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Sparkler can petrify things. Something that alicorns can't do.
And she's only a humble type three.
The only thing I trust about these cities is the sweet, sweet smell of pollution.
That, and I have a niggling feeling that Tannis and Co. are in league with Fleshrender and have rendered Tanner unable to meet with Bucky and Twilight.
The bit between Flutters and Goshawk could have been an act to keep up the masquerade long enough to lull everyone into a false sense of security.
It's what I'd do.
There's only one griffon I trust right now, and that is Lugus.
My personal opinion? Take all the cubs away, then tell the adults exactly what's going on. If they still refuse aid, burn the cities to the ground.
5192619 Ooooh, well done you! Now how about commenting on the damn story instead of something that doesn't actually matter, and is in fact a bannable offence?
2 chapters at once
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Fluttershy is quite content around predators. Remember Barry the bear?
Of all the ponies, Fluttershy is probably the one who understands those who aren't exactly ponies the best. She understands their nature and accepts it as being a part of who and what they are. If anything, it makes her less shy to be around them than it is to be around her peers.
She's a borderline druid, if you think about it. All things in nature have its place and she loves them all equally.
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Yes. And this becomes very important later.
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yeah, i had just finished the previous chapter when i saw this went up.
On the topic of saving the griffins, I wonder if Sparkler and Rising would be able to help clean up some of the pollution, specifically the heavy metals and other impurities in the soil. Maybe Thistle could do something for the water? Without some serious deep magic power backing it I don't see it being a largescale solution, but perhaps on a smaller scale those two could help detox some of the griffins if they have time.
If the ponies can't find some way to decontaminate Huginn and Munnin, the whole area may have to be abandoned, which would suck, as Equestria can't handle anymore refugees for quite a while.
5192647 Hahahaha! I'm just seeing how much a stupid meme it is by looking at the dislikes. I hate it when people who are nobodies; like me, try to seem like they are more important for being first, 100, 1000th, etc.
I absolutely enjoyed this chapter, by the way. To see Fluttershy and Goshawk talking like that, as well as she being instantly comfortable enough to speak to Flutters about her being the mother, shows that Fluttershy is probably going to play a massive role in this arc. Plus, the others view on her and how understanding they were and I was...well...It was just perfectly written.
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The three seconds of canon animation that suggests that Fluttershy understands the circle of life better than most ponies.
I have to keep pointing this out, sorry. I always cringe when seeing a "u" where it, universally agreed upon, shouldn't be. Just like "generosity", not "generousity".
That being said, I have been enjoying the interactions between Bucky and Lyra lately. I have a feeling there will be a point where she'll completely trust him to be more intimate with her and there will be a lost chapter with Bucky, Lyra and Bon Bon.
Being VERY socially awkward myself, i would like to point out that, for some reason, people like to talk to us...well, at least saying things, since we usually don´t offer much of an answer, since we´re too busy trying to figure out a way to just run to anywhere else where there is no people at all.
So, if any of you thing that the adorkable scene between Shy and Goshawk was a little too pushed, it is not. I´ve experienced that over and over in my younger life.
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Bucky will never stick his penis into Lyra and Bon Bon.
Just like he will never become an alicorn.
But there is totally a lost chapter coming with Bon Bon, Bucky, and Lyra.
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I know that they're off limits, but the way she's been interacting with him makes me think that eventually, there will be a discussion between him and all of his wives about that.
Wasn't it touched upon back during the isles arc that there'd be a possibility of artificial insemination?
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Yes. That is planned.
But hot sex is also planned with Bucky, Bon Bon, and Lyra, even though they are lesbians.
The lost chapter is going to be awesome, and will be taking place not too longer after the Griffon Diplomacy arc ends.
Nature, red of tooth and claw.
Hmmm. Fluttershy as Draconequus/Alicorn of nature.
The Harmony as shown on the show is Classical and 1950s Adult Contemporary. Flutters may wind up as World Folk Jazz. Harmonic Chaos, as it were.
"Um, I am Nature. I'm sorry if you were expecting me to be vicious; I can be, but there are so MANY more timid creatures in Nature."
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5192750 yay quiet people!
quiet people do often let ourselves become sounding boards for other people's cares and frustrations while we try to either continue what we were doing or excuse ourselves from the situation without being overtly rude.
So when can we expect to see Bucky go all Inego Montoya on whomever harmed Lyra?
"Hello. My name is Buckminister Bitters. You harmed my mare. Prepare to suffer."
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As there should be.
Goshawk is the mom?!?
What-the-what?
Fleshrender is a dirtbag...
Oh, Fluttershy is nice too.
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I get the feeling that she thinks of them at least partly like animals. She can understand animal speech as it is, so it wouldn't be that big of a leap for her to consider the others to be like her animal friends. It'd allow her to be more comfortable around them despite them being generally scary.
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Tongues have no gender. Totally fair play.
Also, in canon with what we discovered during the Alicorn Amulet incident. Duplication and gender-swap spells exist, otherwise Twilight wouldn't have said she couldn't cast them. So, gender-swapping should technically be a thing. ... Mare-for-a-night?
5192959 Wait-the-what !? Buck, gender swap is canon !!!!!!! Body modification (Equestria Girls) is canon !!!! How much ´till Bucky is canon too !?
Kindness isn't just forgiveness or compassion. It goes deeper than that. In order to be kind, one must first trust that another won't exploit that kindness. One must be open to new perspectives and have faith in others, and that's not always easy. But Fluttershy can't help but do so. She sees the best in everyone, and everything she does, she does to bring those qualities out where everyone can see them.
Excellent chapter. I look forward to more.
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To be fair, forgiveness and compassion isn't even kindness. That's it's own separate thing but people keep defining kindness by it. Unfortunately, Fluttershy's been like that herself in canon - at least until the Breezy episode when she learned what being kind really means.
........adctually now that I think about it, shouldn't it be pinkie and applejack most impacted? the earth ponies are linked to their environment. they envigorate it with their energy. shouldn't they also be ill in this land so toxic that even earth ponies could not help it recover?
fluttershy has characteristics related to earth ponies of course, but she simply cares and has a link to animals, not the earth itself.
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She is a pegasus. It's the air that is bothering her.
She lives among nature and the forest. She has never really had to deal with this level of pollution in the air. She doesn't have a terribly strong constitution, so it's affecting her greatly. Pinkie and Applejack as earth ponies feel what's wrong with the land, but Fluttershy is a creature of the wind, and it's the air that's making her weak and cough chronically.
5192619 15 dislikes?! Common guys, a little more love here, we gotta show the folks who think this is cool, that it is not. More dislikes this instant!
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Have a thumbs up from me... just because downvoting is silly and I don't agree with it.
5193226 Touché
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The way I see it, downvoting is totally useless and unnecessary. Here's why.
If all they had was a thumbs up button, we would still have the same end result.
If a post was liked, you would see an indication of it being liked. The thumbs up. If a post was disliked, or ignored, you could see that by the fact that nobody upvoted. It would just be "meh" and people would go on their way.
The end result is the same.
5193253 Okay...mind just got blown.
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The same reasoning applies to story votes.
5193267 Woah! Just woah...dude, they need to fix that.
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Downvoting is rather destructive. it's also a cop-out to explaining why you don't like a story. It could just be an issue of grammar and spelling making the story difficult to read. I know a pretty long and elaborate changeling story that still probably has less than a hundred likes because of the unfortunately rampant spelling and grammar errors. (based on the errors I suspect the author either is using a speech to text program, or English is not the first language) I consider myself rather fluent in typo, as well as the homophone, homograph, and spellchecker dialects, so it doesn't bother me much. But there are people *COUGHequestriadailyCOUGH* who really don't like that so the story hasn't seen a lot of attention.
Downvoting just lets people ragequit a story and vent their frustrations on an author without offering any criticisms or advice.
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Seconding that.
While Fluttershy typically bothers me with how passive aggressive she is, this chapter remindes me why I like her. I see her as being the perfect Druid in every way and I fully love the idea that she is open minded enough to not only feed her friends meat, but to try it herself. Now if she could get rid of that ridiculously over styled mane, and go more natural.
5193253 I agree with you 100%. There is no need for a down vote button. Let the up votes be the deciding factor as to whether a story has merit or not. The down button is too often abused by people who do not like a theme, a character, or who just want to be jerks rather than being used as a tool that helps determine whether a story has merit or not.
I would also like to take this opportunity to thank you for sharing this story with us all. Your breath of vision is staggering and your characters are wonderful. You tackle issues that many fear to acknowledge exist and you show that life is full of pain and sacrifice while still being beautiful. I hope that you are enjoying writing this story as much as I am reading it, because I am loving it.
A Predict an Update will happen soon. Also, We are almost at chapter 300. Serious shit is gonna happen at Chapter 300. I just know it. The Shit always happens on chapters ending in a full hundred number or in the case every a few months from now 1000. SOMETHING WILL HAPPEN!
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I just woke up. Update? Chapter? Soon? Maybe. I just woke up though. I was about to hammer out another chapter. I feel kinda rough though. Got almost two hours of sleep.
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Then get some more sleep man. Or Write another chapter. Up to you really. I only really made that post in hopes one was soon, but not really serious on that part. Was serious that I think serious shit will go down on 300 though though I may be proven wrong as well, but I don't mind.
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I'm awake now... really, I feel pretty good after 2 hours of sleep.
I don't know how to type this and not sound sarcastic. Nuts.
But I am being totally serious when I say that it helped.
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What? Is something wrong?
I just woke up, I feel confused. I don't understand what is going on here.
Woot gotta love those omega-3(s)
So nice to wake up to a new chapter!
Sounds like a great mom.
Don't tell me Flutters will get sick or something after this arc.
Rarity's trying but still sounds sarcastic.
5194062 i have to disagree. i have read stories that had far more upvotes than downvotes........ and were simply terrible. bad characterization, bad plot progression, etc. sometimes people will give something sub par a lot of upvotes if it has something they like, yet is sub par.
The classic 'calm before the storm' lol shite be going down soon bruh!
Im gonna go out on a limb and say that Bucky will be getting a visit soon from his Mistress or our favorite trio. Or that you will fuck our minds over yet again with a situation we all never thought could happen.
Instead of a *dislike* button we need a *did not like* button. If you click it, you need to select from a list of reasons like: poor grammar/spelling, mis-matched tags, etcetera.
This way, the author can get better feedback for why people *did not like* a particular story.
Another way to look at it is this: a dislike means someone paid attention to it, it got them to feel something; you got a reaction out of them. There will always be haters, but others feel strongly about why they would dislike something. In that way, a dislike isn't necessarily a bad thing.
The *Doing Hurtful Things to your Waifu* charts are an excellent example of this. Most of those are bathed in red dislikes and downvotes.Why? Because they instill an emotional response.
So, Kudzu, those 100+ dislikes could be seen as 100+ successful reactions.