationship quite yet. I'm glad to see she isn't, but I'm saddened by her making assumptions based on insufficient data. Well, there's plenty of time to resolve the myriad misunderstandings there.
And, of course, Sentinel's sexual awakening continues, much to his mothers' horror. Thank goodness none of them know about the shower revelation. Not yet, anyway.
Looking forward to more.
5151047 We all know what gonna happen in a future Lost chapter, right ?
Think in Loch...now add alicorn level sensitivity. Now increase effectiveness due to the fact that Trollest...i mean, Celestia will, no doubt, give some, err, advice to Flash and Rainbow. And Berry too. And Loch.
...oh gosh, i think i discovered how The Chase will end. With an atomic orgasm from a alicorn.
Well that was a fun read.
I was worried when I read the Author's Note, then I realized it was because you were laughing xD
With Moonbow gone for the foreseeable future, Sentinel needs another lunar pegasus in his life to teach him how to be a lunar pegasus.
Dear lord... my sides hurt... that was too much Kudz, you showed us a new side of Celestia... and i love it
Run Forest Bucky, RUN!!!
Run you foals!
Farn it Twilight, Gender and Sexulaity are not intertwined!
Granted, this isn't something very researched in setting, but... ugh.
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How would Twilight know this?
5151021 ........................thats kinda my train of thought :/
Oops
I was giggling like an idiot this entire chapter. Great work, hope you get to feeling better.
Your writing output is incredible. As of today:
You have been publishing The Chase for 175 days (April 25 - Oct 17), with an average of 4184.6 words published per day.
At this rate you will hit 1 million words around December 20th (64 days).
I wonder how many, if any, people read it slower than you write it?
Keep up the great work! This is a fantastic story.
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Replace intercourse with raspberries.
I am an idiot full of The Giggles.
Celestia best raspberry princess.
Celestia will have her revenge!
5151021 Please don't tell me that Twi is going to be reading a book about "How to achieve an incredible orgasm" in the middle of having sex. I can just see it now...
Flash, I don't think you're doing it right. roundstable.com/forums/images/smilies/mlp_rolleyes.png
What...*ungh*...w-why are you...*ahh*...even reading that?!
Well, excuse me for wanting to optimize the potency of my orgasm!
Twilight...I-I don't think I can hold it much lon--
Huh. Is that it? No wonder they call you Flash...
5151822 MWHAUHAUHAUHAUAHUAHAUAHUAHUAHAUHAUAHUAHAUHAUA...dies*
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Source?
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Welcome to the comment section. Have fun!
Watch out, some commenters are a bit...
I've been wondering when you would drop in from Rage Reviews and hang out in the asylum. Would you like a coat?
5152132 Hello!
So you were expecting me? That's new.
SUPER LIKE HA the fun is only beginning
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Contrary to whatever is being said, I do usually try and be as polite as possible until I am provoked into a position where my mostly cheerful demeanour fails. I want to you to feel welcome here. Feel free to ask questions of any of the long time readers. (And short time readers!) There is also a Chase group that can be found on the right and forums. if you want to collect info or shoot the breeze with long time readers, I do hope they will be willing to help you or speak with you. I try to respond to these comments here on the story and I remain very active in my correspondence with my readers, which is something I take very seriously. If you have a question or are confused about something, I do try to respond rapidly to inquiries made here.
I don't get much sleep so I stay very active here, and can be found night and day responding to posts.
I really am glad you dropped by.
This. Was. Adorable...
"Run Sentinel, this foe is beyond the both of us!"
I see what you did there.........
Poor Twilight, her friends and Flash are probably gonna have to pull a Princess Platnium on her before she finally gets a clue.
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Like me!
Very few authors do this after becoming popular on here.
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I am only popular because my readers make me popular. I try to actively engage them as often as possible, hence the online Q&A sessions every few days.
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Some people don't seem to understand this concept. I'm glad you're not one of them.
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I think, and I can't say for certain, I really hope that somebody will come along and say one way or the other, but with all of the Q&A sessions, blog posts about upcoming arcs and seeking input and opinions, as well as all of the various fan interaction that shapes how the story flows, I think quite a number of readers feel invested in the story because they've had an impact upon it, or had some small say or some feeling of influence on the body of work.
I don't want people to feel excluded from creative process. I've been very open about the who, what, when, where, and why so far.
I think if I was to suddenly cut people out of the creative loop, the story would wither and die... I think. I dunno. Maybe?
Or I might be totally wrong. I dunno... I hope others will chime in on this issue and have something to say about it because I feel funny sticking this out here like this.
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Huh. I never thought of it that way. You might be right about that.
Omg can't breath that last part omg your evil I'm laughing so hard best scene ever
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nukes
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When people send me messages demanding that I kill such and such a character or have Sentinel shag his sisters, I tend to block those people and ignore them... which leads to many accusations that I can't take criticism. People get angry when I refuse to even listen to those kinds of suggestions. But I am quite open to plausible suggestions within the story and realistic input on things the characters would actually do within their scope of character.
It is a difficult process.
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Sadly, I've met quite a few people like that during my time here.
You know, it always bothers me that you cannot label a story like this as BOTH Slice of Life and Adventure. Although to my eyes, this story is more of "Adventure" than "Slice of Life"
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It bothers me too. Because this is an adventuresome slice of life. Each day of life is an adventure. Equestria is a dangerous place. Well, it can be.
Wait till you see the ruins of Las Pegasus. There's your slice of life... urban warfare between Nightmare Troops and raiders.